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Allen's Discovery

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Allen's Discovery
By Princess


Copyright © 2010 Princess



When Allen's mother dies, he is left without anyone to comfort him in his need to be a girl. So he starts wearing his sister's clothes which leads to many adventures and both siblings discover things about each other.

can I change the title of a story I already posted in multiple parts

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It seems like I can just change the name field but if its in multiple parts, will that cause any problems with the links to the other chapters?

I have written quite a lot but now I am editing it and decided on a better name. When I am ready to post it in place of the old chapters, How do I do that?

Shawn the Maiden Chapter 8


Shawn the Maiden

Book 1
Chapter 8
By Princess

The young son of a rich powerful man is abused by his step family after his father marries a manipulative woman. They subject him to horrible cruelty
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Shawn the Maiden Chapter 7

Shawn the Maiden
Book 1


Chapter 7

By Princess

The young son of a rich powerful man is abused by his step family after his father marries a manipulative woman. They subject him to horrible cruelty

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Shawn the Maiden Chapter 6


Shawn the Maiden

Book 1


Chapter 6


By Princess

The young son of a rich and powerful business man struggles to survive the cruelty of his step family. The son, now forced to live as a female named Joan, finds that his power is growing. How will he overcome his persecutors?

I didnt know a easter could be so sad

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It started last night, my grand mother who is over 90 had a heart attack. She is still alive but she got pneumonia this weekend and then had a heart attack. She has been going through kidney failure for the past year. So this isnt good at all. Why is this happening over easter :((

Shawn the Maiden Chapter 5


Shawn the Maiden

Book 1


Chapter 5


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The young son of a powerful business man is set up by his evil step family. He is set up, charged and is sent to endure a humiliating treatment by the totalitarian state in which they live in. Sentenced to be feminized, he meets some unlikely allies. And he meets the last person in his life he thought he would ever meet.

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Shawn the Maiden Chapter 4


Shawn the Maiden



By Princess

Book 1
Chapter 4

The son of a rich businessman is set up by his evil step sisters who are plotting against him. He is sentenced to a cruel forced feminization program by a judge in the corrupt regime they live in. His step family's cruelty is taken to a new level. Can he survive?

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Shawn the Maiden Chapter 3


Shawn the Maiden

Book 1
Chapter 3


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The young son of a powerful business man is set up by his greedy cruel step sisters when his father marries. The punishment for his arrogance is worse than he ever imagined. The cruelty of the nation he lives in becomes too clear to him. He is put to trial by a corrupt judicial system and he sees the true cruelty of his step sisters. Can he endure it?

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I have a multi part question about a story I am presently planning

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I have written the first few pages which introduces our main character. He's a young teenage boy. The first question is about the plot. He is abused mistreated and enslaved by an evil member of his family. Its an old story that has been told a million times before since the story of Moses, and will be told a million more time. The plot of an abused mistreated Person rising up for vengeance against the persecutor with the odds stacked ridiculously against him.

have you ever heard of a boy named VIvian

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I was reserching feminine names for a boy and I found quite a few names that I expected. Like Stacey, Ashley, Leslie, Kelly, Cassidy. Jamie, Sydney. I have heard or known boys with all of those names. Stacey is quite a large guy. But it still seems strange.

But then I came across names I would never consider for a boy. Heather, Camille, Hillary, Brooke and Vivian. Can you imagin a boy with those names. But reserching boys named Vivian, I came across one that must had been around the 1800s, Vivian Usherwood.

will the new proposed billa SOPA affect this site if it becomes law

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I have read a little about the new Stop Online Piracy Act bill and it seems disturbing. Just with a letter or a compliant by someone they could threaten any site. They cant take it down per say but it may as well have if they can force google and any search engine to remove the said site with just a letter, cut the site from its ad revenue. And there seems to be more to it than that but its above my feeble understanding of how the web works. BUt they can all do this without any judge being involved or finding anyone guilty.

New Girl in the Band Chapter 4 - Final Chapter

New Girl in the Band Final Chapter
By Princess

Thanks To Stanman63 For Editing!!

Synopsis:David submits to the bands demand that he be a girl for them and some interesting and uncomfortable situations develop.

I have a question about hormones treatment in fiction

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many stories use such plot devices as extra strength hormones designed to put such a powerful dose of hormones that they will produce almost instant results. Even im guilty of using that in my most recent addition to one of my stories. Its interesting but from what I understand it cant really happen.

