The Family Girl #079: Shepherd Moon Part 4 is coming

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Blog #79: Shepherd Moon Part 4 Coming this month!
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Attention All Terran Citizens:

The long-awaited final instalment of Shepherd Moon will be posted within the month of June, AD 2016.

Tune in to the communications portal “BigCloset Topshelf” on your comm-computers, and select Terran English as your language mode. Data feed will be available shortly.

Be warned: this entertainment volume from Cabot, Roberta J. is very large, exceeding 100,000 words. Be prepared.

Recent intelligence indicate that other volumes are also to be published shortly. These include:

(1) The concluding instalment of Danny
(2) The follow-up second volume of the Drew Nance, Girl Detective Stories, to be called “The Hidden Staircase”
(3) The next volumes of The Library: Rewrite and Witching Hour

New titles will also be published, such as new volumes of The New Agent, Cosplay Christmas and New Endings, New Beginnings.

There is also some unconfirmed intelligence saying that there may be totally new fiction titles from Ms Cabot's coming as well.

While awaiting publication of the new volume of Shepherd Moon, review Ms Cabot other recent large-volume documents currently on-line. These are:

(1) Transformers Revisited
(2) Drew Nance, Girl Detective Book 1: The Secret of the Old Clock

Be sure to review these volumes: there shall be a test. Clicking the "Kudos" button is optional but highly recommended.

Disseminate this information to all users and readers as soon as able.

Stand by for further announcements.

(BY ORDER OF THE COMMANDER)

Lady Amelia Catherine Steele, Admiral
Commander, United Earth Defense Forces - Fifth Fleet
aboard DSC Shepherd Moon, coordinates 235.103.403
2nd June 2322

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Aye, aye, Admiral

  

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As you were, sailor   :)

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Great to Hear...

Just read the story again after this announcement and I'm looking forward to the rest.

(Fifth Fleet, huh? Given the new FTL capability, I wonder what the other four are doing...)

Eric

There are lots more in store

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That little detail was just one of many, Eric.

I was very ambitious with this one. I put in a lot (and I do mean A LOT) of extra details. After all, this will be the last instalment of the Shepherd Moon story arc (although there will be a lot of room for other stories in this universe), so I wanted to accomplish one of my goals with this.

This level of richness in detail was one of my goals for this series. This is my own stab at worldbuilding, you see, and I guess I wanted to fill the world of the Shepherd Moon with enough detail that will make it hang together enough to transport the reader to a different universe, much like Frank Herbert's Dune, Isaac Asimov's Foundation, David Brinn's Uplift series, Niven and Pournelle's The Mote in God's Eye, Kim Stanley Robinson's Mars trilogy, Orson Scott Card's Ender's Game series, Stephen Donaldson's Thomas Covenant Chronicles and JRR Tolkien's Lord of the Rings. (I'm sure you have at least some of these fine books on your bookshelf)

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A lofty goal, I know, but, even if I fail in my worldbuilding, I hope Part 4 will at least be readable and enjoyable, which is difficult. Filling in a lot of details yet not detract from the telling of the story itself is very, very, very difficult. I sincerely hope that my story does not get too pedantic.

And, yes, I know that I will be leaving myself open to all of the many, many, many readers out there who are so into the details and their need to have fictional facts just the way they like it. I don't know if you remember, or was even around, when I got inundated by all the "corrections" that the readers so generously posted when I put up my Shepherd Moon stories, and had my "meltdown." But even if that happens again, at least, with Part 4, I will have concluded the story.

This time, when I am inevitably inundated with all of the "corrections" to the details and the science and the history covered in Part 4, I will do my best to be less affected than I was when I posted Parts 1, 2 and 3, and I hope that the readers will consider the fact that the Shepherd Moon is a work of fiction - that it is make-believe, and not insist on a "correct" way of depicting "facts" when they are fictional facts, after all, and to go easy.

Anyway, sorry for the sermon. Part 4 will be up pretty soon (although I am fairly sure I will be finishing it up when Moe and I are back home again).

Thanks!!


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Thanks for the Long Comment...

Appreciate the reply. (And yes, I do have all of those, except that I barely got through the first two Dune books around forty years ago and stopped there.)

I wondered if you've read Poul Anderson's After Doomsday ; your setup and his have some things in common. (And a lot of things that aren't, of course.) It's another scenario where humans -- because they think differently than the aliens in the Federation (led by avians) and the medievalist Empire (ruled by humanoids) -- come up with improvements on the alien technology and breakthroughs of their own, sufficient to lead their favored side to victory in a key battle.

(I recommend the book, BTW, to fans of that kind of story. It even includes an epic-type poem describing the key battle (with the exposition of the actual events serving as annotation), and a neat twist ending.)

