Its a little shorter than the others but not by much. I just happened to hit the perfect stop and decided to leave it off there. Have fun reading
Belle 4 is up
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Submitted by tels on Sun, 2012/09/09 - 9:55am
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Thank you Tels.....
MUNCH MUNCH MUNCH....... (Hugs) Taarpa
woot one positive comment
thanks much unfortantly the comments on the story itself so far are a little negative. But dont worry there is a reason which will be revealed in the next chapter.
I do like the story, but it's
I do like the story, but it's just frustrating that nothing is working in Bill's favor :--).
I might not always comment, but I do always leave a kudo ^^
grtz & hugs,
Sarah xxx
well
One trend I have noticed is people jumping all over the chars of my stories as if they are real life people. I find it strange when it's just fiction.
It's Just Fiction...
Don't find it strange. It means people care about your characters and empathize/sympathize with them. Take it as a compliment. :P
I do like the story. Leaving Bill in the bathroom with only a uniform from an elite girl's school is a bit suspicious, though. I smell a setup. What the hell is mom thinking?
Lisa
(Guess I should have posted the second part in story comments, not here. Oh well.)
Belle 4 is up
Bill/Belle is suffering the Drew/Gaby misadventure in a slightly different way. http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/book/589/gaby
May Your Light Forever Shine
gaby
read gaby a few times book 1 to book 4 book 5 turns me off totally.
Belle 4... or do you mean 4 bells ?
Which I think is a duty shift on a ship at sea?
Guess I better read it before you -- GULP -- post again.
You realize, tel, you are a serial poster?
John in Wauwatosa
It's a good story a bit crazy in parts
Like I said good story an a bit crazy in parts and this latest turn of events is a lil suspicious. As for what ya said about the gaby saga tels ya in book 5 it gets a bit weird theres parts that don't exactly match up. but once ya get on to book 6 up to the current chap of book 9 it's pretty darn good.
Yay.
I'm diggin it. *munch munch munch*
Upon my liar's chair
Full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair