Soul Sword Ch 8

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Soul Sword Ch 8
Mother Troubles

By Blackout

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Terry was your typical average teenage boy. But like most stories he was about to startled by some unexplainable power but hey that’s what makes the story interesting. Read on as the life of one typical teenage boy except for his hobby of swordsmanship is turned around as he discovers a world he never thought he would enter in more ways than one.

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“What do you mean your mom always wanted a girl? Why does that matter?”

“Have you ever looked through magazines like Women’s Fashion Weekly, or Hot New Looks?”

“No. Why do you ask?”

“My mom is Maria Young the model! She’s a freaking model! Think about it she is going to want to get me in all the cutest girly fashions and complete submerge me in girl world. It’s going to be a nightmare.”

“I’m sure it can’t be all that bad, she is your mother after all.”

“You don’t understand my mother is obsessed with the idea of having a daughter. She always brings home samples of the newest brands of clothes girly teen clothes saying how she wished she had a daughter to give them to. She has a collection of these clothes upstairs just in case she ever gets a daughter.”

“Well Terry you’re going to have to face her sometime.”

“I know I just wanted to put it off as long as possible.”

“Don’t worry she’s your mother and she loves you. I’ll be here right next to you also.”

“Thanks Mrs. Helion” I said forcing a smile. Mrs. Helion was always like my other mother. At least she didn’t obsess over the latest brand clothing.

“Come on let’s head downstairs and get something to eat.”

“Ok that sounds good. I’m starving.”

We headed downstairs to the kitchen where Shane and his dad were already waiting for us. They were having the very basic cereal and bagels for breakfast. I sat down got myself a bagel and cream cheese with lox and started eating. Unfortunately Shane kept glancing over at me and when I turned to look at him he glanced away. Fortunately for me Mrs. Helion stepped in.

“For gosh sakes Shane you act like you’ve never seen a girl before. She is still Terry your friend. Don’t treat her like a stranger.”

“Yeah I’m sorry Terry, I’m just having trouble digesting this all.”

“I understand, if you want we could spar and just hang out sometime later when I have this all sorted out. I just don’t want to lose you as my best friend.”

“Yeah that sounds great.”

I was happy he agreed with me. I was worried about was that something was going to change between us. Shane had always been a brother to me, so much so that the thought of losing him pained me.

Ring! Ring!

“That must be your mother Terry.”

Mrs. Helion went to get the door. Upon opening the door the slim pretty figure of my mother gleamed. She was certainly a model with luscious curves, nice big breasts, long brown hair, all in all a killer body. Unfortunately I often had friends say “man what I wouldn’t do to get with your mom.” Even worse was the fact that now I was her daughter, and I had her gorgeous genes. For some reason I was not all that good looking as a guy, but as a girl I was something else.

“Hello Mrs. Helion. I am her to pick up my… Oh my God EEEK Terry you’re so cute!” My mom spotted me ran over and gave me the biggest girl hug imaginable.

“Ummm mom you’re crushing me.”

“Oh! Sorry sweetie. I am just so excited to finally have a daughter. But look at those clothes. They are way to boorish and boring for any daughter of mine to be wearing. We need to go shopping for the latest fashions. We are going to have so much fun, just some quality mother daughter time.”

“Uhg I was afraid of this. Mom I really don’t like being a girl. Please can you understand that?”

“Terry I am you mother and as long as I’m paying for your expenses you will live by my rules, and I will have no tomboy as a daughter.”

“ARE YOU F**KING kidding me. I literally just became a girl and you’re already trying to girlitize me. Don’t you ever consider my feelings?”

“Tori watch your language, a young lady does not use such foul language!”

“Tori? Mom my name is Terry!”

“Well now that you’re a girl I thought it would be more appropriate to have you go by Tori.”

“Don’t I have any say in this?”

“No Tori as your mother I know what’s best for you.”
“STOP CALLING ME TORI! I HATE YOU!” I yelled. I stormed out of the kitchen running up the stairs.

“Tori come back here this instant young lady and apologize.” I was so pissed at her that I would not even dignify that with a response. She thought she was the victim. I had only been transformed into a girl a few days ago and already she was trying to make me the daughter she always wanted. She rarely ever fussed over me as a guy but now that I was her daughter suddenly everything changed and she cared more. Hell no was that ever going to happen.
I heard the fighting continuing downstairs. Apparently Mrs. Helion was sticking up for me.

“She is your child.”

“Exactly, she is my child and I will raise her as I like.”

“You need to consider what she wants.”

“She doesn’t know what’s best for her.”

“And I suppose you do?”

“This discussion is over Mrs. Helion. I will be taking Tori home now.” With that my mom marched upstairs and grabbed me by the wrist. I knew better than to fight against my mother. Last time I tried I ended up with a bottle of soda poured over my head, I was grounded for a month and she made my life hell for an entire year. My mom was one of those women who knew just what buttons to push to make someone tick. Women are scary like that. Sure most men were physically superior but when it came to psychological warfare women were superior, and my mom was at the top of the heap. I cringed; thinking about the fact that I would have to deal with that in girl world.

As I was leaving the house I saw Mrs. Helion moth the words “I’m sorry” to me. I was really thankful she cared for me. But I knew I was doomed. My mom marched me to the car and literally threw me in. Both mom and I sat in silence the whole way home. Though I had to say that car ride home was about the worst experience I had ever had in my life.

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After what seemed like an eternity we finally got home. My home was what you would expect of an upper suburban house.

“Tori go upstairs and take a shower. I am going to go fetch you some nicer clothes. We have a lot that needs to be done. Get you new clothes, remodel your room, and then we will discuss your future.”