And yes, I recalled the nature of the earlier story comments, even before I re-read them last night. (In fact, IIRC, I PMed you about your 12-minute non-FTL communication with Neptune and calculated the closest the two planets could get. Glad you were able to work around it in the side story.) As you've probably seen in my most recent PM, I'm not one to dispute your "fictional facts"; it's when your "real facts" (e.g., gimmick-free time and distance) don't add up that I have problems. (And I discuss them in PMs, not public comments -- learned that lesson about eight years ago.)

Best, Eric

World building

You seem to have a lot of the world building established, older fed races are fiscal sticks in the mud, first series of Human interstellar craft are designed for rapid production without compromising function which means a compromise in aesthetics, Elyrans (and presumably other races) have a very mixed bag of technology, they have FTL (though that is mostly bought/borrowed tech because of location) but they also still use vacuum tubes, technological commercialism hasn't set in yet for them so PCBs and integrated circuits are expensive. seriously though with their tech level, they almost certainly have to trade for their space tech, and trade they are apparently very fluent in, because in addition to their planets being in the path of major trade routes, they were able to take advantage of this fact significantly enough to afford the ships they sent in the expedition, yes they saw it as largely a military/defensive endeavor combined with religious sentiment, but the fact is, they didn't have to divert resources from other projects, or at least didn't have a problem diverting them. Dravidians are practical and pragmatic, reside mostly near inner rim, have a satellite beacon project, logical but perhaps a little too unadventurous. Dixx are skilled combatants and can fly also have a reforestation project that they postponed for Earth mission. Arachnians are closer to crabs and diverted resources from Ice towing project that is meant to counter drought, Erocii are terraforming a planet that will bring large amounts of refined metals and other commerce. Of course a lot of this is stage setting, but still. Even with human phase wave/radio assistance, not even the satellite beacon project should take much of a back seat to the war, the Ice towing and reforestation projects are essential for healthy populations that can help fuel the effort, the metal from terraforming and money from tourist and commercial trade can bolster efforts, and navigation is essential as even though Earth ships don't need the assistance, they wont be involved in every mission and other fleets do need the help. My guess is some of the Earth fleet is sent to aid in those projects to strengthen diplomatic relations, as well as for the strategic value.

I also would bet that the first new earth ships to stop being blocky will be the fighters and "carriers" or as I would consider them, troop transports, when I read it I was curious why they bothered retrofitting those rather than flat out replacing them, other then the catapult that i am surprised isn't an electromagnetic ram (unless it's for the BSG imagery) there really isn't much of an advantage oh wait the entire fighter/shuttle bay is the catapult- allowing for formation launching- clever but then they would have to be oriented for the "down is out" problem , and considering how quickly they built the fleet, it wouldn't take long to do, perhaps even LESS time then it took to modify them after all, fighters are generally built around their propulsion systems, the only other advantage I see (other than the Seeker version of Earth FTL) is not needing to make significant alterations to the flight deck and hangars. The main payoff I see for that choice is the allusion that without a launch assist system, launch before ship-maneuverable is not possible. Its neat but really it was just the shell of the Shrike fighters that carry over. come to think of it, the only explanation I can think of, is that at the time of the Seeker Mission, fighter production hadn't been at full force yet, and none of the new fighters could be diverted to Seeker because they are produced too far away, and newer ships were overtaking the demand. Still the look of the ships can serve morale purposes...

Likely the hastily built

Likely the hastily built ships are still mostly or partly in service, taking on more defensive roles, until they are melted down and used to make their replacements, though melting down may not be necessary, they may be slower than other ships in the fleet, but they are perfectly fine for patrols, also defense is established, massive mining operations and interstellar commerce can be set up to provide raw materials for new vessels, as well as the salvage from battle sights, the real question is with a population that's 15% of our current one, how are they managing to get the people necessary for five fleets?

Having just read

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Shepherd Moon parts 1-3, for the first time, I'm very impressed. This is really good. Am happy to hear part 4 is soon to appear; actually, the announcement is what lead to reading the first three parts, and the interview. Have you considered publishing this when it is complete?

Yours,

John Robert Mead

Well, if you liked them...

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Thank you so much, Robert.

But if you liked them so much, you should try reading my other stories, too. heehee lol

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Here's the link to the rest of my stories: http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/book/14775/roberta-j-cabot

But if you like scifi-type stuff specifically, I suggest you read "Transformers Revisited." (http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/62005/transformers-rev...)

You can also try "The New Agent" - a fanfic of the Syfy TV show, "Warehouse 13." (http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/34511/new-agent) or "Counterfeit Crusader" (http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/29402/playing-part-cou...), although Counterfeit Crusader is more an adventure-superhero type story in the manner of Whately Academy, and is a fanfic of "The Center" (another story here in BCTS by Lilith Langtree) and Marvel's Black Widow character. Counterfeit Crusader is also connected to one of my continuing stories, "Danny" (http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/book/14774/danny).

Anyway, it's just a suggestion. lol.

As to publishing Shepherd Moon, lots of others have suggested the same thing for my other stories. I guess I have to think about it.

Thanks again!


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