Finding Jenny Part II -49

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In this installment: Someone dies, sorry


Chapter 49

Chase was sitting at his dining room table. Gus, J.D. and Skeeter were sitting around him as they all were going through a mound of paperwork and maps, trying to discover which of the several properties that Douglas Zarchy owned was the next logical place to search. It was a slow, frustrating process because none of those seven properties stuck out from the rest.

“Is Melissa going to be okay?” Gus asked as he looked up.

Chase glared at him. His wife was still upstairs crying her heart out with two of his children joining in. He would be consoling her except he was kicked out of his own bedroom while Melissa demanded the only thing he do was find their baby. “She’ll calm down soon enough. Karen’s up there with her. I shouldn’t have gotten her hopes up, but I was so sure we’d find Jenny at the church, it just all made perfect sense.”

Gus decided to stay quiet. His own thought was to tell the man to start expecting the worst, especially after a failed rescue attempt, but he chose not to say a word. His experience told him that the fact the note that was left behind without a ransom demand, that the child may already be lost to them forever. He sighed heavily and returned to his work.

A half hour passed of total silence as the men plotted lines on a map. They tried to think of things logically; tried to think of things criminally. They tried to see what perceived benefits and disadvantages each property had in an effort to narrow down the list so they could plan their next assault and hoped for a better result.

A cell phone rang, playing an odd tune that each man recognized but none could identify, save Gus, who programmed it. He snatched the phone from the leather holster, flipped the phone open with his thumb and hit the talk button. “Cantrell here,” he spoke clearly.

An operator from the FBI informed him of an interesting caller that wanted to be put through to him. One that may have important information.

“Certainly,” Gus leapt to his feet. “Put him through.”

“Agent Chase Milan,” a shaky voice said as the call was connected.

The group of men were all looking up at Gus who was nervously pacing three steps in one direction and then returning to his chair. “No,” Gus said in a calm voice that didn’t match his demeanor. This is Special Agent Cantrell that you are speaking to, and you are?”

“You already know who I am. I’ll only talk to Agent Milan,” the voice said a bit more firmly.

“He’s right here, hold on.” Gus lowered the phone. “Chase, we got a call for you, it’s Marquis. Now, it’s very important that you remain calm, don’t get confrontational with him.”

Chase stood up. Just the statement to remain calm put him on edge. He took the phone from Gus, trying not to appear grabby. He put the cell phone up to his ear and listened a moment, perhaps he would be able to hear his daughter in the background and know that the hope he was holding on to wasn’t in vain. He heard nothing, he took a deep, silent breath and exhaled slowly. “This is Chase.”

“Agent Milan,” the voice said in a now steady voice, but sounded like even as the man spoke he was questioning what he was doing. “You’re daughter is still among the living.”

Chase fell to his knee and would’ve gotten to all fours if Gus hadn’t caught him and held him up. It seemed just as soon as on weight was lifted, another was added and the man’s body was unprepared for the effects. “What do I need to do to get her back?” Chase asked as he fought back the tears of relief of hearing that his daughter was still alive and the rage of wanting to tear into those who had taken her.

“Just come quickly and come in force,” Marquis said plainly. “There are those of us here who want to see her dead and that’s going to happen fairly soon. You don’t have the luxury of another day.”

“Tell me where and we’ll be there.”

Marquis finished giving instruction to Chase of where he and Jenny were and where the other two would be stationed for some time. He hung up the cell phone and looked to the sky. “Thanks for the strength,” he said to the Heavens and then shook his head.


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Chase relayed the information to the men in his kitchen and immediately a flurry of activity began. “Don’t tell my wife, let’s not dash her spirits twice in one day, but let’s move quickly,” Chase said as he scrambled for his car keys. He had the location of a daughter, who was but a county away, and each said was an agonizing eternity.


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Jenny watched as the man walked back into the shed. She was still naked, still hungry, still exhausted to no end, but she also displayed the same slight smile that spoke of a certain pride. She did not know of the call that Marquis had just made, only of the prayer in which she led the man.

