A Legal Trap - Chapter 11

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Last Updated: 2/16/2024 to smooth out portions of the story.

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March 12th, 8:36 p.m.
"Whoa, Whoa! Hey… Elizabeth, are you OK? Wait, hey, hey... Just sit still; don't try getting up. You're OK. Just relax; stay sitting."

I could hear Paul speaking and feel a hand on my shoulder, trying to hold me steady. Then someone’s hand was trying to get my hair out of my face. I felt woozy and cold, like sweat cooling on my body after a run.

"I'm a good," I mumbled.

I hadn't totally blacked out, but this panic attack was one of the worst I'd ever had. I could feel my heart racing still, then I felt the urge to throw up again. I got my head over the toilet in time to dry-heave and cough into the bowl, but nothing came up. I spit a coating of nasty from my mouth into the bowl. Paul flushed the toilet to get rid of the vomit, so there wasn’t really anything in it besides what I’d just spit.

"Guess the Buffalo wing sauce didn't sit well?"

Wing sauce... Ah, okay, that explains the fiery burning and red liquid I'd spewed into the toilet. I guess I'm not bleeding internally. Well, probably not bleeding right? Blood was in me but contained, so not... Fuck! Get a grip! I took a few slow breaths, and then tilted my head toward Paul.

"I'm so sorry," I whispered.

He chuckled. "You're kidding, right? Don't worry about it, you cool just sitting there a second?"

"Yeah," I replied, leaning my chin on my arms which were sitting on the edge of the cold porcelain toilet rim.

He pulled my hair back and let it fall over my shoulders, then tentatively removed his hand from my shoulder, keeping me steady. I guess there wasn’t an extra set of hands in here. Thank GOD!

When I didn't fall over, he moved to the sink. I heard water running, and a moment later he was placing a wet, cool washcloth on my neck. Then he handed me a damp hand towel.

"Here, wanna maybe wipe your face? I can take you to a hospital."

NO! Please no! No hospital! I shook my head, 'No' slowly, and took the hand towel so I could wipe my face. I spit a few times to get more of the acrid aftertaste out of my mouth.

"Can you grab my bottle of water?" I asked.

"I'll get you a new one. Don't go anywhere."

"Yeah, sure..." Not like I was in any condition to move about anyway.

I felt a little disoriented, but things were in focus, and I heard Paul trot off to get me a new bottle of water. Okay, I'm aware of my surroundings. JUST RELAX! I thought about that: how many times does telling yourself to relax really do a damn thing? Pretty much never! Breathe...

I needed to straighten my shit out quick, or Paul was going to insist on a trip to the ER. God, no hospitals! That would make this panic attack even more uncomfortable, adding another thing to stress over. Breathe...

"Here, I wouldn't guzzle that or anything. Give your system a chance to reset. Small sips," he coaxed.

He sounded pretty motherly right now, but I really did appreciate him being here. Wanna get over this? Think about him. If he wasn't here, where would you be—wedged between the toilet and bathtub? I cracked the slightest of smiles.

"What's funny?" he asked.

I didn't realize Paul could see me in the mirror in front of the vanity, even though he was behind me.

"Nothing, I’m just feeling stupid right now," I offered.

"Yeah, well, it’s been a pretty packed couple days for you. Be nice to get the hell out of here and back to your real life."

What did that mean? If I go back to Seattle, that's it; I don't get to see you again. I felt a pang in my gut and an uncomfortable rolling in my stomach. Why did I have a headache? Augh...

"You know, you'll have to deal with me back there. I mean, I'm not Bryant Caliper, barista extraordinaire, or anything, but I’ve got a few skills."

What? He's messing with me! Why do I go to the extreme worst case? Fuck!

"Hey, I'd like to get off the floor, think you can help me to my bed?"

"Really? You're in the middle of a panic attack, and all you can think about is getting me in bed."

"Haha... Not funny. I mean, it is, just not right now," I complained.

I extended my hand, but he hugged me beneath my arms and got me standing. I felt good enough to walk, but I let him keep an arm around me until I was sitting on the bed.

"Are you sure you want to lie down?" he asked.

"Mmhuh... Yeah, I think I'm about over this. Maybe the Xanax kicked in a little before I threw it up."

"Alright then," he said as he spun my feet around slowly and I laid back. "You good?"

"You told me I was... You questioning that now?" I tried smiling after questioning him, and pulled at the comforter to get it over me. Paul chuckled and helped pull it over me.

"Yeah, guess I did. I'll stand by that still. Let me refresh your washcloth," he said, heading to the bathroom while pulling out his phone. "Hey Tim... Jacob said you want what we have on the investigation tonight?"

That was the last I could hear before he went into the bathroom. I could hear the water running, and then he was back.

"Yeah, that's the last stuff; I have some email stuff to turn over too and some VPN ideas."

Paul put the cool washcloth on my forehead.

"Yeah, that was a bit of a surprise... Thirty minutes... No, just me; we can call Elizabeth after we're done... Sure, see you in a few."

He put his phone away and was studying my face.

"I can go. I'm fine," I offered.

"It's going to be tech talk, and I know how that crap thrills you. Stay here; Tim can call you for your statement about where you were, which might involve telling him about, ah, well, this morning."

At first I wasn't following, then I got it, 'this morning...' - he left my room at 2 AM - that technically was this morning. I would have just said last night we had been together.

"Think that will raise any eyebrows?" I asked.

I was studying his face for a sign telling someone we were together was going to be a problem. It didn't seem to faze him.

"Not going to bother me... A problem for you?"

I just smiled. Are you reading my mind again, Mr. Kline? ?

March 12th, 9:25 p.m.
I answered my phone on the first ring, "This is Elizabeth."

