Printer-friendly version
Dorothy, why did you have to challenge us to start a story with…
"Such a sweet girl."
I'm sure the old lady meant that as a compliment but I'm a boy dammit! Just one wearing an orange mini dress with a clashing red apron!
Should have known with the boss's eyesight that the uniform would be gross but I was desperate for any job. I turned up for an interview with Mr Han Lee at his Brooklyn restaurant only to find he was half-blind and assumed I was a girl just because I'm short with long hair.
He had my application right in front of him dammit! Who ever heard of a girl called Max!
With apologies to "Two Broke Girls "
—
Rhona McCloud
Comments
Up for a Challenge?
Hey, this is good, for such a short piece its succinct and to the point - you go girl!
Now for a new Challenge!
Have you ever thought of writing a story max 500 words and submitting it to
Hutcho for the next mixed tapes edition?
Christina
snerks
giggle-snorts ...
snerks
giggle-snorts ...
Maxine
Simple really,
Joanne
If Max(imilliano) had only thought of that…
… he wouldn't now be working as a waitress in a Brooklyn restaurant Joanne.
On the positive side the cupcake business with Caroline shows promise
Rhona McCloud
Teehee
*giggles*
Well Maybe He will get better tips dressed that way.
*giggles some more*
~Hypatia >i< ..:::
You've dipped your toe. So when do you take the full plunge?
That sounds like a real start. I hope you add more. How did Max find the job? What were his expectations? What was his first reaction to having to work in a dress? Is he dressing differently is not his non working life? What do his friends and relatives think? Is he getting any stick?. Is he enjoying it? That last one was a silly question wasn't it?
So may avenues to explore. And so many words to read. No pressure though eh?.. :D
I'm delighted to see you have a go, and from what I see so far, you put words together really well.
I knew there was a reason I
I knew there was a reason I liked the blonde !
Kevin
That Uniform
That uniform clashes gloriously. I wonder how many young men come, simply to see the workers in their uniform.
It looks as though you're a writer now.
-- Daphne Xu