The Academy

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The Academy

I loved this story. I was just suspensful enough to provide a lot of interest, and engaged poetic license enough to make it relatively light in comparison to some stories I have read.

It was a disappointment for Diana Hunter to die but it was understandable.

Blessings and peace.

Gwenellen

bice3

This is a very good beginning. So much is left unexplained, that I feel as though I were still on an introduction. The plot is intriguing,trying to understaher motive, I reread thr explanation of why the female dominated world would be better, but I do not see what would make it so. The story line is interesting reading and found myself being drawn in. I was thus disappointed when part 2 ended without a part 3 ready to unfold.
Thank you for sharing this atory with us.

Thank You...

...for reading my story and for leaving a comment. I appreciate it.

Part 3 is under construction and will be posted as soon as it is ready. Thank you for your patience.