"Elizabeth Gallagher, I'm Special Agent Timothy Warren of the FBI, and I was wondering if I could ask you a few questions."

"Yes, I can answer questions," and as soon as I said that, I felt foolish, but I was very much awake and focused. I can do this, nothing to worry about.

"Thank you... Miss, there really isn't an easy way to ask this, but, well, first, I want to inform you that this call is being recorded. You are not obligated to answer my questions without the presence of an attorney. I am not reading your Miranda Rights; this call is an informal whereabouts check. Do you understand that you do have a right to refuse to answer my questions at any time?" he asked.

I knew he had to state some specifics, but it was no less daunting to hear his little preamble.

"Yes, Agent Warren, I understand."

"Alright, as I stated, there is no easy way to ask this, and I want you to know I respect your privacy, but I have to ask for your legal name for the record. After you answer, you can request that I refer to you going forward, however best makes you comfortable. Understood?"

"Yes, Agent Warren. My legal name is Edward Anson Gallagher; I would prefer to be addressed as Elizabeth."

I didn't fault Tim; since this was an official inquiry, he had hoops to jump through. Why hadn't I at least gotten my name changed officially before this? Yeah, that would be a lack of money! I wondered if he would allow me to call him Tim, nah, to informal.

"Thank you, Elizabeth. Can you tell me if you have a cell phone?"

Alright, that's an interesting start.

"Yes, Agent Warren, you are speaking to me on my cell phone currently. I assume you got my number from my employer."

"Actually, Mr. Kline made your number available to me; I hope that's alright."

"It is," I replied, and I thought about it some more after answering his question. They can track the phone; that's why he asked me that.

"Did you leave the general Phoenix area at any time during the last twenty-four hours?"

"No, I did not..."

Tim went on to ask for people I had been in contact with since noon yesterday, and I rattled that off quickly, including being with Paul until 2 AM this morning and a good part of today. I told him I could produce a receipt from my breakfast this morning and likely a statement from the server. He actually chuckled at that offer, and we wrapped up our official "alibi" conversation, which is what the purpose of this call was. Tim did mention that the Phoenix Police would be repeating this call with me tomorrow, and he apologized in advance for that. I told him it wasn't a problem.

"OK, that ends this interview. Elizabeth, do you have any questions?"

"No, I'm good. Thank you, Agent Warren."

There was a chuckle in the background. "Hold on..." There was a clicking sound, then, "You likely recognized the chuckle, Elizabeth... I've got you on speakerphone. Say hello, Paul."

"Hello Paul," Paul said in a funny-sounding voice.

"You're an idiot. You know that, right?" Tim said.

"Hi Liz," Paul chimed in.

"Hello, Mr. Kline," was my reply, and I couldn’t help but smile at Paul for being silly.

"Elizabeth, Paul handed over the email chain and detailed your intentions. I like it. Too bad we didn't get anything from the email. Excellent try, though. Paul mentioned you spoke to Amber Carson, and she said the person from the chat room may not have been David Lafleur."

"Agent Warren, may I call you Tim?"

"Oh God, yes, please!" he replied enthusiastically.

"Thanks Tim... Yes, I think that's what she was going to tell me—that it was someone else."

"Do you recall what you asked her and her answer?"

"Think I asked something like, 'Was that David or someone else?' and she started to reply, 'It was someone...,’ and that's when her father grabbed the phone. He wasn't too happy with either of us."

"So she didn't say specifically that it was someone 'else'?" He annunciated the 'else'.

"No, but given how our conversation was going, I think I backed her into having no other option but to tell me."

Tim interrupted me, "You backed her into a corner? Can you explain that?"

After Paul had left, I got up and took another. 25 mg Xanax because I knew this call was going to stress me the fuck out. I had no idea how much of the drug was in my system keeping my 'fight or flight' adrenaline shot from tipping me over after barfing earlier, but I wasn't going to take any chances. I was really scared of going down the crazy panic attack/ barfing route again.

Even Xanax fortified, I could feel the flutter in my chest and the slight tightening feeling in my stomach. FBI agents were smart; Tim was no exception, even for a tech junkie like Paul. Just answer the question; don't over think it.

"Tim, Amber, and I have had two conversations—I wouldn't say we're buds, but in this last one, I pretty much called bullshit on some of the crap she was saying about David Lafleur. Not sure it was the right tact, but in the end I told her we knew about her chat room conversation with 'FlowerGirl', we knew about a planned meeting next week, and I asked her straight out if she was talking to David in the chat room. I'm pretty sure she was going to tell me it wasn't him, and now with his murder in Vancouver, well, that might make sense."

That was the first time I'd spoken the word 'murder' aloud. Paul and I hadn't even discussed it before he left to meet Tim.

"You might be right. We checked her email for a reply on your last sent message; nice job on that one, by the way - no reply yet. I have everything Paul was working on, so I'll be moving forward with that, including trying to trace the VPN activity. Paul told me that Jacob wants you to assist with an agent interview with Amber tomorrow. That's awesome; your rapport with her should make that go easier," he said.

"I'll be assisting an FBI agent in her interview? No one told me that." I’m sure I sounded defensive in that reply.

Paul chimed in, "Jacob and Landon worked that out, Elizabeth. You won't be running it or anything—mostly just there to be an advocate for Amber in case she needs someone to confide in or advice. It will only be the three of you, so it shouldn't be too bad."

Are you kidding?! Are you serious right now?! I'm going to be with some agent grilling this teen who is full of herself. Fuck! How do I get out of this?

"When is this happening?"

"Tomorrow morning, 11 AM," Tim replied.

Great! I answered a few other questions Tim had, and then it was obvious we were done. Paul mentioned he would stop by after he got back to the hotel. I told him I was going to take a shower and go to bed, and that I still wasn't feeling great. He sounded disappointed, but I just wasn't in the mood.

