Rellawing

Hi everyone! I'm new here, and getting used to the system. I want to expose my writing to a wider audience, but I have to admit I like the system at TGStorytime so much better. If I get a lot of comments I may post them all here as well, otherwise please have look at my work. You can download in a epub format there or just casually read on the site! Please let me know how you like or dislike my writing!
Rellawing TGStorytime > http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=4342