Ultimate Writer's Challenge: Melanie Ezell

Entries for the Ultimate Writer's Challenge, 2011

My entries for MELANIE EZELL'S BIG CLOSET ULTIMATE WRITER'S CHALLENGE. A contest of 65 stories, 52 weekly, 12 monthly and one for the whole year.

The Kiss Off

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THE KISS OFF
by Laika Pupkino
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Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge (Week #7: Burning Bridges)

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"Blood is thicker than water except when it isn't."
~Chuck Palahnuik

Miss Perfect Part 5

Miss Perfect Part Five

By Stanman63
Thanks To JennaFL For Proofing And Nora Adrienne for editing!

Synopsis: When the mother of a talented boy who wants to be a girl learns that a talent contests winner will receive free SRS to become a woman, she signs up her son.

Miss Perfect Part 4

Miss Perfect Part Four
The Serial: Part Four
By Stanman63

Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge

Thanks To Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge For Inspiration

SynopsisI am now the girl that I am a girl .I always wanted to be

Miss Perfect Part 2

Miss Perfect Part Two
The Serial: Part Two
By Stanman63

Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge

Thanks To Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge For Inspiration

SynopsisI am now the girl that I am a girl .I always wanted to be

Miss Perfect Part 1

Miss Perfect Part One
The Serial: Part One
By Stanman63
Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge

Thanks To Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge For Inspiration

SynopsisI am now the girl that I am a girl .I always wanted to be

Hereditary Traits

Hereditary Traits

By Stanman63

Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge

Thanks To Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge For Inspiration!

SynopsisI am now who I always wanted to be, thanks to my twin.

A Switch In Time

A Switch In Time
By Stanman63
Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge
Thanks To Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge For Inspiration!
SynopsisI am now who I always wanted to be, thanks to science.

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Reunion Resolution - (Part 1)

Reunion Resolution (Part 1)
By ashes

Walter's 10 year high school reunion is going to be later this year, and he wants to lose weight, He resolves to do it by any means necessary, and when his methods don't work his friend's wife has a suggestion. Little does he know she also has an agenda.

Walking a Mall in Someone Else's Shoes (Part 1)

Walking a Mall in Someone Else's Shoes (Part 1/3(?))
By ashes

When Tommy opens his big mouth in front of two female friends, he ends up biting off more than he can chew.
The CAUTION is for some strong/offensive language in the beginning as well as what could best be described as attempted rape. I tried to keep it whimsical, but it's still there so you should be warned.

Toymaker

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Toymaker

by Maeryn Lamonte

Caution with this one – Hopefully the picture will give you some clues that it's not entirely wholesome in places. This one's a little bit horror. It's also more science fantasy than science fiction, so please don't get on my case about how impossible it all is.

Todd Rains has just arrived on a frontier world, looking for a place he can breath without being told when and where he's allowed to, but there's something a little off with this world. Is it the paradise he's been looking for or has he jumped out of the frying pan into a very hot fire?

Mute

Mute
By Stanman63
Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge
Thanks To Melanie Ezell's Big Closet Ultimate Writer's Challenge For Inspiration!
SynopsisI am now who I always wanted to be, thanks to science.

Warming Up

Warming Up
By ashes

It's a big day for Tanya, this is her preparation.

Be Careful What You Switch For

Be Careful What You Switch For
By ashes

James and Jane are fraternal twins, but James wishes they were identical. He's about to get his wish for one night only as he takes Jane's place at a frat party. Sometimes wishes come true.

The Reckoning


The Reckoning...
for Cindy


This story is a sequel to The Reunion and The Encounter

The Diary


The Diary
by Andrea Lena DiMaggio

The Registry- part 5

The Registry ...part 5 by Allexcited69
This is a work of fiction that deals with a simple future. In it, most people, if they were numbers, were now simple people with simple ideas and very simple needs. Harsh language is used and this story includes descriptions of sexual behaviour that may be considered disturbing to some. All names have been changed and all venues are made up.

The Encounter


The Encounter


This story is a sequel to The Reunion

Harrelson's Custom-Fit Boots: A Miss-Matched Pair

Harrelson's Custom-Fit Boots
A Miss-Matched Pair

Although Henry Harrelson may always perfectly match the customer to the boot, the delivery can still go amiss. However, due to his long experience in the business, he knows that such problems have their own ways of working out.

The registry - part 4

The Registry ...part 4 by Allexcited69

This is a work of fiction that deals with a simple future. In it, most people, if they were numbers, were now simple people with simple ideas and very simple needs. Harsh language is used and this story includes descriptions of sexual behaviour that may be considered disturbing to some.

It was now 10 am and the Sarah and her group were in the woods, not far from the road when they suddenly heard dogs. They started running away but the dogs ran faster and quickly caught up with them.

A Heavy Metal Fantasy

A drunk man stumbles into a mysterious portal after an argument with his mother. Just where has he ended up, and why is he female?