Too much had happened over the last couple hours, and I needed to shut it all down. I did hope I didn't embarrass him in front of Tim.

After the call ended, I got a text from Paul a couple minutes later: "U OK?"

I replied, "Yes, just wasted."

"OK. Breakfast? 9 AM?"

I replied, "CU then."

"Good night. I hope you feel better. Call me if you need anything."

"I will. I feel a lot better; I'm just tired. Good night. XO."

And the conversation ended. There was no way I was getting up to take a shower, though I'm sure I needed one. I shimmied out of my jeans, worked the gaff off, then my blouse and bra—I left my socks on. The AC was droning, and I rolled over and hit the light on the nightstand after plugging my phone in.

Time to check out...

March 13th, 10:47 a.m.
I could only get myself to eat toast and a banana at breakfast. Paul seemed like he was full of energy. I felt like I was eating my last meal before being taken to the electric chair—in reality, entering an interview room at the FBI building. There was no lack of talking Paul was doing, and I tried to smile and keep my emotions in check, while appearing interested. Right now, I wish I was back at breakfast or better yet, in bed still.

We had arrived early to the FBI offices; why couldn't we have been late?

I got a few moments with Jacob prior to meeting the agent who was going to interview Amber. He reassured me that I had the full support of Carson’s and that this interview was exploratory in nature, but it did have an urgency factor given what had happened to Lafleur. I wanted to tell him I wasn't up to this, but before I had a chance, an agent interrupted us and took me to the interview room.

When I entered the room, there were four chairs and an attractive woman looking over notes on a legal pad. She stood, extended her hand, and said, "Hi, I'm Special Agent Carr. You must be Elizabeth Gallagher."

She was all smiles—one of those that showed way too many teeth, was polite, dressed impeccably as expected, and certainly had the look of someone not to be underestimated.

"Yes, nice to meet you," I said shaking her hand politely.

She pointed to a chair across from her, and I sat and said, "I like your skirt, Calvin Klein. I have one just like it."

I nodded and thought, there was no way you shop at second-hand stores.

"So, I've talked to Agent Warren, and he's detailed some of the specifics we're looking for today. He mentioned you might have had a breakthrough with Amber Carson last night regarding the chat room. Is that right?"

"Yes, but we were interrupted by her father though before I got a definite admission."

I wondered what else Tim had told her.

"Agent Warren said he was a little angry."

"Understandably so; he's trying to keep his daughter in check," I replied, feeling a little confidence building.

I knew I couldn’t hold my own with Agent Carr, but I had some skills. She hadn't given me her first name, so this was likely the extent of our buddy-to-buddy rapport. I didn't feel like she was judging me yet, so we were off to a good start. Don't over think this...

"Why do you think she got involved with David Lafleur?"

"That's something you should ask her. You might have to read between the lines to pick up the reasoning, though. Could be validation, could be the thrill factor... May I ask you a question?"

"Of course," Agent Carr said.

"Do you know much about transgenderism? Sexual dysphoria?" I asked.

"To be honest, I'm not in my element regarding transgender studies. I'm a USC graduate with a Masters in Psychology. I understand the dimensions and breadth of sexual dysphoria, but to say I know everything related to something so complex would be foolhardy. I've performed many psychological examinations and evaluations for the bureau, so it was felt by Director Keith, I might be a less scary and non-adversarial interviewer. I can assure you, we just want to find out what we can, as delicately as we can, and not inflict damage on Amber."

I think I could warm up to this woman. She put on no airs, no falsehoods; I liked her.

"Thank you for that. I will assist as best I can."

There was a knock at the door. Both Agent Carr and I stood as Amber was brought into the interview room. She looked nervous. Agent Carr handled the introductions, set some basic ground rules, and assured Amber that nothing she said would lead to any legal problems for her. She seemed to be reading the same introductory script I had been given last night by Tim. Agent Carr asked if Amber had any questions; she nodded 'No'.

"Amber, do you recall when you first met David Lafleur?" Agent Carr asked.

"No, it was last year though; maybe around summer? It was before I went back to school," she said, sounding a little nervous.

"You are a senior this year; congratulations. Do you have problems in school, like bullying? We noticed your Facebook account is pretty sparse for a teenage girl."

"No more than anyone else. My mom kept my Facebook account free of the couple idiots who initially tried to start crap. She shut those people down pretty quickly, didn’t mean I didn’t get hassled at school. There were plenty of times she went to the school district to get people off my back. I just didn't post there because it was more of a pain than it was worth, and she was monitoring it pretty much daily. I don't care what people think of me," she replied.

"How did you meet David Lafleur?"

"He subscribed to my webcam sessions," she said with more confidence than I would have been able to muster. "I'd like to know if you have arrested David,” she stated.

Here we go, I thought. Agent Carr looked at something on her note pad, scribbled a '+' sign next to something she'd written, and then looked at Amber for a moment.

"The Royal Canadian Mounted Police were dispatched to arrest Mr. Lafleur in Vancouver, British Columbia, last night. They really haven't told us much about it, Amber. They know we want him extradited back to the States so he can face charges here, but that's not going to happen quickly. That's really all I know at this point."

"What charges? He didn't do anything," she protested.

"Amber, I think we know that's not entirely true. You just told me he subscribed to your webcam sessions sometime last summer. That would mean you were still a minor, and at a minimum, he could be charged with sexual exploitation of a minor. But let's not get wrapped up in those things because Canada will need to figure out the laws he broke there before we..."

Amber interrupted her, "That's not how it happened!"

"We have your statement, Amber, and we have more than enough interaction between you and Mr. Lafleur over the past six months from your Tumblr account and Patreon subscription service to back that up."

