An Old West mining town receives an unexpected arrival and a startlin' predicament.
An Affair of the Harte
By Angela Rasch
Almost everyone left. Them who didn’t have the righteous sense to move on, had their pick of dozens of abandoned shacks by squatter’s rights. The mine, that was located close to our small town, at the far end of a five-mile-long, box canyon, had “petered out.” Keepin’ one’s “peter out” had been the wellspring that fostered the fix wherein we all found ourselves
Every whore, save one, had left when the gold vein dwindled to a trickle, which barely kept us in necessaries. At the height of the boom, it paid nearly ten thousand a foot.
That one young female who had stayed wasn’t the kind on which you would ever bestow such a scurrilous title as “whore.” Chastity had a 24-karat heart -- whilst the others had Babylon in their ancestry. Chastity’s parentage traced on back to the land of milk and honey.
Although they said she had “sab-bee” -- her fanciful nature prompted every man in our rapidly diminishin’ enclave to love her. The other hookers who had serviced us men would read books, play solitaire, or have their dinner whilst you did your business. They smiled only when you handed over your pouch -- in stark, and sometimes naked contrast to Chastity, who went clear around the long way to make you feel “u-neek.”
Each week, upon first seein’ a client’s manliness, she would utter that tiny staccato yelp of her sex, as if she were startled by its sheer mass. Miner after miner swore Chastity had been a virgin the first time they snookered down with her.
Monumental battles had been waged over her honor; four of which ended as fatal. You weren’t anyone in Pinewood Junction, if you didn’t have a scar to prove how highly you regarded her. Bickerin’ and fightin’ filled the long hours between shifts, in the shaft. Alcohol greased the path from brains to fists, in a camp populated by those who had sullenly turned their backs, on the effete civilization of the East.
Chastity didn’t believe in hooker monogamy, the kind we heard some kept-women in the big cities practiced. Her charm stemmed from never lettin’ on that anyone else in her whole, entire life had ever satisfied her – to the lengths you’d greatly managed.
Even men with their tools shriveled from a quick jump in the creek, to wash off a week’s stink, before bedding her, were told how “gigantic” she found them to be.
Not a one among us would have stopped short of stompin’ a rattler, treein’ a puma, or some such human sacrifice ceremony, for our blue-eyed lady of the evening.
Chastity would seduce you, so that you knew the only gift she wanted in life was a moment or two of bliss impaled on your “mighty lance”, or “steel pole”, or “giant snake.” She often times seemed like a buddin’ poet -- and told us of her dream to learn to read and write -- so as she could put down her notions.
Oakhurst offered to teach her a few words, but that was nixed by general consensus, given the kinda words Oakhurst allowed to slide like creek-moss from his festered tongue.
Although Chastity blushed ragingly when it came time to settle-up -- and termed your payment for services rendered as “such a nice and totally unexpected present” -- she did financially well for herself.
Many a miner dreamt of the wealth that eluded their pick and shovel and had designs of marryin’ her and livin’ the rest of their lives off what she had squirreled away in that rickety shed that functioned as a locale for both her home and “bidness.”
It came as no surprise -- on that morning when Chastity sluiced her breakfast for the fifth day in a row -- that bedlam broke out. Every man in Pinewood Junction staked his true and rightful claim as the legit father of the comin’ bundle of joy. Three lost fairly solid teeth defendin’ said paterdom.
The arguments and lost tempers went on for days. It was a cinch that one of us had done the familia deed, and equally undeniable that beyond speculation the impregnator could be anyone of the fourteen who still worked the mine. Each, exceptin’ maybe Antoine, enjoyed equal “access” and had driven home their personal pick with punctual practiced regularity.
As our tiny town stood at least thirty miles from any livin’ soul -- and that soul being a mountain man who seemingly preferred goats -- we each had a one-in-fourteen claim to the child and lifetime partnership with the girl of our dreams. . .and her sparklin’ riches. The only other soul we ever saw was the leathery, old gal muleskinner who brought supplies and hauled out our ore, once a month. And, she lacked man seeds.
Most of us had been through the Civil War and felt we had used-up all our luck gettin’ through that mess with our being and most of our limbs. Hence, nobody gave any thought to settlin’ the issue of fatherhood by lot, or through any other such game or contest, except for Oakhurst, a cardshark who no one would bet with -- on anything. He had missed that part of gambler’s school where they taught the basic guidelines of partial fairness that kept your trout coming back for another shot at the worm.