“I really hate you mom!”

“Tori I am your mother. Now go upstairs and get into the shower this instant.” I reluctantly went upstairs to take a shower. As much as I was angry at mom right now, I had to admit I did need a shower. I had not showered for a few days now since going on the camping trip, and boy was stinky.

I got undressed and turned on the shower to allow it to warm up but there was something missing. My 2 in 1 shampoo and conditioner was gone as well as my old spice body wash. Replaced with them were many different bottles of shampoo, conditioner, body wash, and face moisturizers.

“Hey mom, where did you put my shower supplies?”

“You can’t use those anymore they would damage your beautiful hair and skin. I got you much more suitable stuff for the new you.”

“I don’t want to smell all girly! I don’t even know how to use them.”

“Ok I will be right up to help you?”

Unfortunately my mom did walk in about a minute later as promised. I really did not want to rely on her but who else was here that could help me.

“I had my doubts but you certainly are my child, you look almost like me when I was a child.”

“Really thanks. That makes me so happy.” I jeered sarcastically. Mom just ignored me though.

“Ok step into the shower and get your hair wet. Apply the shampoo and really lather it all in. This will take longer than you were used to.”

“Which one should I use?”

“Well today will be more relaxed Tori so you should go with this one.” She said as she handed me a bottle of shampoo. It did take a while and before I knew it my hair smelled like roses. Conditioner took just as long. Using my new body wash also made me smell more girly. It was an interesting sensation as I massaged in over my body. The water never felt so good on my skin either. It felt really good to get clean. Unfortunately my mom saw me smiling and gave me a big grin and decided to use that as an opportunity to take me a step further into womanhood.

“Now we should shave those legs. You don’t want to be a Sasquatch.”

“No mom I am not shaving my legs. Not now or ever.”

“Suit yourself you will have to shave them eventually.”

I tuned off the shower dried and wrapped myself in a towel like my mom showed. It was weird to have a towel moved up and wrapped around my breasts instead of my waist, just another reminder of my predicament.

“Geez what do I supposed to do about this mop of wet hair?”

“You need to blow-dry it first. After that I will show you how to wrap it in a towel.” After what seemed like an eternity I finally got out of the bathroom. I had also discovered the reason girls take so long in the bathroom.

“Tori I left some clothes for you on your bed, go get dressed. I will be back shortly; I need to make a quick phone call.”

I got out of the bathroom in a jiffy, strangely happy to smell good. I guess after being in the wilderness, one does feel relieved after a nice shower. But this was different. I really liked the way I felt and smelled.

I suddenly had the strange suspicion that something was watching me.

“Hello young lady.” I jumped startled by the unknown voice.

The voice seemed to echo from my bed and sure enough there was someone or something there.

“What the HELL are you?!!!”

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Author's Note: Firstly please forgive any errors found. I am currently looking for a new editor. Please message me if you are interested. Perks are getting to see the chapter before anyone else. Also the story is now moving into a more interesting place which should help me write more. Lastly please do kudos and possibly comment. It motivates me. Also I decided to have the picture be a little more different this time.

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Soul Sword Ch 8

What will she do?

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

I'm not liking mom here

she needs to dial it down, or she will lose her daughter, forever.

Dorothycolleen, member of Bailey's Angels

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Agreed...

I've always hated when parents are like that.

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Peace be with you and Blessed be

Peace be with you and Blessed be

She sounds like

one of those mom's who make their kids do beauty pageants to recapture their lost youth.

Mom Needs to Chill

terrynaut's picture

I can see Tori meeting her mother part way but her mother needs to slow down. Models. Sheesh.

I'm enjoying this but I wish Terry could've kept her name. There are lots of girls and women named Terry. Terry's a great name. *sigh*

Thanks and kudos.

- Terry

What I'd rather see happen

NoraAdrienne's picture

Terry: Mom, I am your son, or at least I was until some freaky magic turned me into a junior Barbie. Let me make myself clear. Stop this crazy shit about turning me into your clone. If not I WILL kill you and go into the system till I inherit everything from your estate. I will tell everyone that a crazy man with a sword broke into the house and killed you. He will never be found since I will be the sword that does it.

My First Thought...

...was that changing to the sword form would have given Terry more leverage in that situation, even if no one was around to wield it. Anyway, I wouldn't advise Mom to pick it up barehanded.

Eric

Had to Look It Up...

Terry's 18, so his mother has no legal hold over him. It seems to me the main thing keeping Terry at her house is a lack of ID, making it difficult for Terry to find accommodations or employment elsewhere.

Actually, Terry could call 911 and say she's being kidnapped. Mom would have an awfully hard time proving otherwise.

All that said, that "strangely happy to smell good" line sounds as though something connected to the transformation is going to overcome her current dissatisfaction. Meanwhile, we'll have to see who/what this new character on the bed amounts to. It would have been nice to know whether it sounded male or female (or neither).

Eric

Just a Suggestion....

As far as I know (which might not be that far in this type of knowledge)....

>> She was certainly a model with luscious curves, nice big breasts, long brown hair, <<

Most models do not have big breasts. I think the ones that do are plus size models, not like Terry's mom.

Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee

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Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee

Reality check

Jamie Lee's picture

Terry's mom needs her arse kicked several times. Terry is 18 not some little kid and needs treated as such.

What they should have done before mothera spirited Terry away is to put the sword to mom's throat and make her understand she doesn't rule. That Terry IS Terry, not Tori.

Mom may yet get a new reality check if whoever is on Terry's bed can be seen by mom.

Others have feelings too.