poem reposted as a story

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Someone requested that I post my little poem as a story instead a blog, so I hope that's okay.

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I once had a blog, somebody said, story instead...

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laika's picture

These song parodies always trigger the bad poetry machinery in my brain...

I had a girl once,
I had to pay, it wasn't free
I sold all i had
i have no sword,
nor ouija board...

There. That's out of my head.
I commented here because I didn't want
to sully your fine bit of doggerol with that.
It's not terrible, the last line redeems it slightly
but it's not me + i'm not gonna do a whole song...
~hugs, ronni

I think,

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Hypatia Littlewings's picture

Poems do go in the story category, normally.

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