The Day We Became Girls 1

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The Day We Became Girls
by LostNeo
Chapter One

My Brother Tommy and I headed over to my Girlfriends to stay the night, since my Mom was working late at the hospital. My Mom and my girlfriend's Mom are good friends and felt better having us stay over.

I was looking forward to spending the night with my Alison. She always wore leotards since she was a gymnast, and she was really cute and sweet.
I'm still not sure how I ended up with a nice girl like her. I had long hair and I was skinny, with not a lot of muscle to me. My brother, Tommy, had long hair like me too. I think he was following in my foot steps. He was only 8, and I looked out for him a lot.

We walked up to my girlfriend's place and knocked on the door. They were well off her, since her Dad was a lawyer, and her Mom was an inventor. I was always treated like part of the family when I was there. The door opened and there was Alison in a cute, black and silver leotard. I smiled at her, then she jumped into my arms and kissed me softly.ӬPhotobucket

"Ewww! :Get a room you two." Tommy said, as he shook his head.

"Still cute as always Tommy. I missed you, Nick. Do you like my Leo?" Alison asked me, with her arms still holding me close.

"Yes, I do. You look really cute in it" I smiled, then picked her up and carried her inside and sat down on the couch with her. Tommy followed us in and sat down in a chair.

Alison snuggled up with me and I was enjoying every second of it. On the TV there was a Gymnastics meet, and I idly watched it with Alison as we snuggled. Tommy started watching it too, then started getting really into it, and cheering.

"Where are your parents, Alison?" I asked her.

"Oh, Dad is in court. He won't be home for awhile, and Mom is out getting food." She said, nuzzling my neck.

Suddenly my Brother blurted out "I wish I was a pretty gymnast!"
I blinked, not knowing what to say or do.

Alison perked up and smiled at him. She said, "If you really want to Tommy, I can make it happen".

"Really? You can? I would like that so much!" then he looked at me nervously, and asked, "Is it okay if Alison makes me a girl, Nick?"

I looked at Tommy and smiled. "Yes of course." I replied. I was kind of curious as to what he would look like, myself.

Alison got up and kissed me on the cheek. "You're such a great brother." she said. Then she held out her hand to Tommy, saying, "Come with me please."

Tommy took her hand and walked with her into her room, and closed the door. I went back to watching TV. About 30 minutes went by, and I heard a girly squeal, then lots of giggling. Alison walked out of her room, followed by a cute little girl in a red leotard.ӬPhotobucket

I blinked, and looked over at the girl. I couldn't see any signs of her being a boy.

"Tommy is that really you?" I asked.

She giggled, then spoke in a cute girl's voice "Yes! Its me, and please call me Tammy! Nick, what do you think?"

"Wow!” I exclaimed. You look really cute, and I like your leo, but how?" I said, smiling at her. I still couldn't believe she was really my brother.

Tommy ran over to be and gave me a really big hug. I'd never seen him this happy before. I hugged her back, then she curled up beside me.

Alison came back over and snuggled up with me again. She looked at me and said,

"Well, you know my Mom is an inventor. She made special underwear, and a pill that lets boys look, and feel, like girls. So when Tommy said he wanted to be a pretty gymnast, I thought 'why not let him try it?' Oh, and the leotard is mine from when I was younger. She can keep it".

I looked at her, then at Tammy, trying to think what to say. "So, he really feels like a girl then? How long will it last?"

Alison smiled at me. "Don't worry. The pill's effects only last for a few hours, and the underwear comes off." Then she grinned at me like she had a plan. "I bet you would look really cute in a leotard." She said, slyly.

I blinked at her and shook my head. "You can't be seriously thinking about turning me into a girl too?"

Tammy smiled at me, then spoke up in his cute girl's voice. "Please big brother! Be my big sister for me?" he pleaded.

Alison giggled, then whispered into my ear. "Please Nick? I will make it worth your while, and I kind of want you to be my girlfriend." Then she pulled me close and kissed me deeply.

"Um okay, I guess, but I better not look silly." I shook my head. How could I say no to her?

Alison stood up and took my hand. "Don't worry, I can make you look pretty." Then she led me into her room. Tammy smiled at me as she sat on the chair.

Alison's room was a fair sized room and she had her own bath room. She led me into the bathroom and started running the tub. I looked at her, saying, "Why are you turning on the tub?"

"Well, you do need to smell pretty, and shave your arms and legs first, Nick.” She smiled at me, then put bubble bath into the water.
"You're kidding, right? And what will my Mom say when she sees I don't have any hair on my arms and legs?"

"It will be fine Nick, just trust me on this okay, please?" She hugged me close and kissed me.

"Ok Alison. I trust you. I was wondering why you wore your Leo today. I thought you didn't have practice today?" I smiled at her and rubbed her Leotard.