Marquis looked at the child. He smiled too, then checked that the restraints still looked like they were fastened, even though they weren’t. “Thank you, angel,” he said with sincerity as he kissed the child on top of the forehead. For the first time in his life he was at total peace with himself. “This will all be over soon, but there is one more sin for me to commit, but I promise it’ll be my last,” he said cryptically. “Now, if either of those two come in to harm you, you run. There are woods no more than twenty feet if you turn left out of the shed. You can hide there.”

Jenny nodded. She figured whatever the sin Marquis figured he had to commit, that it would involve violence and the two other captors. She was in no shape to object and hoped the ordeal would soon be over as the man had said.

“I’ll see you in heaven,” Marquis said as he backed away. He looked at the child one last time. Though he still didn’t get excited at looking at her naked, he knew it was only a matter of time before he again faltered. Marquis closed the door behind him after he left the shed.

The man walked around to the back of the shed. The supplies he had prepared were waiting. The noose was still tied and a note he had written in as neat a penmanship he could manage sat folder under a rock that kept it from blowing away. In the distance he heard the whirl of a chopper blade, he knew his time was short.”

Marquis stood upon two crates stacked one atop another. “Father forgive me, a sinner,” he said softly a tear rolled down the side of his face. “Into thy hands I commit my spirit,” he said, and in a moment he spoke no more.


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Chase looked out the side window of the police helicopter they borrowed from the Nashville Metro police department. Though the small city’s police force was growing, they weren’t quite big enough to justify air support. Below him and off to the right was a row of black SUVs marching along. Off in the distance he knew his child was waiting and he would be there soon. He rubbed the handle of his gun. “Hold on, Baby, I’m coming,” he thought.

Fifteen minutes after he received the call the helicopter peeked over some trees and there was the property that held his daughter captive. It took less then a minute for the pilot to find a clear spot and touch down in between the house and the shed where they were informed the girl was being held.

Dee and Doug were caught off guard. They heard the helicopter as it landed, but they were in the bedroom doing what Marquis was suppose to be doing in the shed. Dee wouldn’t admit it to her husband, but she was envisioning the act of their compatriot as Doug made each thrust; she had never been so aroused until then. With the sound of whirl from the helicopter, the mood was shot. Doug pulled up his slacks and raced towards the window. “It’s the Feds,” he shouted frantically. “Grab the gun, we’ll end it now.”

Before Dee could move or object, the door to the bedroom imploded and four very serious looking weapons were pointing at them. “Don’t move,” one of the men wielding the gun shouted at them.


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Chase ran to the shed. A towel was draped over the handle; the signal that was left to tell him only his daughter was inside. Still, he proceeded with caution. A discarded little league uniform and a soiled, bloodied pair of his daughter’s panties were not too far away from the shed and that caught Chase’s eye but did not deter him. His anger flared, but he kept himself in control. He kicked open the door and rolled out of the way, just incase of an ambush.

Jenny looked at the open door. The bright sunlight hurt her eyes. Her young body tensed with uncertainty as she debated if she should make a run for it then, but as soon as the thought popped into her mind, a shadow filled the doorway and her route was momentarily cut off.

“Jenny!” Chase yelled in relief as he saw that his daughter moved her head.

“Daddy?” Jenny’s eyes tried to adjust as her mind tried to figure out if she was somehow dreaming. But it wasn’t a illusion and she attempt to roll off the cross towards him.

Chase sprinted the few feet to his daughter. She was bruised, battered, and bloodied. He could tell she was cut and burned. She looked like she’d been through hell, but she never looked more beautiful to the man than she did right then. He embraced her and cried. “I’m here, Baby,” he sobbed. “Daddy’s here.”

Her father’s embrace hurt. Everything hurt, even moving. She didn’t show the pain though, the hug hurt, but felt so good at the same time. “I knew you’d come,” she said in a horse whisper which was as loud as she could talk. “I just knew it.”

Chase removed the restraining cuffs from his daughter and discovered how much pain she actually was in. Jenny was in no shape to walk, she barely had the strength to sit up and two weeks without any activity made all her muscles atrophy and they were sore on top of all the abuse. An ambulance siren could be heard in the distance; a hospital stay would surely be required. “I’ll be right back,” Chase said as his hand reached down to his holster, he felt the strong need to break someone in half.

“Don’t go Daddy,” Jenny cried. “Please don’t go.”

“Stay put Chase,” a voice said from the door. “This is where you’re needed most.”

