Rock Star Makeover, Part 5

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Rock Star Makeover, Part 5
 
Authors note: I'm not sure if not supplying a summary is annoying people. If it is, let me know, okay? I'm sorry that this chapter is so short.
 

The next morning, we were woken early by a message from the front desk, saying there was a message for us. We dressed, and went down The message turned out to be from Cathy, and it said, “Here is everything you will need for a good time at Disneyland. There is also an outfit for Gabbi included.”

The outfit turned out to be a copy of Cinderella’s dress.

She changed into it, and I said, “Wow. You really look like a princess.”

“Maybe. But if I am, its because I have got my Prince Charming already.” .

We went to the park, and found out that the tickets were V.I.P., and included having our own tour guide and front of the line at every ride we wanted. One of the coolest moments was when we were having lunch, and a whole section of trees and flowers suddenly lifted up to reveal a stage underneath. They then took kids from the audience to “fight” Darth Vader with lightsabers. They looked they had a blast. I sure did watching them.

The other cool thing was just watching Gabbi be a princess. Everyone, not just park employees complimented her on her outfit, and every time they did, her smile got a little bigger. The day ended with the Fantasmic fireworks show. It includes using water as a screen to show videos on. Gabbi watched beside me with her arm around my waist, my arm on her shoulder, and her mom holding on to her other hand.

It was a moment to treasure, forever.

Finally, it was time to leave, and we made our slow way back to hotel for one last sleep.

The next morning, we had a leisurely breakfast, and packed up for the trip home. Gabbi looked rather sad, so I asked her, “Are you okay?”

She managed a sad smile, and said, “I will be. I guess I’m a little nervous about going back to school Monday.”

“Why nervous?” I asked.

“Because I want to go back as I am. I don’t want to have to go back to pretending I’m a boy.”

“You will go back as Gabbi, honey.” Her mom said.

“You mean it mom?”

“Sweetie, for the last week I’ve had a chance to really see Gabrielle in public. Not only are you happier, healthier, and a nicer person to be around....”

“Thanks mom.”

“Let me finish. I have also watched how others treat you. Not one person thought you were a boy in a dress. I.... I’m less scared for you now. Yes, you might have trouble with people who remember Gavin, and so you will still have to be careful. But I know now how much it means to you to try. So you have my support.”

Gabbi gave her mom a big hug, and said, “Thanks!”

We finished packing, and called for our ride. Soon, we were going through the airport procedures, and boarded our flight home. Once we were on board, Gabbi looked at me, and said, “Now, its my turn to ask. You okay, Noah?”

“I’m fine, Gabbi. I just realized I haven’t spent a lot of time this week thinking of my own family. I hope they’re okay.”

“I’m sure they’re fine, Noah. I know you’ve been phoning every night.” Gabbi’s mom said.

‘Yeh. But also, its gonna be a bit weird to go back to school after all this.” I said.

“You’ll be okay. After all, you got me with you.” Gabbi said.

“That I do, Gabbi, that I do.” I smiled.

Once we got back to our hometown, I found my own family waiting for us, along with Gabbi’s dad. They had a banner saying “Welcome home.”Hugs were exchanged, and we all went to the restaurant in the airport to share stories.

“We had a pretty quiet week, Noah.” My mom said.

“Speak for yourself.” My brother said, “I found a girlfriend. I’ll introduce you to her tomorrow.”

“I’m happy for you, Adam.” I said, “I’m sure I’ll like her.”

I then told them all about our trip. Gabbi jumped in to add her own story, and we showed pictures we had taken. Finally, I must have been yawning, because my mom said, “It looks like you’re pretty tired Noah. time to go home, I think.”

“Kay, mom.”

I gave Gabbi a hug, and then said, “See you tomorrow, Gabbi.”

“Night, Noah. Sweet dreams.”

“Only if they are of you .”

That got me a big kiss that lasted until my mom cleared her throat.

“Come on, Romeo.” She said, and took me by the hand.

“Bye Gabbi, Love you.” I said as I walked away.

“Love you too” I heard her say, and then we were out of range.

I was three quarters asleep by the time I got home.

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Summary

Dorothy, first this was great. Second, I don't think you should add a summary. If we need a refresher that is what Parts 1 - 4 are there for. I have never added a summary to my stories in parts. But you should do what you think is best.

thank you, Lesley

and thanks for the feedback on a summary.