A Heavy Metal Fantasy

Part of A Year's Worth of Challenges, envisioned by Melanie E.

Week 36: Heavy Metal!

Damn!


Damn!


Three pretentious poems for free...espresso $4.75; $20.00 cover charge..don't forget to snap your fingers, baby!.


Schrödinger and me

Schrödinger and me

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – This Space Intentionally Left Blank


So this lab offers to pay me a humungous amount of cash to take part in their variation on some thought experiment. I mean what was I going to do? The whole thing was never intended to be anything more than a discussion starter, so if these guys want to throw their money, who am I to turn it down?

Don't mess with quantum physics guys, it's weird shit

Cornucopia

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Who Says What Now?...

Alone, afraid, and hunted, Chris undergoes yet another change.

The Battle for Imdeu Pax

The Battle
for Imdeu Pax
inspired by my daughter-sister, Kelly Blake

Nearnia - The Line Which Was In The Wardrobe

Nearnia - The Line Which Was In The Wardrobe

by Maeryn Lamonte

This was going to be my entry for Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – To be continued... but it was too hard to stop. Besides it's more than twice the prescribed length, so it most likely wouldn't count.


It's raining. Lucas is bored. He finds and old wardrobe and steps into it, and we all know that magical places can be found at the back of old wardrobes.

Nursery Drabble - Half a Pound of Lucy


Nursery Drabble - Half a Pound of Lucy

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Drabble Rabble

Half a pound

Half a pound of tuppenny rice,
Stick it in some old hose,
Pop them in the cups of my bra,
I'm a girl and nobody knows.

Nursery Drabble - Mary Had a Little Lie


Nursery Drabble - Mary Had a Little Lie

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Drabble Rabble

Mary had a little lie
Her body tol' the worl'
Although she was built like a guy,
beneath she was a girl

Nursery Drabble - Wee Willie


Nursery Drabble - Wee Willie

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Drabble Rabble

Wee Willie Winkie, face in a mess,
Staring in the mirror in his mother's nightdress,
Used too much makeup, feeling kind of down.
Wants to be a princess, but he looks like a clown

Nursery Drabble - Worm


Nursery Drabble - Worm

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Drabble Rabble

Nobody loves me, everybody hates me,
Think I'll get rid of my worm
Chop off my testicles, invert my scrotum,
See how it makes them all squirm

Trick of the Mind - 49 & 50

Trick of the Mind – 49 & 50

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.


She reached down and kissed me before settling back onto my chest. “I love you,” she said stroking the soft lace of my nightdress.

Could things get better than this?

Trick of the Mind - 47 & 48

Trick of the Mind – 47 & 48

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.


“The rugby club is putting on a 'Top Of The League' ball next week to celebrate our success. The guys from yesterday were wondering if you'd like to be their dates for the night. That kind of includes you and Pete, Rich... er I mean Rachael. What do you say?”

Trick of the Mind - 45 & 46

Trick of the Mind – 45 & 46

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.


“You OK?” I asked her.

“Yeah, you?”

“Better knowing we aren't lying to your folks anymore.”

“Yeah. You needn't have folded so neatly under Mum and Dad's cross-examination though.”

Trick of the Mind - 43 & 44

Trick of the Mind – 43 & 44

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.


Pastor Mike turned up for me at the appointed hour. He noticed, but didn't comment as I swept my long skirt out of the maws of the car door. It looked like I was in for a longer conversation than I'd planned.

Trick of the Mind - 41 & 42

Trick of the Mind – 41 & 42

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.


Uncle Stan calmed his nerves and collected his thoughts, before putting down his knife and fork, and looking across the table at me.

Trick of the Mind - 39 & 40

Trick of the Mind – 39 & 40

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

“Alice is fine with us helping for the moment. We were just off to the shops so we need to dash if we're going to get the bus. Is there anything you need?”

“From the shops? No I don't think so, thank-you.”

And with a wave we were away to the bus stop.

Trick of the Mind - 37 & 38

Trick of the Mind – 37 & 38

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

The courtroom scene depicted in this chapter is fictional and bear little or no resemblance to real life (as far as I'm aware).

“Sit down everyone. Alright, I've had time to review all the information and make my decisions. We are here this afternoon to pass judgement on Mr Raymond Baxter and Judge Derek Priestly in the matter relating to young Mr Richard Baxter. Would the defendants please rise.”

Father's Sweet Repose...

Father's Sweet Repose
by Andrea Lena DiMaggio

Trick of the Mind - 35 & 36

Trick of the Mind – 35 & 36

by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

The courtroom scene depicted in this chapter is fictional and bear little or no resemblance to real life (as far as I'm aware).

He stood up slowly, staring intently at a sheet of paper lying on the table in front of him. Then he approached the witness box, his expression unreadable.

“So Mr Hanson. Tell us about the last time you wore women's clothing.”