Chase turned around to see Gus standing at the door. He nodded. “Okay, Jenny. Nothing is more important than you being okay anyway.” Chase cradled the girl in his arms.

Gus slowly walked to Chase and looked at the child who clung to her father. “We’ve been looking for you, young lady,” he said and gave a big smile.

“I’ve been here the whole time,” Jenny said weakly.

Gus chuckled and turned serious as the girl fell asleep. “The two men are dead,” he whispered into Chase’s ear, trying not to disturb the child. “Marquis Turner hung himself behind the shed, by the time we got to him it was too late. If it matters, he left a note apologizing for his role in all this and causing you any pain. The other one, Doug Zarchy, he died while they were reading him his rights. The boys tried CPR, but,” his voice trailed off.

Chase nodded. “I don’t care. I got my baby back. That’s all the matters.”


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Skeeter waited outside the cabin as the Feds pretty much handled all the work. He knew he wasn’t really needed there, but his curiosity got the best of him. He knew that the coroner had been called, that the old preacher had finally breathed his last, and for that he had felt no remorse.

Dee was led out of the house, cuffed and draped in a sheet. She held her head high as she made it through the door. Her ex-husband was there waiting for her, so it seemed. “Oh, it’s you.”

Skeeter viewed his ex-wife, he figured he would feel anger or remorse, but those feelings never arose. “You’ve lost some weight, Diane,” he said casually “it suits you.”

Dee stared at her ex, waiting for some insult, some form of ‘I told you so,’ the fact that it didn’t come upset her. “And I’ve heard you’ve done well for yourself. A detective now, and all that, congratulations.”

“We’re happy,” Skeeter said. “Me and Shawn that is. Life has been going well, until of course all of this mess. But I suppose that things will be getting back to normal soon enough. You’d be proud of our boy, he rolls with the punches quite well.”

“Proud of that little queer,” Dee turned spiteful. “He’ll turn out to be just like his father…”

Skeeter wasn’t about to let his ex-wife have the last word. “God willing he will do just that, turn out just like me that is, and no matter what I’ll be proud of him. Take this,” Skeeter paused as he thought of what words he should use, “this person away. Goodbye, Diane.”

Dee was dragged off the porch. “I’m not through with you and that queer yet, you hear me.”

Skeeter shook his head. “You may not be through with us,” he said in an inaudible whisper, “but we are sure through with you.”


Author's note: There is only another chapter or two left and an epilogue, I hope the conclusion to the kidnapping was palatable to people. This has been an epic journey for me. I don't know if suicide was the right answer, but it seemed to be fitting. There has been a lot of Bible quoting going on. Now, I am not one to be a proponent of ending one's life, but I see the benefits.



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Andrea Lena DiMaggio's picture

Can a last minute change of heart...

...erase years of evil? I don't know, and I must leave it to those who are much wiser than I am to answer that question. As far as the other one? Death perhaps may be considered to have robbed justice of having its way, but there is a reason why some states at one time considered rape and kidnapping capital crimes. Nonetheless, whatever the state could have meted out in punishment likely pales in comparison to what he will ever experience.

Sadly, the only one left has an all too tragic and almost inexorable connection with the little girl's family. We can only hope that whatever jury hears her case dismisses her gender as any consideration for leniency, and that she never sees the outside of a prison again.

What a compelling story, Katie. I kept telling myself to stay away; that it was too painful and all too personal, but I couldn't abandon Jenny. Thank you for this powerful tale.


Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena
Crying is all right in its own way while it lasts. But you have to stop sooner or later,
and then you still have to decide what to do. ― C.S. Lewis
Love, Andrea Lena
devonmalc's picture

Jenny is free

I can breath properly again.The conclusion of the kidnapping was definitely palatable and now the healing can begin.With Jennies strength and faith I hope she will pull through without too much damage.Thank you for your hard work in writing this story.

devonmalc

Finding Jenny Part II -49

Depending upon your Beliefs, Marquis did find Salvation, or dies away from God. Me, I choose to Believe that he went to Heaven because Jenny led him to Salvation.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

I gotta agree with stan

I gotta agree with stan,the simple fact that marquis asked for forgivensss for being a sinner means he will goto heaven. The other 2 well the preacher, I hope he likes the devils lube same as the woman when she dies. And katie I'm glad to finally see jenny get resuced.

