If I Offend Thee

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If I Offend Thee
By BillieBob
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If I offend thee, please let me know

If I offend thee, please let me know
for it wasn't intended, just so you know
what's important to me doesn't matter
in the grand scheme of things I'm only pleather

There's too much hurt the world exists I must not add no more
I only wish to help those many others so greatly soar

I've realized may have caused some pain
and it acts upon me like a drain
to give me a great dressing down
the result of which gives me a terrible frown

My only wish to date is this
is to grant you your most happy wish
and to cause you all to smile
for we only just exists for just a little while

I've thought to die and blink out to be no more
and realized if I did I'd offend those near even more
and hang my head in oppressive shame
without a shred of solitary fame
with acceptance of all the blame

So I offer this with a tear
to only hold those oh so dear
whether they are truly far or near
and my passage leaves good tidings
and not just a bloody smear

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Missed a piece

For I can be thick-headed
like a step-child redheaded

Didn't sound right all the same.
After reading it outloud, I'd say it's not my best effort.
Maybe I'll have another go at it later, or try with another version,
just like a software engineer.

If I Offend Thee

Beautiful

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