Chastity took to her delicate condition like tomato sauce to Sicilian spaghetti. As her stomach swelled, her smile and natural beauty likewise grew. She appeared to be the healthiest of us all, in a camp of downright robust human beings -- whose greatest maladies were an occasional lethal day-after and lumps caused by flyin’ fists. We hovered around her -- seeing to her every need and whim.
When she craved waffles -- one of the men made flapjacks, and then carved them to the unique shape criss-cross -- and browned them in a pan to crisp them up.
One of the less-sensitive of the group asked Chastity if she had womenfolk, to be with her at the time of the expected one’s birth. The clouds that ascended on her otherwise always angelic face told us she was on her own. The mouthy cur who had asked the unwarranted question was soundly kicked in the arse, by all within earshot.
There was talk of bringing in a doctor -- or a midwife, but Chastity just laughed and told all she came from a “long line of squat-and-droppers.” Not eager to discuss such female problems, we accepted her wisdom -- so when complications arose, we were at a complete loss to provide succor.
“Gopher,” so named for his annoyin’ and filthy habit of sucking on a blade of grass when one never knew who had pee’d where -- tended to Chastity during her ordeal. At her passing, we were struck with the want to celebrate over the wonder of the birth of the child -- and the need to mourn.
To dispel our melancholy, Gopher assured us the child was healthy, exceptin’ for one small problem.
“Is my child a boy?” Shuffles asked, ignorin’ the begged question. For his impertinence as to whom the child belonged, he would have been rewarded with a two-by-four alongside his head had we not outlawed “swingin’ lumber” at camp meetings, after the need to legislate restraint became all too obvious.
Gopher shook his head slowly from side to side. “That’s the problem.”
“Then ssshe’sss a girl,” Gap said, whistling on hissssss s’s. “Thass no problem. Golly -- a little girl would be great. Chasssstity sssaid ssshe favored a girl.”
A hush fell over the assembly as we paid homage to the dear departed.
Everyone yanked off their hat and bowed their heads.
After we had respected enough, Gopher spoke again. “That little cuss’s cute as a button, but I’m sayin’ you just can’t tell.”
“Kin’t tell?” I asked, afraid, for sure, I knew what he spoke to.
He shook his head.
I took a gander myself and was staggered by the sight. It clearly would not do. I recovered and shrugged.
“Jerusalem,” Lefty howled. “If’n you two jackasses can’t tell, you’d best step aside and allow someone in there who’s not an idgit.”
Lefty — who hadn’t come back from war as whole as he would’ve liked, having lost most of his right arm to a surgeon’s hacksaw, at Gettysburg — pushed through the crowd. He spent two long minutes, by my gold railroad pocket watch, starin’ at the little one’s privates. “Can’t honestly tell,” he said, “but I’m fairly sure it’s a boy.”
“Shit,” I said with utter disregard for Lefty’s legendary fits of temper, “I wasn’t quite certain, but if I had to say. . .that baby’s a girl.”
“We gots to make up our minds, one way or the other,” Peckerhead hollered.
Skunk moved close enough to shave Peckerhead with his sharp chin. “Why do we ‘gots to’ -- you whistledick no-account?”
“Ya,” Kentuck added, while starin’ at Peckerhead in the way a mountain lion eyes a fawn before havin’ lunch, “Whistledick the bug f____r — why do we ‘gots to’?”
“It’s the law,” Rummy interjected. Rummy had once been a big deal lawyer’er, but after one of his criminal clients got hung, and then later the real killer confessed -- he took to a life of insobriety. “A baby’s got to be legally classified on the birth certificate as male -- or a female. No matter what dreadful impediment weighs us down, we must strive to meet the letter of the law.”
“F___ the law,” Antoine said with a slight French accent, which we all thought was his way of trying to convince everyone he wasn’t interested in men. Antoine was a good enough fellow, but he lacked manliness. He said he was French, but we all thought he was truly Greek, and no one jumped into the creek for a bath -- if he was already washin’ hisself. “We make our own horny-handed laws,” he added.
Antoine had that right as rain. We had quite a few laws -- other places didn’t have, like the one about no two-by-fours at meetings.
And, we had also done away with several laws we thought were utter nonsense. Fer instance -- the one about not stealin’ another man’s wife. None of us were married; and we all thought such a law was unfairly discriminatory -- should we ever have opportunity thrust our way.
Antoine, although popular with a few men for reasons no one cared to suspect, once had been the subject of a town vote.