Dorothycolleen

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Can one be a Sonambulist and walk on air at the same time?

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...Apparently Noah can. And for good reason. Both are dreamwalks, in a sense, yes? Very sweet and oh so comforting to read. Like a warm blanket and cocoa on a cold day. Thanks!



Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena

  

To be alive is to be vulnerable. Madeleine L'Engle
Love, Andrea Lena

Thanks, 'Drea

Glad you are enjoying it.

Dorothycolleen

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Rock Star Makeover, Part 5

Love how Gabbi's Mom saw her daughter and chose to help her come out. Why not do a title page for the storywhere you can do a synopsis for each chapter written and add as new chapters are posted.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

magic kingdom

a great place to visit, now back to real life. has dad done any prep for her to go to school as Gabbi?, great chapter.

Thank you, LoneWolf.

As for going to school as Gabbi, you'll just have to wait and see...

Dorothycolleen

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Summaries are not

Summaries are not necessary.

These wonderful chapters are coming out quick enough to not need them.

thanks Valentine

that's what I thought, plus, they are so short, a summary would be redundant.

Dorothycolleen

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I like it

I like the story :--) but it kinda bugs me that i have no idea yet where the story will go...

I guess i'll just have to wait and read more ^^

grtz & hugs,

Sarah xxx

Thank you, Sarah

where would be the fun in reading if you knew where the story was going? Hopefully, you will enjoy the ride.

Dorothycolleen

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Friends

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In high places. Its nice that Cathy gave them VIP passes to Disney land, but the Cindrella dress for Gabbi was really nice of her maybe Cathy will vist their home town, & spend more time with Gabbi maybe when Cathy has some time off... (Yeah when does a rock star ever have time off?)

I look foward to the next chapter.

Love Samantha Renee Heart

Love Samantha Renee Heart

Thank you Renee

Cathy Mason may show up again. After all, she must tour, so maybe she would have a reason to be in Gabbi's hometown....

Dorothycolleen

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Technical points

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I've been to Disneyland Anaheim over 100 times. Considering that I live over 500 miles from there, that's a lot! My family and I even had Annual Passes for two years. As such, I know a lot about it, and you messed up a couple points.

First of all, children over the age of 12 aren't allowed to wear costumes in the park except during one of the Mickey's Halloween Party nights in September or October. The cast members at the entrance turnstiles will deny entry for a full-on costume, (I've seen them do it several times, the most recent being in 2012) or an outfit that is close enough to pass for one. It's a liability issue if little kids think the guest is an actual character and the guest acts inappropriately.

Secondly, VIP passes are extremely hard to get, and non-transferable. The only way they could have used them was if Cathy was there with them. Also, not even VIP passes let you jump to the head of lines. The only people who get that treatment are actual VIPs that would be mobbed in line, and for that they clear out sections of the park temporarily. The closest thing you get to what you're describing are Guided Tour passes which don't jump the line, they just get Fast Pass access, which only cuts out part of the line time. (how much depends on the attraction)

The story is still on the rocks with Gabbi still in the dog house as far as I'm concerned, but hopefully it will turn better at this point. She can still be redeemed! (I'm giving her some slack for being a 16 year old)

Thank you,Dorothy,

ALISON

'if I find a story that interests me I go back and read the preceding chapters,for my own benefit
and as a matter of courtesy to the writer.You have done a good job with this story and it has
certainly got my interest and I enjoy it immensely,but certainly would not if I was dumb enough to rely on a summary which may,or may not ,tell the basis of the story.Hugs.

ALISON

Thank you Alison

I'm glad you are liking it. This kind of feedback makes a big difference to me as a writer.

Dorothycolleen

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Summaries???

Why would we need summaries? The story is clearly explained and is short enough that if anything is forgotten all we have to do is go back to a previous chapter.
Good work. :-)

Thanks, Cliff

That was my thinking, but I'm glad to get your input.

Dorothycolleen

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This story is so nice -

I was getting worried that something mean may happen, so I re read the header items, 'Sweet & Sentimental'.

So now I'm ok?

Save yourself some time and effort Dorothy, leave out the summaries.

LoL
Rita

Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)

LoL
Rita

Thank you, Rita

Your gonna be okay hon, giggle. There might be a few "mean" moments, however, so be prepared.....

Dorothycolleen

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