Boys of Summer


Boys of Summer

D. Eden's picture

I truly enjoyed reading every installment of this story, but was extremely disappointed when I finished up chapter 30 and wasn't able to go on.

Is there more, and if so how can I find the rest? If this is all there is, then that is truly a shame. I am left hanging from the edge of the cliff wanting more. Please throw me a rope and finish the story line.

You have a real gift - don't leave me here wondering what happens to your delightful cast of characters!


D. Eden

Dum Vivimus, Vivamus

No more for the moment

I had some rather heavy criticism leveled at me over this particular story. It's one of my earlier efforts, and one of the first times I really tried to step out of my comfort zone and include a few things that really aren't my cup of tea. The criticism just ended up being a bit too much.

I'm planning to rewrite the entire story at some point in the future, but considering other things I'm working on it'll be a while.

But thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Melanie E.

Finish the story

Valcyte's picture

I agree with the prior comments. The story should be finished. You may have a sour taste in your mouth from the unnamed critics but as far as I can tell you have created a great setting, attractive characters, believable interactions, good suspense, and plausible reasons for the drama. It may not be your masterpiece but it is your baby and not only have you abandoned your baby but you have failed your fan base, (and I don't mean that hypercritically, only observationally). How can you leave us hanging? At the very least you should team up with a coauthor and play it out. It's a good story. It's obvious that those of us who have read it now care about the characters. That in itself should be enough to silence the critics.

Go ahead, finish it, we are relying on you for closure.


Good Story