We had been decidin’ if we should purge ourselves of improper persons -- him being “improper.”
I voted to rid us, but when it seemed like “gettin’ rid” meant hangin’ him, me and four others changed our votes and the matter was tabled for another time.
Rummy stood up, which started a round of betting as to how long he could remain vertical, although no one laid as much as a dime with Oakhurst — fearin’ a fix. “Let me get this straight. Are you sayin’ we ain’t goin’ to issue a proper birth certificate for this baby?”
Antoine giggled.
His nervous little laugh caused everyone’s skin to crawl, even those not covered with lice.
“S'il vous plait. Is there anyones in this camp with a birth certificate?”
We all looked around nervously. Ignorance of the law had cost many of us dearly, over the years. No one wanted to be the first to admit a possible jailable failin’. Given the sanctity of the moment, with birth and death and all, one by one we all stammered a confession of being certificateless.
“Theeen it is settled.” Antoine had asserted himself, which Chastity had affirmed he did in private with her, after his manhood had been challenged; even though most of us felt she had sweetly covered for him.
I took off my hat, which told everyone I had silently thought of Chastity and was showin’ my respect; so general quietude and bare heads broke out again.
Skunk broke the silence with a fart, which was his habit. “We should at least be democrats about it. Let’s vote on the ‘lil cuss’ sex.”
“I don’t know,” I said. “I’m suspectin’ this isn’t ballotable under any constitutional law.”
For a second, I thought my brilliant argument had carried the day, but Rummy’s subsequent “Tarnation!” trumped my reason.
We had slopped down whiskey to celebrate the birth of the baby, and then we imbibed during the impromptu wake for Chastity. Finally, we tossed down a few as the hair-of-the-dog. As had become our custom, whiskey ran freely during any town meetings, which gave reason for some of the fighting -- and all of the popularity of them assemblies. “Tarnation” and “G__ D___” accounted for a large percentage of the lively debate.
Wouldn’t you know it — after five secret ballots, and four hours of ensuing deliberation, including a motion to waive the two-by-four law, the vote remained deadlocked at seven to seven. Half of us saw the kid as a female; and the other half knew without a doubt that “he” was a boy.
“Shit.” Rummy said for all of us, which was only right, as he had made a living with his mouth. “Fuck!”
I took off my hat and everyone else did likewise.
A bird picked that wrong second to twitter and four of us chucked rocks at it.
For the next fifteen minutes, miner after miner looked over the infant and offered their “expert” opinion. Many of them had placed bets weeks ago as to the sex of the unborn, and much-anticipated child -- and now were hunkerin’ down to protect their position.
I slipped out and brought back a case of mind-expandin’ whiskey, as I could plainly see the need.
Bottles were passed from lip to lip with no discerned need for a glass or cup.
Kentuck stood. “I don’t give a rat-shit as long as the little tyke stays healthy. Buts — we need to know what to teach the baby, in preparin’ for life.”
An all-out donnybrook broke loose.
Those of us which could teach “him” to wrestle, shoot, and hunt asserted our rights. Only to have others come up with fool ideas that they were a-thinkin’ were better suited. The only way to settle an argument about wrestlin’ is to roll around together on the ground, which we did.
Them, like Antoine, who were so inclined, offered to give “her” cookin’ and sewin’ lessons, which met with little competition, but when Antoine said he would give “her” dance instructions Oakhurst first spit, and then spoke.
“Fairies dance.” From his tone, you could tell he hadn’t meant magical critters.
“Zat’s a low down thing to say. You take zat back,” Antoine stammered, with indignation. When Oakhurst would not -- Antoine flitted across the floor and slapped him. In the ensuing brawl, we were treated to an astoundin’ contrast in combative styles. Antoine brought a curious mixture of scratchin’, kickin’, slappin’, and bitin’ to the melee, while Oakhurst preferred a more traditional style, for a man. They rolled, screamin’ in the anemone, syringas, lupines, and azaleas.
Neither could claim a clear victory when they finally quit out of pure tuckered-outedness.
Between each legitimate skirmish, we verbally argued about the child’s gender.
The only thing we agreed upon was the child would stay with us. With some it was greed for the heir’s gold, for others it was the closest thing to paternal love I had seen since St. Louis.
At one point, the baby started to cry.
“He’s hungry,” Kentuck opined. “We should milk that female ass and feed the little cuss.”
“Now you see,” Stumpy said, “you just made my point. It be important to know what sex something is. You wouldn’t milk an ass, if you didn’t know what sex it was — would you? I’d like to see one of you jackasses try.”