I thought, Please don't add that Paul and I helped get you that information.

"I want to talk to him... I'm not telling you anything until I talk to him," she said with less confidence than she probably thought she was showing.

"Amber, if you really want to help David, you'll help us by answering our questions. Something you tell us could help him, and I promise you this: we will supply his lawyers with every bit of information they request; you have my word on that."

OMG! I was believing this woman! She was slick, and she just personalized Lafleur in their conversation by referring to him as David. She eased into that so effortlessly.

"Fine...," was Amber’s answer.

Legally, Lafleur's lawyers would have to be presented with a listing of evidence intended to be used against him so his defense could be prepared, which included witnesses. Amber was being played, but not necessarily being lied too—well, maybe a little. Agent Carr continued, but it was like a reset: a couple non-threatening questions, then one about her subscription income. Amber was talking, less like the bitchy teen I'd run into and more like, her parents had told her to knock this shit off and come clean? I hadn't said a word since the interview started, and we were nearly ten minutes into it.

"The other night you were in a chat room with," Agent Carr paused to look at her notes, "Someone named 'Flowergirl'. Do you remember that?"

"Yes, that wasn't David; I told her that,” she said nodding her head toward me.

"Who is this person?"

"I don't know. She's someone David said was cool and could help me with stuff. She had different names when we would chat online. She sent me things sometimes. That's all I know," Amber said with a huff.

"And this person was going to get you connected with David next week in Vancouver," Agent Carr asked.

"Yes. I was supposed to already be with David, but that didn't happen. I was supposed to email her to get directions on how I was going to get there, but I couldn't remember her email address," she replied.

"What kind of stuff was she going to help you with?"

"Stuff," she looked embarrassed to say, but finally spoke after Agent Carr looked to be waiting and not about to speak until she got an answer. "Like getting into making videos and commercials, that kind of thing."

"Did she work for a specific company, a talent agency, or something of that nature?"

"David said she knew people."

"And was there a cost for this service she was going to provide?" Agent Carr asked.

"Yes, ten thousand dollars, which I have but you people," Amber was looking at me. "Locked me out of..."

"Besides money," Agent Carr interrupted her. "Were there other things this person asked for? Like demo videos or pictures?"

"Of course, I posted things online; I sent her stuff."

"Was it all sexual in nature?"

"Some of it was, yeah... It's how they get things done in the business, she told me. David was going to be my manager. It was going to happen until you people got involved,” she said, looking at me again.

Agent Carr asked a few other questions, and when she ran into resistance from Amber, she would change her approach, reeling Amber in by appearing to be on her side. It was masterful! I was in awe for most of the questioning. I couldn't get hardly anything from Amber without fighting her every step, and Carr was playing her like a piano.

"OK, well, I think I've got everything I need, Amber. Elizabeth, is there something I might have missed?" Agent Carr asked.

I wasn't prepared to be put on the spot, but judging by the questions asked, she had asked about everything they needed to move forward.

"I think that covers it," I said.

March 13th, 12:46 p.m.
Agent Carr asked me to stay behind while she returned Amber to her parents. She was only gone a couple minutes, and upon reentering the room.

“The Bureau appreciates your assistance with this investigation, Elizabeth; I want you to know that. This could have gone very badly for Amber, given her activities online. Statistically, we have a three-hour window after the report of a child abduction before it goes badly. After that time, it generally turns into a recovery operation.

“There are over two thousand reports of missing children daily; not all are abductions; some are runaways; and some are kids being forgetful about where they are supposed to be. Around here though, being so close to the border, more often immigrant children are abducted and not reported for fear of reprisals by gangs or being of deported.”

“I had no idea,” I said, surprised.

“We will investigate this fully, but it’s likely to end up being filed as a recovery for the victim with no after-action. The actors—one deceased, unknown others—will be out there operating until they slip up, I’m afraid. With the international implications and Canada needing to investigate the murder of Mr. Lafleur, well, there’s a lot going against us to actually make an arrest. Nothing Amber told me during this interview is significant enough to put us on the right trail.”

I agreed with her last statement. It was certainly eye-opening to witness Agent Carr handle Amber with such ease during the interview, though I wondered if she was also a lawyer to go along with her degree as a shrink.

Amber certainly opened up more than she had with me—it could have been Agent Carr’s approach, or maybe I just sucked at getting close to her. I still couldn’t understand how Amber thought stardom, fame, and boatloads of money were going to come her way while making a show of her new-found sexuality. Sure, short-term, she could maybe make some money, but long-term, I couldn't see it. She was being used; that was the bottom line.

“Oh… It, well… I mean, it sounds like a trafficking case, right? I was hoping the emailing we’d done might have given us a lead.”

“Yes, likely a sex trafficking case. It was a very good tact, trying to lure whomever was in the chat room into talking via email, but as of this morning, there still has not been a reply. Either that actor has moved on or is leery of the exchange. It could be that any number of things have spooked them into going dark. I understand Director Keith has made it clear to everyone that they are to stop all attempts to investigate further. You or Mr. Kline continuing to be involved may jeopardize our efforts going forward. Is that understood?”

I’m sure she was being polite; she sounded that way, but the undertone of her message was clear: don’t stick your noses where they don't belong.

“I totally understand Agent Carr. I’m actually headed back to Seattle tomorrow, and I’m looking forward to resuming my dull and boring life as a paralegal investigator for Mr. Wentz. I’m very much ready for some normalcy.”

“Excellent, well, I won’t keep you any longer, Elizabeth. You’ve done the Carson’s great service and have given the Bureau excellent leads to investigate. Thank you.”

Agent Carr extended her hand, which I shook. She was polished, a real ‘no shit'—straight shooter. I thanked her for her time and was escorted out to a conference room where Jacob, Paul, and Landon were talking about something, baseball, I think.

