What Goes Unseen

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(Hello! I am a first time poster so I'm a little nervous and excited! This first short story of mine is actually somewhat true. I hope you enjoy!)

- What Goes Unseen - Part 1 -

"You look a little nervous back there, are you alright Chris?" My mother asked while driving me to high school.

"Yeah, I'm fine." I replied while avoiding eye contact.

Truth be told, I'm not fine. For as long as I can remember I've been a closet crossdresser. I'm incredibly careful and masterfully cover my tracks. I've had a few close calls but have never been caught. Last night I wore my favorite pair of lacy panties to sleep. I expected to get up early enough to change and get ready for school. What I didn't expect was for my mom to burst into my room at 8am and throw a pair of pants and shirt at me. I had to change under the covers for her not to notice my underwear. Then before I could even get my belt I was being pushed into the car.

So there I sat in the passenger seat, anxiously awaiting the day ahead of me. We made it to school and I stepped out of the car making sure to keep my pants up.

"Chris!" My mom called.

My mind went into red alert "did she see?" I thought.

"I love you honey, see you tonight."

Relief. "Okay, love you too." I responded heading off to school.

Thankfully I don't have gym today I thought to myself. However it soon proved that my anxiety was unfounded as I quickly became occupied with my classes and the day went on as usual.

Then came third period with Ms. Leah. Ms. Leah was every boy's and even a few girls' teacher crush. She was very young and always dressed in cute outfits. She began her lesson as normal when suddenly I found that I was unable to focus at all.

"I wonder what kind of underwear she's wearing? What if it's the same as mine?" My mind trailed as I began to blush.

I found myself riding this train of thought until-

"Chris! I asked you a question." Ms. Leah called out to me.

"What?!" I blurted out turning bright red.

The class roared with laughter and suddenly my anxiety had returned. I could feel all the eyes on me. It was unbearable, then - RIINNGG!

"Saved by the bell." I thought to myself.

I stuffed my bag and headed for the door when Ms. Leah called me. The class cleared out and I headed to her desk where she was seated.

"Chris are you okay? You never get distracted like that." She asked me softly.

"I'm fine Ms. Leah, it won't happen again I promise." I reassured her while adjusting my backpack.

"Okay then, you may go now" Ms. Leah motioned her hand towards the door but in doing so she knocked a jar of pencils off the desk. Then like pure instinct I was squatting to pick Them up. When I came up to put them on her desk she had a small smirk on her face. I left without realizing the little show I had just given her.

The day resumed without any other hiccups and before I knew it I was on my way home. Though my mom dropped me off on her way to work she stays late so I usually walk back home. Glad that the day was finally over I continued my walk home when suddenly I heard a voice call out my name. I turned to see Jenny running over to me.

"Hey Chris wait up!"

Jenny was really smart but reserved. She was also quite pretty behind her plain wardrobe. Though I never noticed as I was always too busy crushing on other girls.

"What is it Jenny?" I replied.

"We're twinning today!" She smiled

"What?" I gave her a confused look.

Then it hit me.

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Lovely.

Lovely.

This has a pre-teen feel to me. If he hadn't had to change classes I would have though this was primrary school pupils.

Thanks for a lovely innocent story.

Nice

BarbieLee's picture

Not a critical comment just a suggestion. Understand you write the way you are comfortable with, not what anyone else would do. For the most part the story is a little short to draw your readers into it. This is like a preview of coming attractions.
Good rhythm and pace and it held together. It kinda feels like reading a magazine and the story is continued on page 99. Only problem is when one gets to page 99 it isn't there. Above all else, remember this is your story. If this is the way you feel comfortable with, then certainly stick with what works for you.
You are doing good.
always
Barb

Oklahoma born and raised cowgirl

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joannebarbarella's picture

About being a first-time poster. You did just fine.

As others have said, a bit short, but now you've dipped your toe in the water it'll get easier.

Cute

Keep it going

ooops !

giggles. nice story, and welcome to big closet

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Great job

You actually had me on the edge of my seat (leaning back of course). You have a natural tallent for short stories. I am definitely looking forward to more. The ending was great for a solo project but leaving it open always Always leaves your audience wanting more. Thank you

Sorry ... I missed a step for the 'twinning'.

Welcome to BCTS :)

Sorry, I just can't figure out how Jenny knew they were twinning, and on what - must be the panties, but how does Jenny know?

Did she also see the panties as Chris picked up the pilled pencils? Or is teacher Ms Leah Jenny's Mom or aunt, and told Jenny? Or 'somebody' knows and figures Chris needs an accepting (girl)friend?

Waiting for your next story, or next part of this story. Thanks!

What gets seen you mean!

There is an element of truth there for many of us I think
Thanks Cocogal. I liked it