That remarkably stupid observation touched off a disgustin’ battle that caused us all to forget about the baby’s hunger.
Eight hours later, we had worked our way through to a squabble about the baby’s teen years, should the child not be able to decide its own sex. It had been posited that a determination would have to be made before the next war, so the baby would know if he would have to don a uniform or keep the home fires lit.
“How will the baby know to look for a woman or a man, when it comes time for sex?” Rummy had asked THE question.
No one said a word until Kentuck, a confirmed and much-admired drunkard, started in agin’ on Antoine. “There are some of us here that have first-hand knowledge on not knowin’ a man from a woman. . .when they’re in heat.”
Three hours later, after a brawl that swelled to include as many as nine participants, Kentuck had discovered what Oakhurst had already found out about the potency of girl-fightin’.
We were all, more or less under the influence of amber liquid and suffered no pain when struck or otherwise.
“Pass out” and “feud” were the watchwords and spirit of those days. I hadn’t experienced such hostility, since we ran out of tobacco several months back.
“She,” I said pointedly, “is going to be a girly-girl and will need a pink house.”
Lefty tossed a whiskey bottle just right of my ear. “It ain’t my style to pee on your’n Fourth of July parade, but no boy is going to live in a pink house -- and ’sides we ain’t got no pink paint.”
I quickly ascertained the bottle he had chucked had been an empty and thusly forgave his rash moment of inconsiderateness to my well-being. “We got lots of whitewash.” I stood and put my nose an inch from his’n. “We’ll jest mix some of your rotten blood in and it’ll be pink as a rabbit’s ass.”
During the epic battle that ensued, I recalled it’s a rabbit’s nose that’s pink.
I thought about gettin’ my gun and fightin’ him to death, after he hit me for the umpteenth time, but gunfights in our town were pretty much laughable as no one could hit anything with a pistol at more than fifteen paces and shooting at each other with rifles was considered chick’nshit. Using a shotgun, while practical, drew intimidatin’ frowns.
About that time, Chastity’s carcass started to reek to high hell. Kentuck reckoned it had been four days since the birth/death.
Before we could get a real good cremation-versus-burial debate boilin’ Stumpy walked amidst us with tears streamin’ down his face. “The d_____d little cuss ain’t movin.”
The fear of the consequences of our stupidity crep up and knocked us all.
“They get like that when you don’t feed them,” Rummy said, and then passed out, agin.
***
We all left that worthless mining town, after dynamitin’ the shaft.
Before going, some of the more articulate and learn’d posted a carved wooden tombstone over the baby’s grave. Its somber words barely reached our sorrow.
“Here lies a babe who’d the serious misfortunes 2 be born amongs dumbass men who thought it more impirtant to carry-on about things that duzn’t matter, not tendin’ to things that do.”
The End
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Comments
Sad little story of human failing
All wrapped up in tobacco chaws and mine tailings like a proper yarn, the barb of wisdom is neatly concealed till the last possible moment.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
gol durn it
Didn't see that coming. Ignorance aint always bliss. Cleverly and well done.
Kristina
Gruesome
...in the vein of Grimm's Fairy Tales, except told in the first person, and much naughtier, with bits of Rabelais and Aesop for good measure.
Okay, so I liked it. Sue me.
Samual Clemens,
Ambrose Bierce, meet Angela Rasch. I think you are gonna like her. :) Dark and sardonic, yum. Still, I thought it was going to be about deer hunting?
Gwen
Gwen Lavyril
Gwen Lavyril
Open Your Ears, Gwen L
I said, "They're going to wrap the little dear in bunting -- dear bunting."
Like you -- a hart (no "e") is an old deer.
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
Well, the Hart in our village ...
... is White and serves a pretty decent pint of Bass :)
Even though I no doubt miss a lot of the cultural references the moral of this dark story is clear, and, though beautifully expressed, somewhat ugly. As usual with Angela, it's all 'show' and not much 'tell' - would that more writers followed her example - even I eventually understood.
Thanks
G
Geoff - Here's Hoping. . .
your village is never Hartless.
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
SLUICED HER BREAKFAST...
Clever how you used a prospecting term for hurling.
And I myself didn't know whether to laugh, cry or puke
at this story. All that great cute dialog & then it hit me so hard.
Such monumental folly.
(Okay, lighten up here Laika!
Go ahead, do your Walter Huston dance:)
"GOLD! GOLD! I TELL YA! THIS SHTORY'S PURE GOLD!"