Trick of the Mind - 33 & 34

Trick of the Mind – 33 & 34
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

The courtroom scene depicted in this chapter is fictional and bear little or no resemblance to real life (as far as I'm aware).

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

“It seems we may need a longer recess. Dr Finster I will see you and your council in my chambers immediately. The rest of you, we will reconvene in two hours, at which time I will know whether or not this latest development is going to delay matters further.

The judge banged his gavel and left, followed by Dr Finster and his attorney.

Trick of the Mind - 31 & 32

Trick of the Mind - 31 & 32
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Eridnae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

I slept well again that night and in the morning was pestering the nurses and doctors about when I might actually leave. They told me that whilst this was a sure sign I was recovering there were still quite a few tests and observations they wanted to do to ensure I was going to be OK before they let me loose on the world again.

Trick of the Mind - 29 & 30

Trick of the Mind – 29 & 30
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

The hospital and courtroom scenes depicted in this chapter are fictional and bear little or no resemblance to real life (as far as I'm aware).

Warning: This chapter deals with Richard's time in the mental hospital and may be disturbing to some readers. The chapter has been printed in red and there is a short synopsis at the end to cover the basics and maintain continuity in the story should you prefer not to read the full thing.

Barely ten minutes after being locked up, the key turned again and I was led out of the cell and the courthouse, and handed up into the back of an ambulance, where I was made to lie down on the stretcher. A couple of burly male nurses sat in with me, intimidating enough to keep me in my place simply by looking at me, and we drove off for destination unknown. There was no urgency so we shuffled through the lunchtime traffic at the same frustratingly slow pace as everyone else.

Trick of the Mind - 27 & 28

Trick of the Mind – 27 & 28
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

The courtroom scene depicted in this chapter is fictional and bears little or no resemblance to genuine legal proceedings (as far as I'm aware).

Sensing something wrong I looked up to see three very grim faces looking at me from over where Mr Talbot was holding a rather official looking piece of paper.

“What’s the matter?” I asked.

Paul held up the letter in his hand. “This is I’m afraid Richard. It’s an injunction instructing me to deliver you to the county court nearest your home town, where your parents have dictated that you should undergo an assessment to ascertain the state of your mental health. The court appearance is for tomorrow at noon.”

Trick of the Mind - 25 & 26

Trick of the Mind – 25 & 26
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

“If we sort out your hair and boobs before bed time that’ll mean you have quite a bit less to do tomorrow.”

As a result, late as it was, I found myself soaking in a scented bath again and washing and conditioning my hair. After I’d dried and styled it, I allowed Jen to glue the breasts onto my chest and for the second time in my life I went to bed with breasts.

The night was filled with erotic dreams of Jenny and Rachael making out and I had to get up half way through to relieve some sexual tension.

Trick of the Mind - 23 & 24

Trick of the Mind – 23 & 24
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

We talked through my third helping of stew and Jen led me up to my room.

My bags were already unpacked.

I opened the wardrobe to find all my clothes hanging up including the dresses. I turned to the door where Jen’s Mum was looking in with a worried but reassuring look on her face.

“Your night clothes are under the pillow,” she said. “We can talk about this in the morning.”

Trick of the Mind - 21 & 22

Trick of the Mind - 21 & 22
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

It was getting late when we arrived and the yellow summer dress that had been so cool for most of the journey was beginning to feel decidedly chilly as the sun went down. I huddled up in my seat and turned away from Dad who was definitely in an uncommunicative mood. I wanted to pull the hem of my dress down as it had ridden up, but it would have brought awkward questions and I didn’t want to make things worse than they already were.

Trick of the Mind - 19 & 20

Trick of the Mind - 19 & 20
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

Dave was quiet for long while. When he finally did speak my nerves were frayed.

“OK,” he said. “For the record I am seriously not OK with this, but I won’t tell anyone. You’ve been a good mate this year and I guess I owe you for that, plus you’ve been honest with me and that can’t have been easy. You won’t mind if I don’t hang around with you anymore though, I don’t want to be anywhere near you when someone else tumbles to your little secret.” With that he dumped his mug unwashed in the kitchen and headed off to his room. I sat dejected for a while longer then as a last act of friendship washed up Dave’s mug before heading to my room.

That night I slept in the nude not wanting anything to do with girl clothes and mourned the loss of my friend.

Trick of the Mind - 17 & 18

Trick of the Mind - 17 & 18
by Maeryn Lamonte

Melanie Ezell's big closet ultimate writer's challenge – Written From The Heart

Thanks to Wren Erendae Phoenix for editing/proofing.

The evening went quickly. It felt good to be doing something normal, even if the tight skirt on the black dress made moving difficult. By the time the bar was open Dave had grasped what was needed and finished his assignment. He offered to buy me a drink down at the bar, but I cried off saying I’d had too much the previous night. He accepted that and headed off on his own while I went into my room to catch up on the work I would have started Friday night had I not been sidetracked.

That night I slept in the nude again and dreamt of Jen’s soft skin against mine.

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