"I wore it for you. I know you like seeing me in them, and they're comfy to wear." She smiled, then wiggled her butt. "Now hop into the tub and shave so I can make you pretty. I'll be waiting. Here's a robe for you to put on."

She handed me a robe then left the bath room, closing the door behind her. I took off my clothes and slipped into the bubbles, sitting back in the tub. It was so relaxing. I got clean and grabbed a razor. I didn't really have a lot of hair on me to shave off, but I put some shaving cream on me and started shaving my legs, taking my time, and being careful. When I was done, I shaved my arms and chest. They felt so smooth.

"Are you almost done in there?" Alison called from her room.

"Yeah. I just got done shaving my arms. I'll be out shortly." I called back.

"Ok, but before you come out use some body wash. It will make you smell pretty, and you'll like it too."

"Um... okay, I will" I took some body wash and rubbed it on me.

She was right, it did smell good, and made my legs and body even smoother. I still couldn't believe I was going to be turned into a girl. Part of me was very curious what it would be like, and a part of me was a bit worried about what my Mom and everyone would say. I got out of the tub and dried off. I put the robe on and grabbed my clothes, then I pulled the plug and left the bathroom. Alison was sitting on her bed.

She smiled brightly as I came out. "You have nice looking legs! Please come closer." I walked over and stood in front of her. She rubbed my legs and smiled. "You're going to look so pretty. Now lift your leg up and step into this."

I looked at what she had in her hands. It looked like a very realistic vagina! I stepped into it and she slipped it up my legs and adjusted it on me.

"Did your Mom invent that?" I asked her, looking at where my penis used to be.

"Yes she did. It reacts with the pill when you take it, so you could have sex as a girl if you wanted to." Alison smiled at me and winked. Then she put black spankies on me that Gymnasts sometimes wear under their Leotards.

I just nodded and let her do what she wanted to make me pretty. She took out two very real looking breasts and put some glue on my chest, then placed the breasts on my chest and held them in place for a few minutes. She blushed as she held them on my chest, and I smiled at her. I was looking forward to this more and more. She grabbed a black sports bra and slipped it over my head adjusting it so it looked right.

"All right, you can pick out one of my leos to put on, then I'll do your hair and make up. Nick wait your not a boy any more. How does Nicole sound to you?".

"I like it Alison. Oh, don't forget about the pill" I smiled at her and looked at her Leos till I found one I liked and slipped it on. It was comfortable to wear, and I liked how it felt on me. I couldn't wait to see what I looked like. Alison then handed me a pill, sat me down, and did my hair and make-up. I took the pill and waited till she was done.

"Ok Nicole. All done. Go and look in the mirror" I giggled and ran over to the full length mirror. I was stunned at the pretty girl in the leotard smiling back at me.ӬPhotobucket

I couldn't believe the girl in the mirror was really me! I giggled even more. The pill was taking effect on me big time. I could feel my breasts moving and I was a little horny too. Alison came over and hugged me from behind, rubbing my body and playing with my breasts. I started moaning in a girls voice.

""Do you like it Nicole?" she asked me.

"Oo... my god! That feels amazing, Alison." I said in my now cute girl's voice.

Alison pulled me close and kissed me long and softly. "We'll fool around more later on, okay Nicole? Please stay like that for the rest of the night, okay? It will me so much to me".

"I will. I love the way I look and feel as a girl, and the leo is so comfy. I see why you like them now." I giggled and kissed her.

"Lets go and show your sister, Tammy, how pretty you are." Alison took my head and led me out of her room into the living room.

Tammy smiled at me when we came into the room, then got up and ran over to me, giving me a big hug. “You look so pretty, big sis, and your leo looks so cute on you." I hugged her back and smiled.

"Thanks Tammy. It's so comfy to wear."

We walked over to the couch when suddenly we heard the door open, and in walked Mrs. Conner, Alison's mom. I just stood there, looking worried.

To be continued...



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Great Start!

Great start to the story. It would really be nice if we could just take a pill and become complete females. It really starts to set up some interesting questions because Tommy was eager to become Tammy and even Nick never protested becoming Nicole. I will look forward to seeing more of this story and finding out whether the desire to be a girl is genuine on their part and just what part the pill plays in all of it. Great Job!

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First of all WELCOME to

First of all WELCOME to BC/TS. This is a very cute story, and I am waiting for what Alison's mom is going to say when she sees Nick and Tommy as Nicole and Tammy.

There are a few grammar mistakes though. There is not enough punctuation, and you have your sentences running together, as well as the dialogue. The dialogue should be on separate lines to distinguish who is talking. This part needs editing badly, but the story is cute though, and would be easier reading if it were edited properly. There are many here at BC/TS that will help you, including me if you wish.