And sometimes I just feel like a...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sm-j6PWNoO0&list=LL&index=4
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Puke If You Must
That's sort of how I feel when I think about how many human lives have been absolutely ruined over the improper handling of intersexed children. Admittedly, I'm thankful my four children haven't had to face that kind of challenge, but society seems to stumble almost as badly with the intersexed today, as it did in Pinewood Junction.
I'm not intersexed and know no one who is, other than online aquaintances. I read several books on the intersexed and everything I could find online, as background for writing Ma Cherie Amour a few years go. Their problems struck me as a very good place to start to unravel the mystery of being transgendered. Society just will not move off the dime on the theory of two genders. Ya gots to pick one!
Excuse me while I puke.
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
I hear you
I hear ya!
It's not even "choose one"
It's "Were gonna choose it for you FOR YOUR OWN GOOD"...
My puke reaction wasn't to your story, it was a slight flashback.
A stillbirth I witnessed years ago...
And sometimes I just feel like a...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sm-j6PWNoO0&list=LL&index=4
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Don't think
I couldn't have done what you did with this story, and I have a very high opinion of myself. ::grin:: Pastiche looks easy till you try it.
I'm constantly amazed at the level of artistry in an amateur medium, especially here at BC. Lots of people here could be making a living writing, if they were willing to starve for a few years. You're one of them, Angela.
Damn good story.
-- Donna Lamb, Flack
-- Donna Lamb, ex-Flack
Some of my books and stories are sold through DopplerPress to help support BigCloset. -- Donna
Writer's Bucks
The September issue of The Writer magazine includes an article that is a real eye-opener. "Top earners share tips on making the most of their time -- and making more money." The "success" stories they tell speak of annual incomes that are a fraction of what successful people in my industry make. Those are freelancers who more than likely rarely get to write fiction or even non-fiction about things that really interest them.
I once read that less than five thousand people world-wide make a living writing fiction. That's a pretty small group to try to break into, especially when you consider the current estimate of those who are trying to write fiction for publication is around 25 million.
I won't quit my day job, but thanks for the compliment. And, thanks to Erin for providing a place for us to be read.
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
It's not changed much
The medics are still inclined to make arbitrary decisions as to which way to push IS children. In the case of one of my friends her father was even asked "which one he wanted" - he chose wrong.
We can only hope that the words "First, do no harm" will eventually sink in.
To quote a certain well known boxer, your stories continue to "float like a butterfly and sting like a bee."
Susie
Only a story, but it still makes me cry...
"...who thought it more impirtant to carry-on about things that duzn’t matter, not tendin’ to things that do.†Reminds me of that more recent expression...the more things change the more they stay the same. Jill, you are..what's the word...how should I say this...Brilliant! Once again, the Phantom Voter To-Do spurred me to look at this gem, and I'm awfully glad I did. Thank You!
She was born for all the wrong reasons but grew up for all the right ones.
Tutto il mio apprezzamento, cari, Andrea
Love, Andrea Lena
Wonderfully Funny & Harte Breakin'
Hilarious to the end. Nearly. If you have to have a moral to a story, this is the way to play it,
Joanne
Simply brilliant.
Simply brilliant. Razor-sharp satire disguised as an excellent story. Or is it the other way 'round? :)
- vessica b
the last line
sums it up nicely. Too often we get hung up on gender, instead of thinking about stuff that actually matters.
In my mind,I was hearing
the voice of an old timer like in an old western, telling a yarn by a campfire, surrounded by some tired drovers, while he smoked a well worn pipe. It all rang true.
Great job Angela. Please continue providing us with proof that we aren't perfect as a race by any stretch or imagination.
Catherine Linda Michel
As a T-woman, I do have a Y chromosome... it's just in cursive, pink script.
This is classic Bigcloset
Even if it wasn't formally reintroduced as such. Recently you flattered me to a crimson blush by comparing one of my stories to Mark Twain. This little parable is obviously a more conscious mimicry of his stories (one he might have written and salted away as unpublishable like he sometimes did because of the frank discussion of Chastity the adorable camp whore) and it really does him justice.
One good thing about you unpublishing your stuff is that it's all being posted again; stories like this one that I remember well, and ones like Jenny Lind, that I somehow missed first time around but I'm definitely going to correct that oversight first thing tomorrow.
~hugs, Veronica
And sometimes I just feel like a...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sm-j6PWNoO0&list=LL&index=4
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