“Director Keith, we’re all wrapped up here,” Agent Carr announced.

“Good… Okay, anyone have any last questions?” When no one spoke, Landon continued, “I want to thank everyone for their assistance. Jacob, you’ve got some good eggs here with these two,” he said, looking at Paul and me. “If we need anything from either of you, we’ll be in touch.”

There were the customary handshakes all around, and then Paul and I were escorted out by Agent Carr. In the outer lobby, she thanked us again and shook our hands. Paul and I walked out into eighty-five degree sunshine, free of any more Amber responsibilities. I had mixed feelings about that. I do not like things left unfinished, but I got the sense from Agent Carr that the odds of getting to the bottom of this were slim no matter the resources thrown at it.

“So, what do you want to do now?” Paul asked.

“Eat… I’m starving!”

March 13th, 1:01 p.m.
At the car, it was decided we’d return to ‘our’ Mexican restaurant. We laughed thinking that and had virtually said it to one another at the same time. Paul said he was happy I was feeling better. I explained it was the drugs, but now that we were officially off the case, I did feel a whole lot more relaxed.

I asked about the Carson's, and he clued me into the conversation the Carson’s had with Landon while they were waiting for Amber to be finished with the interview. It sounded like until she was out of school, there were going to be some real restrictions put on her. One of the things he needed to do tomorrow was set up a permanent monitoring system of the internet traffic at Carson’s. It would include notifications when that traffic involved particular sites, the presence of international VPN traffic, abnormalities in packet trafficking, the sending of certain file types, or webcam usage.

It sounded like they weren't going to take any chances with her—that was a good plan!

She was eighteen, so technically an adult, but Paul said that Gary had told Jacob, “As long as she is living under our roof, that’s just the way it’s going to be.” referring to the new restrictions being put on her. Paul mentioned Stephanie didn’t have much to say during the exchange. I commented that she needed to be the parent, not the kid's friend.

I also added, “Of course I’m not a mom, so I can only imagine how this is tearing her apart.”

I wasn’t heartless, and a good portion of the blame for this altered path Amber went down belonged at her feet, even though she was just a kid. I mentioned all that, but in a less combative tone than I was thinking it.

When we got to the restaurant, we were seated right away; it was only about three-quarters seated. We ordered food, Paul ordered a beer, and I stuck with a sugar-laden bottle of Mexican Coke. Chips and salsa arrived with our drinks; we ‘clinked’ bottles together and began plowing through the chips.

God, this salsa is amazing!

“You looking forward to getting back,” Paul asked.

I finished the chip in my mouth and took a sip of my overly sweetened Coke before answering.

"Yeah, I wish I felt this was more of a success.” I put the bottle down and took a couple sips of water.

“It would have been nice to wrap it up in a pretty bow, but I guess it’s the nature of this kind of thing. Landon was saying they have over one hundred unresolved missing child cases so far this year, and those are just the ones that have been reported. All of those are girls, except for two boys. That’s some scary stuff.”

“Carr told me something about that also. It makes me sick,” I said, shaking my head in disgust.

We were silent for nearly a minute, internally processing our own feelings about this mess with Amber—maybe we were just annoyed we didn’t get the ultimate result from our efforts.

“What are you going to do when you get back?" Paul asked after taking a pull from his beer.

That’s an interesting question. Do you mean, like, do my laundry, go out for a run, and just generally hang out until I go to bed? Or are you talking about work or the idea of us seeing each other?

“I’m not sure,” I said sounding as non-committal as I could.

Two can play the beat-around-the-bush game.

“Any chance you, you want to continue this back home?” he asked shyly.

“Do you think our food will last until I see you again in Seattle?”

He looked really confused, but I began smiling, and he caught up.

"Yeah, seriously... No more food problems with you, Miss.”

“Oh God... Yeah, no more hugging the toilet for me! I'm so sorry about all that, really sorry," I whined, embarrassed.

"Don't worry about it," he paused like he was going to ask something, instead taking another pull from his beer.

OK, Mr. Kline, what's on your mind?

"And?"

"And... and what?" he replied.

"I don't know; I asked you."

I raised an eyebrow for effect.

"I'd like to see you after Phoenix Liz," he finally put out there.

"I think that's something I'd like to explore, too, Mr. Kline," I said, feeling a warmth spread all over my body.

"How do we do that? I mean, you have an end goal, a want to be you, like whole. I don't want you to feel uncomfortable getting there while around me. Know what I mean?"

Paul looked worried he'd crossed a line, and I'm sure the blank look on my face probably wasn't helping. How do I answer this?

"Well, I guess, I have some things to accomplish yet, Paul. And the truth is I'm going to be uncomfortable with you on so many levels until then and that’s scary to me." I paused to think about where to go next.

"See, that's something I don't want to lay on you—stress, fear, or discomfort."

I had no idea where this conversation was going to go or end up. Maybe I should have had a drink? OK, here goes nothing...

"You could be perfect—even flawless—in everything you say or do with me, and I'm going to be uncomfortable. This," I pointed a finger toward him, then back at myself, "is new territory. I didn't date when I was younger; sure, I've seen plenty of relationships, and I have a pretty good idea what I want from one. I... Jesus, that doesn't... No, that’s not what I was trying to," I tried to not sound frustrated, but I hadn't thought about this in any great depth—well, I had, but not how to explain it to someone.

"No, I get its new, but it's new for me also."

"Yeah, but until I’m 'whole'," I used his word to make the point, "Every day, everything you can imagine you do with your own body—like your male body—resets my, no, puts my very core... Not puts," I needed to slow down. "It tips my very core belief in who I am upside down. God, why is this so difficult to discuss? Look, bottom line: I was born in the wrong body. I got the wrong chromosome combo, but the right brain. I'm working on fixing that, but being uncomfortable and suffering—that's just the price I have to pay right now."

