St. Rebecca's School. Upcoming story in the works

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Ok, I just want to say a bit more about a lengthy story that I've got in the works. I've done over 50 chapters on it so far, though its likely to be 60-70 chapters in total.

It focuses on a boarding school for 11-16 year olds, with just one class of 32 per year. The students are all boys, with 16 being transgendered (MtF) and the other 16 being severe troublemakers/bullies. The one half of the class are given all the means to transition from boy to girl, including surgery. The other half are at the school to learn all about respect, and are persuaded to give up their troublesome ways - by being subjected to various forms of feminisation. There is always a chance that some may come to like being dressed as a girl, and may take the path that the other half of the class are taking.

The story focuses on one class mainly, and one student in particular. It follows them through their 5 year tenure at the school, as the teachers seek to make them all into respectable students.

There is one slight sci-fi element (that might be possible in the future) which involves the girl half of the class.

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Finish Before You Post

Sounds interesting.

Please finish before you start posting.

Forced Fem stories tend to bring out the worst in this site.

I wonder how many FF stories have been abandoned due to discouraging words. If not abandoned, perhaps the course of the story was modified.

Good luck.

Angela Rasch (Jill M I)

The forced fem is just a

The forced fem is just a means of punishment for these bullies, and also a means to make them get a dose of their own medicine. Its merely cross-dressing.

Still can be a trigger issue for many.

The story WILL find an audience here -- there are plenty here who do enjoy forced femme -- just be prepared for the possibility of negative comments from many people too. Make sure that your story is clearly marked in its tags that forced femme is an element.

BC's community is quite different in terms of story focus than a lot of other TG sites, so elements that do well places like Fictionmania -- sissies, forced femme, cuckolding -- will get a lukewarm to negative reception here more often than not. A lot of people here suffer from bad experiences where gender presentation WAS forced on them as a punishment, though in very much the opposite direction from forced femme, and regardless of what a writer tries to use to justify the treatment in their stories, it'll be a hard sell.

All types of stories and (most) types of content are welcome here, including what you want to put in yours. So long as you're aware of the backlash you could get from some of the site's more vocal commenters.

Melanie E.

tough love

In some cases a bully needs to be put in line.
Because suspending them in school only works 5% of the time. Where FF has the possibly of working 99% of the time.

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Any form of punishment has the possibility of working

though I'm amused by your 99% figure and would be interested to know where that comes from.

Actually, scratch that. I wouldn't. I really, really wouldn't.

I'm trying to think of a non-extreme example to use as a comparison here to explain....

Okay. You've suffered emotional abuse all your life. Do you want to spend your time about other people being emotionally abused, and that supposedly being what they deserve? You've fought your entire life to be treated as an equal by people who look down on you: do you want to revel in the act of treating others the same way? You've slaved away for years dealing with narrow-minded peoples hurting and hindering you or telling you your feelings are wrong: do you then decide to take enjoyment in the act of doing the exact same thing to someone else?

For most of the audience HERE, the answer to those questions would be "no."

Melanie E.

Bullying is a crime that is too often underpunished

The bullies in my story are guilty of being bullies in general: sadistic, arrogant little sods, with inflated egos and no sense of remorse. The only true way to make them change their tune and reform, is to give them a real good dose of their own medicine - by subjecting them to everything they like to dish out. They need to understand that what they do is damaging. Their victims can be left with mental scars that may never go away.

I know, because I was a magnet for such cruel creatures for my entire school life. To say that a victim would wish to hurt their tormentors, is mostly true. But to enjoy it? To do that, is to become one of them. To stop them, you need to make them understand what they are doing, and for some, you need to be hard. You have to hurt them.

That's not punishment -- that's vengeance.

Which changes the nature of what you're doing entirely. Hurting someone is not the same as punishing them, though the two are often used in conjunction, and there is a lot of truth in the common wisdom that bullies usually lash out like they do because they themselves are hurting.

Punishment does not have to be outright cruelty.

Relating back to the core nature of the original blog: people here at BCTS tend to view forced femme like this quite differently than the communities at other sites that have t-fic, so expect a different kind of reception for your story's plot than you would at, say, FM or ASSTR.

Melanie E.

but wouldn't that also leave

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but wouldn't that also leave the bully with mental scars? I never understood why it's 'okay' to bully a bully. This coming from someone who was bullied, a lot, myself.

Trans Bulling

Bullies really need to be put in line and with FF it just might make them see the light. It would help if you do another story of a female school like this one

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