Is it okay to include some medical aspects in a story if i dont know

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in my most recent story I received this review

this sort of fiction and won't be reading more. The idea of a uterine transplant is the brain child
of someone with no medical or physiological/anatomical knowledge. Strictly in the realms of fantasy.Sorry.

Now I admit I have no medical knowledge but I dont really think this is a big deal that makes this story unreadable. and while a uterine transplant may seem totally ridiculous to someone with medical knowledge it doesnt to me. And I have seen other stories here that include it that have been very successful.

New Girl in the Band Chapter 2


The New Girl In The Band Chapter 2

By Princess
Thanks To Stanman63 For Editing!

Synopsis:David submits to the bands demand that he be a girl for them and some interesting and uncomfortable situations develop.

New Girl in the Band Chapter 1


The New Girl In The Band


Chapter 1

By Princess

Thanks To Stanman63 for editing!

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A popular all girls rock and roll band needs a new member for their world tour. The lead singers annoying little brother seems like a good choice.

I cant remember the title to a story I want to see again

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It is annoying when im trying to find a story but i cant remember the freaking name. It was posted earler this year, or more like, it was reposted and rewritten. Its about a high school boy that plays a prank on the teacher, posing as a girl. He looks very much like a girl and so in doing that, he some how gets roped into running for the prom queen. And, some how he wins and has to do that job for the school. His mother finds out and it turns into a big mess. but he likes it.

Jenny

Jenny: Chapter 1

 

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Stanman63 proofread

“Jennifer, you ungrateful bitch! Why haven’t you done any of your chores today?” she yelled as she entered the bedroom. He was sitting on his bed wearing a black satin maids outfit.

A question about believability and suspension of disbelief

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I have been criticized about my story lacking belief. It wasnt much but I have been thinking aobut my stories last chapter (Vendetta chapter 6) and its lack of believability. I agree, it wasnt very believable. But does that make it bad?

Unbelievable stories some times become a big hit. Look at Batman. 1989 and the begins. they were HUGE hits at the box office, but lets face it. it isnt very believable. What made those unbelievable stories such huge hits.

And superman. My personal favorite but come on. a flying indestructible man. We love him.

The Vendetta: Chapter 6


The Vendetta Chapter Final Chapter

By Princess

Events conspire against a successful young woman with a dark painful past. She is forced to confront her frightening past that she has been running away from her whole adult life.

The Vendetta: Chapter 4


The Vendetta Chapter 4

By Princess

Events conspire against a successful young woman with a dark painful past. She is forced to confront her frightening past that she has been running away from her whole adult life.

The Vendetta: Chapter 3


The Vendetta Chapter Three

By Princess

Events conspire against a successful young woman with a dark painful past. She is forced to confront her frightening past that she has been running away from her whole adult life.

Can someone help me understand how to write in past tense

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I understand that is how most fiction is written but, its kind of a problem with this I am writing.

{Susan owned a large industry and ran it almost herself and Kerry defended them legally. Kerry was a brilliant powerful attorney. Kerry had ambitions beyond that and they have been lobbying for the democratic presidential selection. She has Susan's full support. }

I edited and proofread the recent story I posted and I'm hope someone can tell me if it is any better now

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Yes I'm asking for more comments. I went though the entire story line per line of Allens Discovery chapter 2 and did alot of changes, edits and corrections to make it easier to read. There were alot of errors and sentences that just didn't make since when I went over it again.

I am wondering if it is better now.

Allen's Discovery - Chapter 2

Allen's Discovery

Chapter 2

By Princess

Copyright © 2010 Princess
When Allen's mother dies, he is left without anyone to comfort him in his need to be a girl. So he starts wearing his sister's clothes which leads to many adventures and both siblings discover things about each other.

Allen's Discovery - Chapter 1

Allen's Discovery

Chapter 1

By Princess


Copyright © 2010 Princess



When Allen's mother dies, he is left without anyone to comfort him in his need to be a girl. So he starts wearing his sister's clothes which leads to many adventures and both siblings discover things about each other.

I am confused about the readers comments

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I was delighted by the reaction and the comments to my first story, A boys letter. I wanted to see how Fictionmania readers would accept it and I was happy that it got 9. Most of them just written to say it depressed them lol. Well at least they bothered to tell me

So that inspired me to write a second one, to get the boy out. That got some comments here but at FM. well only one responded and I thought that many who were depressed by the sad story would be happy for the second. I dont know, I guess they may be. Now I am confused
But thanks to those that commented here :)

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