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Another BigCloset TopShelf story, and my first ever completed TG tale. Jack's early-morning trip to the supermarket winds up a textbook example of why there truly is "no such thing as a free lunch." A cautionary tale about not being able to read the fine print in a verbal contract, and the dangers of a free demon-stration...
No Obligation
Admin Note: Originally published on BigCloset TopShelf on Friday 08-14-2005 at 6:55 pm, this retro classic was pulled out of the closet, and re-presented for our newer readers. ~Sephrena
Wow!
I just got chapter this chapter. I had to go back 4 chapters to get back up to speed, but it was worth it. This is such a great story.
Excellent characters, intense plot, and, even if the events are not possible, the way you have written them makes it seem more than plausible.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Wonderful Story!
I loved this story when Randalynn first posted it, and I'm pleased to see it get the opportunity to attract new readers to it's spunky heroine. I'd love to see another story continuing this, I didn't get enough first time around.
Karen J.
"Being a girl is wonderful and to torture someone into that would be like the exact opposite of what it's like. I don’t know how anyone could act that way." College Girl - poetheather
Karen J.
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I contend that for a nation to try to tax itself into prosperity is like a man standing in a bucket and trying to lift himself up by the handle. - Winston Churchill
A must read!
If you like emotional storytelling with fantasy, real characters, sex changes, noble heroes and villains, and LOTS of heart...then this is a story worth your time!
Hugs
19 parts, it will take a while but what a ride!
Read this story if you have not, it is a real gem and as excellent as the first part is it gets way better as it goes on.
Romantic, magic, redemption, punshment, silly fun, serious teary eyed stuff, good vs evil, power vs power, talking walking stuffed toys, anchient goddesses and mythical beings, even wonderously baaaad referencs to Buffy the Vampire Slayer ...
Loads of stuff for all AND magical sex and age changes so what more could you want?
Maybe more of Randalynn's fine writing but I'll wait.
John in Wauwatosa
P.S. I finally got off my butt and sent my long delayed Timeout 4 Chapter 12 to Itinerant to proof/edit. It may take a while but it's in the pipeline at last. You have been warned.
Send yout prayers Itinerant's way as this is a humongous chapter by my standards and sure to induce braaaaaain damage.
Oldy but Goody: No Obligatin
This story "No Obligation" is a very good, riveting and captivating read! And it explores a lot of ethics in a very entertaining and fun way.
Randalynn, thank you for such a wonderfull story. Sephrena has done us all a very great service pulling this retro classic out of the closet. Hopefully, with this comment I can help direct a few more readers -- and kudos -- your way.
Jessica
P.S. Randalynn, you might want to consider changing the status tag from "Ongoing" to "Completed".
Interestingly enough
There was a comment on this story a few days ago, and I put it in my "To read" folder. And now everyone else can enjoy it!
Okay, okay, I still haven't gotten around to reading it as a whole. But I did read the last chapter aftermath (sorta) and will share a line with you (loosely quoted):
"He had a usual problem of all teenagers - he considered himself Heaven-sent." It made me laugh.
Faraway
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
No Obligation 8
Yoour story only gets better Randalynn.
I really love your story. I hope to see more.