Phoenix

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Well, my Phoenix story is up. Its nearly 30,000 words long, almost three times as long as anything I have ever written. I hope people like it (and are not shy about saying so)

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Terrific start, interesting take on metas

This looks like a keeper.

Like how there are other metas with the opposite *trauma* to what Jean sufffered and how they are adapting/handling it. The govt *mom* is a good egg.

Look forward to read the rest of the tale.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

Just read the story, and I

Just read the story, and I like it. But John is right, parts of the story are missing. Just after Scott got home from the testing the story 'jumped' to the dance, then jumped again... very confusing.

Some days you're the pigeon, some days you're the statue

Sorry, didn't mean to upset anyone

I have had my share of posting errors myself. Forgot to engage my brain before posting my comments and for that I do apologize.

Hope you can fix the post as the story so far is terrific and an interesting take on the whole meta and meta's changing sexes. Another case where what was in the mind affected what they became when the powers manifested. Interesting that.

I look forward to reading the completed story.

Very good tale.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

post fixed

my bad folks. fixed, I hope.

"Treat everyone you meet as though they had a sign on them that said "Fragile, under construction"

dorothycolleen

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