He took a couple seconds to consider his response: "OK, I am not going to say I totally get it, but I get some of it. I can accept that you get uncomfortable, and I'll try to not making that worse. But you have to let me in; trust that I'm your friend and want nothing but the best for you."

I couldn't help but tear up and lower my head.

"Whoa... Hey, that's not..." I heard him sliding his chair back, and then felt him hugging me. "That's not the reaction I was expecting. Relax kiddo... Only a couple people are looking at us right now," he said with a little chuckle.

I'm not sure why, but I didn't care that people were staring. I tried to gain some composure by hugging him back. When I eased out of the hug, he kissed my forehead, kissed me quickly, and returned to his seat.

"This is new for me," I half croaked, dabbing my napkin at my eyes.

"I know, you said that," he replied, smiling.

"Why? Why are you, would you want to be with me?" I couldn't finish without breaking into a silent sob, and I just ended it there. I hoped he knew what I was asking.

"Do I need a reason to want to get to know you better, Liz? Come on, I like the woman I've gotten to know these past couple days. That's probably the biggest reason; I really don't," he stammered just a little. "You have a quiet confidence I find really, I mean... It's attractive to me, I guess." When I looked at him, I could see he was smiling. "There's certainly a physical attraction. I don't know who blessed you with those legs, but I have a hard time not wanting to, I admire them, but not like a perv or anything. Come on, I'm a guy for God's sake; you're cute and beautiful."

That was absolutely the nicest thing anyone had ever said to me, but I wondered if he knew how debilitating the internal struggles could really be. I had told him I tried to end it all at my lowest point. That hadn't been for effect or sympathy; it was the truth. Every day was a battle—some days not so much, but most days there was a chipping away at everything I was trying to build. Did he get that?

"I'm damaged, Paul. I..."

He interrupted, "OK, let me help fix what I can, and what we can't, we'll deal with together."

This wasn't exactly how I thought lunch was going to go. I wanted this, wanted the normalcy, and wanted him and his happy ending. I wanted the help—to love and feel loved. I was worried that I would end up pushing him away. Did I deserve this? Did he, taking on all my problems?

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Legal Trap #11

I am so taken by this story as I am aware of the struggles and pitfalls of being Trans. Your knowledge of the subject certainly adds realism to the storyline and I guess we are all aware of what goes on out there in real life and on the web. Thanks for this story, I look forward everyday to reading more.

Choked up...

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It would be lie to say I don't look forward to the comments on this story. It is interesting to hear everyone's thoughts for sure, but when I read that I've hit a chord - I can't help but get choked up. I'm humbled... I just wanted you to know your comments touched me. Thank you...

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

The insecurity

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is debilitating. As Liz has stated, what she did in the past makes it worse.

The key to me seems to be trust and that she should have more now into Paul. He is honest with her and he also stated honestly that he, as a man, already sees her as an attractive woman. Get a grip, girl, please?

Would it be different if she was already operated? No, she'd worry about him finding out, if her mental state is anything to go by. The insecurity would be the same. Now, though the Elephant in the room has long been addressed and sent to the zoo. What better start could she still want?

Yes, yes, I know she wants to be complete. But why let a possible future waste the actual present? It is nice with him for her and vice versa. Carpe diem, Liz!

Monique S

Agreed...

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She's either going to blow a Carpe diem moment or seize it for all it's worth. Paul might just be the best thing she's run into and him willing to look past all her past life crap - JESUS! Grab that guy and don't let him get away! For goodness sake - he's willing to work with her to get through it all!

What I would say in her defense - in regard to her debilitating insecurity at times - is for some the sexual dysphoria can be crippling. Too many of my TG friends can't function a couple hours without something triggering a slap in the face that I won't pretend to fully understand - but is a momentary step back. In the scope of it all - a minor slap, like dust in your contact. You wiggle your eye around, then are good to go or you pop out the contact, wash it, put it back in, and you're good to go. For me - march the hell on! You've come this far - going back isn't the option - Carpe diem for sure!

I have a sneaking suspicion that she might just come out of all this OK, but you'll have to wait and see what awaits in the final chapter...

Monique - you've made my day with every comment you've left. Thank you for that! :-)

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

"Why would you want to be with ...[me ?]"

"Why? Why are you... would you want to be with...,"

Oh, Ghod, do I know this one! I can't remember a time when I didn't feel defective. Like no one would ever want me just for me, and no one would ever want to be with me unless they needed something from me, so I had to constantly deliver.

I don't have it quite as bad as Elizabeth, because I learned at a very early age to just shut out the awful feelings and the self-hatred and the knowledge that my body and my mind were a blight and just soldier on. I learned to look in the mirror and not see my ugliness, my ugly self. It wasn't until I started wearing skirts a few years ago that I could look in the mirror and find some part of my reflection that didn't revolt me. It wasn't until I transitioned and I had the hope of being in some sense female that I realized just how much I hated everything masculine in me.

It's a struggle to get through the day. I have to fight this sense that I'm nothing but a worthless ugly old man in a dress. When I'm feeling rested, physically, mentally, and emotionally, I can rise above it, but when I'm stressed and tired, the self-hate crowds around me like a mob of Dementors.

I don't get Amber, though.

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When I read the first five episodes of this, over on Fictionmania, I wasn't impressed. I thought that was all there was, and it was just a cop story with a slight TG element. It's the stuff since then that has hooked me.

Amber and Liz

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suffer from the same disease to varying degrees. They do not define themselves out of themselves, they define themselves from the reaction of others. Instead of connecting to the self deep down inside and valuing the reality of being different, the reality of being the balancing factor to all that "normality", they want to be accepted by others, who either have no clue about them or just want to use them.