Uh? Maybe?

Marquis going to heaven? I don't see any profession of faith, and even with the last acts of so called kindness, they still followed his inaction as the poor girl was tortured while he stood by and did nothing. Almost like Darth Vader in Return of the Jedi. Can saving his son from death by killing the emperor after being responsible for the death of the billions on Alderaan tip the scales? Yeah, that'll work.

It's almost as if he contacted the authorities more to save his own soul than to save the poor girl. By his suicide he abandoned her to an unknown fate instead of carrying her to safety. Maybe an occasional ice tea in the midst of an eternity of fire and fucking brimstone! My father was sorry too. It didn't change the fact that he molested me.


Happy to know you. Belle


Happy to know you. Belle
cyclist's picture

Oh indeed!

William the Bastard--er, Conqueror--committed a particularly foul act of genocide in a little thing called the Harrying of the North, when his troops killed every human and animal they could find, burned all buildings and crops, and then went to church. When he was dying, from a ruptured spleen, in agony for a very long time, he called in his priest and made his confession. Apparently, in slaughtering tens of thousands of Northumbrians (and in the end, possibly causing the deaths of hundreds of thousands) he might have been a bit 'harsh'.

Confession. Absolution. Job done; fit for Heaven!

So no, not really. Deathbed virtue is bollocks.

heaven and Marquis

The profession of faith was done off screen, so to say. It was in between the two chapters and I allude to it in the beginning of this chapter.

Forgiveness of sin does not mean that the sin was never committed, just that the punishment for said sin (an eternity spent away from God) has already been paid for by another. To me it all depends on the sincerity of the one asking for forgiveness and how a person responds to another's conversion speaks more of their own heart then in does the petitioner. But, is Marquis going to Heaven.... OF COURSE NOT HE IS A WORK OF FICTION.

K.T. Leone

My fiction feels more real than reality

K.T. Leone

I'm finally me and I feel fine

well it be a bits tough for

well it be a bits tough for me to read some.............but i still say thank you for sharing this, an your talents with us.

Let's see, kidnapping is a FEDERAL crime punishable by death...

ever since the Lindbergh case.

TWO people died as part of the criminal conspiracy to abduct a minor with the intent to torture then kill. One person linked to the crimes died by suicide the other from a heart attack. As it was also a hate crime, a criminal conspiracy, felony rape of a minor, torture and so on... could she get a death sentence? Normally the death penalty requires a victim to have died but kidnapping is a special case. And it could be argued Dee and the Rev DROVE Marquis to commit suicide. That could be seen as deliberate murder. And they were planning to kill him anyways though is there proof of their plans?

Certainly at a min life without parole in a Super Max or a metal hospital with similar facilities. She publically threatened an officer and the same child she helped assault and rape with further harm, her own child by birth. That makes her unrepentant and a flight risk. Hum, were she and the Rev stupid enough to document the abduction and torture? Did they write down their plans, take photos, vids? Dee was sicko enough she might have done so.

The threat alone in the presence of witnesses may well be a felony. One good thing may come out of it, Skeeter publically declared his son was a good kid and a man. Maybe they will heal the rift between them.

As to Marquis, given how he felt in his mind suicide was his last act of contrition. Some might see it as a selfish act, to avoid prison and being assaulted and raped there. But before that act he did finally make that call to save Jenny so though a child molester/sexual predator he died having made an act of redemption. Regretably he killed himself before the police came so did put Jenny a risk for a very short time. He was many things but a killer he was not and would not be whereas Dee and the late minister would gleefully have killed. In his case "for the Lord" in hers because she is insane. But is she insane by legal definition?

The Rev got off too lightly. I had hoped as he was dying he would ask a minister for absolution and be refused OR that he would see Jenny in Chase's arms, ALIVE and Dee in handcuffs as his last view of the world.

I do hope the police take her seriously and don't defer to her as a woman. She needs to be treated/handled like the cold blooded killer she was fast becoming. Give her common decency and she would steal an officer's gun and start shooting. Will she ever got to trial? Will she try to escape and be killed/crippled? Will she be found to have an incurable brain disorder? Whatever is the reason behind her actions she must never go free. She was already a nasty person BEFORE she committed adultery. A brain tumor triggering insanity in a previously normal person like in the Texas Tower shooter of the 1960's seems unlikely.

