punishment that didn't work?

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So, a common storyline is that a male does something to upset a female member of the family so they're punished by being feminized and eventually comes to love it. Is there are any stories out here however which change this in some fashion? Maybe the boy becomes a girl but on their own terms or maybe the punishment doesn't work or something else? I"m just looking for something new and different.

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Hypatia Littlewings's picture

I would say if they come to like it then the punishment hasn't worked, at least as a punishment, it may how ever have solved the initial problem!

*giggles*

Sorry I could not resist!
~Hypatia >i< ..:::

PS. Yes, good question, some different angles could be fun!

There Was A Story

littlerocksilver's picture

... on FM years ago about an evil sister who decided to feminize her brother who had MS. I think it was so she could get an inheritance. She hires a Dom to force fem him; however, he says BS, I'm not putting up with this shit. He and the Dom fall in love, marry, and she keeps the dom issue away from their relationship. His MS goes into complete remission, and the sister ends up getting nothing. Thoroughly enjoyable, but I can't tell you the name of it.

Portia

Ideas

Daphne Xu's picture

I do have ideas. But I'm saving them for myself. :-P

Don't care to start a flame war either.

-- Daphne Xu

There is a series of stories

Sammi's picture

Although I cant remember the title or author.
About a boy that for some reason is sent to stay with his aunt over the summer.
His aunt proceeds to punish him for something on old lover of hers did.
She hides his clothes, replaces with similar girls clothes
He goes to play B-Ball with friends dressed in the clothes, and so on
He is comfortable with himself and it doesn't bother him as they are just clothes.
Throughout the series of stories all the lives he touches he enriches
and the punishment ends up being one for the aunt as she begins to learn about her siblings child and that she was wrong.


"REMEMBER, No matter where you go, There you are."

Sammi xxx

There are a few

that play with the idea. Sigh's story "Slacker" does this, turning things a bit on their head (though it was never finished,) and I've seen more than one story where a character was femmed as punishment -- either supposedly justifiably or entirely not so -- and managed to find a way to turn the punishment back on their punisher in the end, though no examples immediately spring to mind.

Honestly, if there's anything forced about the change it's usually enough to drive me away from a story before I ever see what goes on later on.

Melanie E.

Ten years or so back, there

Ten years or so back, there were a lot stories that had the forced girl extract revenge, one way or another.
I can't recall any titles or author names, though.

"Punishment" as a way to come out

I've read a few stories where the main character was "punished" by being dressed up as a girl, but at the end it is revealed that the person administering the punishment knew that the main character wanted to be a girl but wasn't willing to admit it. I don't remember the names, but in one the (teen-age) boy runs into his sister who is carrying laundry and knocks her over and that is the pretext. In another, a pre-teen boy's sisters are having a slumber party with the parents away and he deliberately annoys them to get his sister to carry out her threat to dress him as a girl.

To get away from TG stories:

My experience as a child and as a parent is that punishment doesn't really work. I was punished frequently as a child, but when I did or didn't do things that would get me punished, it was because I couldn't help it -- I was a child, DUH!! The daily messages that I was bad and must want to be bad hurt far worse than the punishments and screwed me up in ways I'm still trying to recover from 50 years later. As for my children -- I tried punishment (the modern buzzword is "consequences") occasionally, but I discovered that simply arranging things to keep them from doing the wrong thing and to get them to choose to do the right thing was far more effective and, frankly, a lot easier on me. Oh, and I picked my battles. "Patience, persistence, and pick-your-battles" was my mantra. I mean, is getting your 6-year-old to eat Brussel Sprouts the hill you want to die on?

Found the stories

The two stories I was thinking of were both by "Mona Lisa":
The Punishment and How Kelly Met Lisa

Story Idea

Piper's picture

I had a story idea once where a Brother and Sister (twins) manage to convince their mother to forcibly feminize the Brother/Son but the truth is the Brother/Son wants it done but is to scared to admit it to his mother.

Not sure it would go over well in today's climate, and I rarely have actual time to write these days.

-Piper


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Womanless beauty pageant

As an example.
Protagonist is initially forced into fem. Nasty friend of wife and wife sre playing mind games for different reasons but in the end... You just need to read it :-)
It is right here on BCTS.
There are loads of stories in this vein on FM. But as forced fem is not exactly my cup of tea, can't give you any names for the stories.
But FM has quite good search system where you can combine tags with keywords, so good luck!

Backfiring Punishment

Daphne Xu's picture

How about a punishment that backfires tragically, causing Mom or Dad to bawl in agonizing grief. Child disappears never to be seen again, or perhaps commits suicide. Maybe unintended consequences explode, making the original offense insignificant.

-- Daphne Xu