That usually gets the stronger, the less real acceptance you get from your parents as a child. The fact of being dependent for being kept alive as a child and that a child learns by copying the parents leads to treating oneself exactly like the parents did, i.e. attach no value to themselves. That way madness lies.

Only the fortunate ones, who are born with a strong awareness of their true self and of being different and happy about that can make themselves independent of other peoples opinion of them. I always said to myself: If nobody loves or wants me, the least I can do is being kind to myself. So I became mentally independent much earlier than physically or financially.

Treat yourself with respect and you command respect from others. or, as an old German saying goes: Hilf Dir selbst, dann hilft Dir Gott (Help yourself then God helps you).

Amber's mistake more than Liz's is to attach value to money in exchange for sex. Money can be a measure of acceptance, but by no means always is.Just think of the fact, that we, as women, still have to struggle for equal pay for doing the same job.

Monique S

Insightful...

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'They do not define themselves out of themselves, they define themselves from the reaction of others.' That is certainly a huge issue and can be so crippling in today's world. I think we all want to be accepted, but alas trying to please everyone before being happy with one's self - certainly a 'trap'. The title of this story is 'A Legal Trap' - so many things in this story are a trap for some. I have not walked in the same shoes as some of my TG friends, but the stories they share - your intestinal fortitude had better be fortified or you might end up in a fetal position.

I so agree with your respect statement... And Amber - a kid seduced by a dark side that would have taken her far from her intended want to be a woman and likely to an early grave. If you don't think that dark underbelly exists - I encourage you to research it... Sad, disgusting...

As always - Monique you made may day.

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

I guess it never occurred to

I guess it never occurred to me that anyone would want me for sex, let alone pay for it. That bullet dodged, I guess.

As for defining myself, I guess I gave up at an early age on ever being accepted by anyone. Instead, I just wanted to survive until I could get out on my own and away from all the people who were tormenting me (my parents especially.) "I am a rock, I am an island" was my mantra growing up.

The downside is that I developed a reflex of never letting anyone get emotionally close to me. In Liz's position, I would never have gone beyond a purely business relationship with Paul. I suspect that this is one thing that is making transition so hard for me -- I have to cut through the carbonite that I've encased my inner self, my soul in. I can't ever become my "true self," or even have any idea what it is, until I free it.

Not a downside...

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If you can rise to a place where you can be happy with the person you were meant to be... Find that saw blade that will cut through the carbonite... Free yourself. :-)

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

I know that one,

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Asche, the recluse as the saving grace. But do not forget, that there is more to puberty than just becoming physically fertile. It is the time to evaluate what we have experienced as children and put it in relation to who we are and who we want to be. Some never manage (i.e. they never become adult).

One of the advantages of being transgender is, that we get the chance to go through a hormonally induced second puberty, sometimes much later than the first, incomplete one. But that is our chance to really become adults in the body meant to fit our soul. To what extent we proceed with the physical change is relative to who we are, not so the emotional change. That we get the chance is a small miracle in itself, don't waste it. You created the carbonite so you can dissolve it. Believe me, you can. Been there, done that. No t-shirt, though, but lovely dresses.

The thing that cut through it for me you'll have described in that part of "The seduction", that deals with the walk on the Pembrokeshire coast path. Discover what it will be for you by playing around with things you love. You'll find the one or the sum of things, that will break the carbonite. Then you'll be ready to start getting close to people.

Hugs,
Monique.

Monique S

You're very welcome

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Donna.

Hugs,
Monique.

Monique S

No easy an road...

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Shouldn't be such a struggle. Should be more understanding, support... Why there isn't baffles me - costs nothing to care, have compassion, support others. You are worthy, you are beautiful - you've seen past the image in the mirror to the true you inside.

Amber... A statement on a very small segment of the youth out there today needing that stroke, instant gratification, everything now, now, now - not connected without a phone in their hands. Again - very small segment portrayed in this work of fiction... Fiction...

Thank You for giving the last half of this story a chance to redeem itself.

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

I can’t really say what attracts me to this story more.......

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The plot line and characters, your writing, or how much Elizabeth’s feelings resonate with my own.

The story itself is very real, and touches on some very important aspects of our modern world. The idea of sexual trafficking, the missing children aspect, the internet issues, and of course the transgender side of the story, all give the story not just a real gritty substance - but they give it a true relevance in our current world.

The characters are very real as well, their flaws and cracks showing through like all of us. Elizabeth’s past, her anxiety issues, and her deadest determination to get beyond her past and be the person she really is shine through it all. The petty office politics which percolate through the background (and which I am sure will be of much greater importance in the end) remind me of my every day at work. And Paul........ well, let’s just say that all of us hope we find someone as caring and understanding some day.

And then there is the fact that every action, every thought, every doubt which passes through Elizabeth’s consciousness strikes a chord deep within me. Yes, I looked down that dark hole of the internet repeatedly, and but for the anchor of my children and the love of a good woman I would have delved into it myself. Yes, I suffered my own bouts of anxiety, ending up hospitalized at one point, and nearly took the easy way out of all the pain myself. Even today with the acceptance of my family (some anyway), my employer and my co-workers, and most of those I meet, I still have to cope with stares and the ocassional laugh. I still get misgendered at times - not very often, except over the phone, but it still happens. Hell, I had a Human Resources rep do it just a week or two ago. Of course, when I caught it she apologized - but someone who is supposed to professional enough to know better did it.

Yeah, like Elizabeth, I still struggle with self-esteem every day. But I’m winning, and every day makes me stronger.

Looking forward to more of this.

D

D. Eden

Dum Vivimus, Vivamus

'Winning'...