As to Jenny, she has held up so well but will the stress, injuries make her seriously ill? Will she crash now without an enemy to hold out against and suffer from PTSD? Can she and Shawn have a life together? Will this bond them even closer or tear them apart each being a reminder to the other of the horror of it all?

Hum, as part of a criminal conspiracy could any assets of the Rev, Dee or Marquis be ceased by the courts? Certainly the van and the property Jenny was held in were part of the criminal conspiracy. Hey it's done in drug cases and has sadly been abused by some law enforcement in the past. As Dee and company hurt "one of their own" I have to believe the police and courts will take great care to see Dee is punished to the max and can't wriggle out on technicalities.

Hum could part of the reason Dee dropped the weight be she has cancer and doesn't know it yet?

Dang it but I dislike this fictional woman with a passion.

Good chapter.

John in Wauwatosa

the fact that you hate Dee

The fact that you hate Dee means I must've done a good job. I think you are over analyzing the reason for her behavior a little bit. You missed one obvious reason, she was always like that. Could it be that from the get go she did whatever would suit her goals. Remember, she 'tricked' Skeeter into fatherhood; she was suppose to be on the pill and took herself off. There are many women who think motherhood will fill a gap in their life and when things don't work out the way they suppose, they take it out on their spouse and child. From the onset, Dee (Diane) has been manipulative and self-serving and when people don't act the way that suits her needs, she acts out. My suspicion is that she was a spoiled child who knew how to get what she wanted and would model her behavior to get what she needed. When she thought a husband and child and home would fulfill her hearts desire, she gladly played Molly Home-maker, when things didn't turn out like she wanted (in GUJ), she abused her child and even threatened her husbands freedom and livelihood by claiming he was a child molester. I think I've kept the character sufficiently consistent throughout both stories. Maybe the big question would be, how did she fool Skeeter so long in the beginning to land him as a husband.

As for the punishment... I will not go in detail about the court proceedings in the story. I have a few scenes left to play out and then I'm done. I just put up two novels back to back surrounding Jenny and to be honest, I'm tired of her right now and want to work on other things. I have ideas for a forth book in the series, but don't know if I will ever write it (But it takes place at her senior year in high-school). But, Dee will take a plea and serve a lengthy prison sentence and according to my plans for the forth book (Called Phenom, and revolves more around Shawn than it does Jenny) she still tries to make Jenny's and her son's lives a living hell, even behind a barbed wired fence.

K.T. Leone

My fiction feels more real than reality

K.T. Leone

I'm finally me and I feel fine

awww

and here I was hoping that she'd get shot when she runs from the feds. you know, after they stop, let her out of the car and tell her to run.

great ending

i think it was a great ending. im sorry it couldnt happen sooner but youre the author and know best. keep up the good work.
robert

not over yet

I still got more in me

K.T. Leone

My fiction feels more real than reality

K.T. Leone

I'm finally me and I feel fine

The suicide surprised me.

The suicide surprised me. Zarchy's death didn't really surprise me, although I thought he might make it to trial before dying. Now Jenny gets to spend a few weeks/months in the hospital while she heals, and then a while in therapy while she heals some more. Then on to the firing range to learn how to shoot people like those that have harmed her, with Shawn learning right beside her.

Good chapter good too see

Good chapter good too see Jenny finally free ,just hope she can get over the abuse she has suffered without too many emotional scar's.
Shame that Dee managed to survive but then again sometime's the nastiest people seem too have a lot of luck.
Thank you for a great story:).

vivientena's picture

Finding Jenny

Wow, you wrote this story so well honey that I kind of feel like I have just located one of my own children from serious harm or kidnapping!

This chapter like so many of the other chapters remind me of my step son Johnny being in a hospital after falling from a large tree and landing on a nail that went into the back of his skull. Thankfully the nail was too weak to penetrate far and bent over but it was very rusty so infection was a huge ristk. He just laid there unconcious which brought me to my own knees much like Chase did and felt.

Anyway, another great chapter written by a great author!

Hugs

Vivien

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