I am so looking forward to reading more, but in proper grammar.

"With confidence and forbearance, we will have the strength to move forward."

Love & hugs,
Barbara

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

"With confidence and forbearance, we will have the strength to move forward."

Love & hugs,
Barbara

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Yes, welcome to BC

I agree with Barb, but I have to say it was a nice, cute little tale for your first turn at writing rather than reading.

Yes, you could have used another three-hundred or so periods, commas, and maybe an umlaut but do not let what I say get you down.

The story, the plot you were trying to convey, was teased out of the text with relative ease. The story moved forward well enough, the characters seemed more human and less like Russian female Olympic athletes of the 1980's. Robotic that is...

Good job.


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Editing

I'm guessing, by comparing what I see of the story and Barbara's comment, that some editing has already taken place (most of the dialogue is now on seperate lines). The only criticisms I really have are that some of the dialogue could do with a few more commas, and there should be a space between the full stop at the end of each sentence and the capital at the start of the next.

Grammar nitpicking aside, it's an interesting start to the story. It seems as though the (extremely fast acting!) pill takes care of the "internal" aspects of transformation (i.e. voice and feelings), whereas standard prostheses are used for the external aspects (breasts, genitals). Now, will Tammy and Nicole be introduced as girls or transformed boys? I expect if the latter is revealed, Allison will probably get into trouble for using the pills without consent... unless Mum is in on the scheme. Evidently Nicole and Tammy will have to hang around in their current form for a few hours anyway due to the length of time the pill acts.

Of course, what happens in future is anyone's guess. The title could imply they only became girls that one day, or it could imply something more long term. You even have the possibility of the ultimate crossdresser fantasy - male by weekday, complete female by night/weekend.

I look forward to reading the next episode :)

 


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Oh will everybody stop nit-picking about the grammar and punctuation! We all got the jist of the story and it looks as though it's going to be a good one. I wonder if these pills have an accumulative effect and will the effects eventually be come permanent? I wish there had been pills like that when I was a kid.

Most importantly I liked the piccies of the girls in leotards. (And I'm not a paedophile!!!) When I was younger, I actually stole a couple of leotards from my cousin who attended a dance school. I also nicked a couple of pairs of her pink ballet tights. Yes it was naughty but how else when you're evelven.

Loved the story, wonder how her mom will react.

XOXO

Beverly.

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The Day We Became Girls

Sounds like a fun read from a new author. Will be fun to see where you take the story.

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Welcome

RAMI

Welcome to BCTS. The story is what counts first, as long as it is readable, which this was. Was you have a good plot, an editor can help clean it up.

Back to the story. So where is this going, and what are the intentions of Allison, Mrs. Connor (not Miss) and Tammy/Tommy Nicole/Nick's Mom? Is this to be a one time short lived cross over to the other (better) side for both brothers? Is it that for Nick, but a complete change for Tammy? Or is this some plot on the part of the females to change both Nick to Nicole and Tommy to Tammy permanently? Are they the guinea pigs for an experiment in changing all or many men into women? If so is their mother a will participant, and if so, why?

When Lawyer Connor returns from court, will he be wearing a nice dark suit, with a cream colored blouse, a skirt to the knees, tan hose, and 3" pumps?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

RAMI

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My guess would be ...

... that the pill is a placebo and just a prop to get Tommy and Nick to release their "inner girls" ... Now if the makeup and the glue that's holding the forms (and, it will be found, the vagina, too) turns out to long lasting and the solvent has been - convienently - lost ... well, what then? :-) Is Allison's mom in on the plot? Tommy and Nick's mom, too? Can a salon visit be in Tammy and Nicole's future? Prom gowns and party dresses? What about school?

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BE a lady!

This does need an editor.

I took the liberty of re-writing (editing) your story, and sent it to you in a private message, here at Top Shelf. Look it over, re-add the pictures, and re-post it if you like. Cute story, and I'd like to see where it goes from here.

Catherine Linda Michel

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Thank you very much everyone

Thank you very much everyone for the comments this is the first story I've written in over 10 years.It was just floating around in my head along with a few other ideas I thought the pics would help out with the story and I've always been a fan of Gymnastics.I will be adding more to the story once I decided where its going to go.Thank you all for welcoming me here.

Not bad for a 10 year break!

I really liked your story Lostneo.

The pics look good and cute.

Where do we buy these inventions, I'd like two please.

Thank you, hope to see lots more of your writing.

LoL
Rita

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If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)

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This story is great. I

This story is great. I remember reading it before I had an account... I kind of like how Nick's just curious and they don't need to force him to do anything.

Great, interesting story,
thank you for writing,

Beyogi

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Alison can you turn
me into a girl

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