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D, I'm so happy to hear that... Every day you're doing that is a day to be thankful for and makes you stronger. I'm happy this story is something you can relate to - no bigger compliment than to know I've got a character that can be related to in a fiction based story with elements of real world situations... "While we live, let us live."

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Jeeze Louise !

Wow, you put us into Elizabeth's skin with this one. Feeling her emotions, not believing that an incomplete woman is what Paul wanted, even when he kept repeating it. Put away the Xanax, hug Paul instead. Any guy that takes that good care of you while kneeling at the porcelain altar is a keeper.

Karen

A hugger...

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Is a keeper... :-) Elizabeth is worthy of Paul - she just needs to believe she is and grab that opportunity. Carpe Diem!

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

The Road to Ourselves

This is tough reading, and feels authentic regarding the journey, with the exception being that having a man, or partner in our lives seems impossible. It is also a very tense story, and one in which I am not always on the side of the so called Good Guys. It is sad that the girl is 18, has the money to leave, but they have cut her off from access to it. Is that even legal?

Sure, a sugar daddy, of perhaps questionable intent paid for her breasts, but could she avoid getting ground up by the Sex Work machine? Likely not.

I was approached by a man online that wanted to do lingerie pictures ... it is anyone's guess where that would go. Then he found out I didn't like the drugs and alcohol he offered. I was nearly 60 at the time, but have very good genes, and good make up. My breasts were still forming, but many models have small breasts. The ones with the giant breasts ... why?

Something is wrong with me. No one wants to be my partner. Perhaps it is my obsession with religion. That is not negotiable.

Ground up...

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Too many get ground up in that sex machine... You know that, many others do also. In the context of this story - Amber dodged a bullet.

You are a warrior Gwen...

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Hi Rachel, yet another

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Hi Rachel, yet another terrific instalment, nuanced and full of insight as always. I think I’m falling for Elizabeth myself, tbh!

She reminds me so much with her self-doubt and questioning of a dear friend whom I helped in her transition when almost everyone else, including family, had deserted her. There was never anything sexual between us but I love her deeply, and when she asked me to give her away at her wedding it was the proudest day of my life.

Anyway, I think that your creation of Elizabeth is fabulous and so wonderfully real, and I haven’t even commented yet on the brilliant plot intricacies that have come to light in this chapter. Yes, the transgender angle is central, but it isn’t everything, and that’s what gives this story its remarkable inner strength.

I hope that you’ll publish this as a novel on completion. It’s more than good enough.

Rob xx

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Humbled...

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Thank You Rob... I'm not a polish author, but I do write with heart. Hearing it strikes a chord with you warms my heart...

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Such a moving story

Thank you for writing and sharing this. Breathtaking!

Love...

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How easy this story was to write...Wish I could spend everyday at the keyboard penning the results of Elizabeth's every high and low... :-) Thank You for sticking with it and letting me know you enjoyed it... Hugz...

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Very tender... "You have a

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Very tender... "You have a quiet confidence I find really, I mean... It's attractive to me, I guess," he was smiling, "There's certainly a physical attraction. I don't know who blessed you with those legs, but I have a hard time not wanting to... Admire them, but not like a perv or anything... Come on, I'm a guy for God sakes - you're cute, beautiful..."

Detailed: "...We noticed your Facebook account is pretty sparce for a teenage girl.", nice touch.

Donna

There's...

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Something there between those two... Can she not scare him away? That is the question. :-)

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

The USA is a mes with conflicting statutes and requirement

In Texas and in Dallas countr Growind breasts qualifies as irreversable changes an will aallow to get a court order changing your name and gender.Which I used as fast as I could. However I was born in Oklahoma which means I can never change my birth certificate.

So wrong...

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On so many levels... OK is NOT okay with their policy.

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

"I'm damaged Paul"

I know how that feels ...

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We all are...

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But how we rise above it tells the ultimate story. HUGE Hugz to you Dorothy! :-)

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Kicked in the teeth

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Elizabeth is trying to break up with Paul because she doesn't have confidence in his wanting her for who she is as a woman. He knows that she is TG, know some of her past, but because of her rough past, can't accept that a man wants nothing more than to be with her as she is.

Basically, she scared, she's tired after dealing with Amber, and she's had many more memories crop up than she wants.

When Paul speaks softly to her about how he feels toward her, all she sees are her past experiences. The one thing which makes Paul totally different is his true concern for her as a person. He's willing to back off if it will help her in any way. He's made other things clear, and they all are to help Elizabeth in some way. He hasn't said it, but all his actions so far indicate he's in love with Elizabeth. Elizabeth the person. Elizabeth the, woman.

Others have feelings too.

Ding ding ding

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Winner winner... ;-) I'd say you see Port good what's going on...

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Too Painful.

Can't !!!

Sorry Gwen...

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Hugz...

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Nice Story

You have more story and less relationship than is a straightforward approach to these topics. Perhaps story shows our protagonist's worth more than do the relationships. That's what I think, anyway. They do seem to be fine people.

Thank You...

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For the comment. I certainly could have written this story a million different ways and every time I think about it I wish I had done some things differently. Cheers!

R

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...

Wholeness

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Elizabeth stressing about whether she could manage things with Paul before completing her transition reminded my sharply of a video that ‘Drea DiMaggio shared with me — the singer Nightbird, on the evening that she got her Golden Ticket on America’s Got Talent. Questioned about how she could be “okay” when she had a deadly form of cancer, she responded, "You can't wait until life isn't hard anymore before you decide to be happy.” When life throws you a blessing . . . count it, and smile.

Emma

Struggles...

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And stresses... A game within a game - a past and a glimpse at a bright future.

XOXOXO

Rachel M. Moore...