The Machine

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The Machine

My mother was really gonna do it.

She was going to put the Machine on my head.

And I was just sitting there.

Why wasn’t I fighting this?

I should have been swearing, kicking, threatening to run away.

I mean, I was a boy, and boys aren’t supposed to use the Machine.

But I just sat there.

They took me to the chair, and put the Machine on my head.

I trembled, and closed my eyes.

Finally the Machine was done, and my mother lead me over to the mirror.

And even in boys clothes I could see it.

I looked like a girl.

I ... was a girl.

I ... was happy?

Dam it, my mother knew I was trans before I did!

And who knew a different hairstyle dried by a hair dryer could make such a difference?

End.

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Nice one,

Excellent misdirection.

Agree

I agree completely.

LOL!

Your such a silly GIRL! Of course She knew!
Loving Hugs Talia

I remember!

Hypatia Littlewings's picture

I remember "the machine"! I remember the home version of "the machine" but also another version.

My reply kept growing, so I sort of wrote a story of sorts instead. lol LINK
~Hypatia >i< ..:::

In a flash....

... you brought back a memory.... so thank you soooo much! I love your writing.
I recalled the first time I went under the "machine"........ voluntarily........ hoping..... imagining......
No, my Mother wasn't involved - indeed, didn't know a thing about my plan.
But yes, it was a life changing moment........ I phoned a salon, away from home.......
I asked for a style that needed curlers.......
And even in boys clothes I could see it.

I looked like a girl.

I ... was a girl.

I ... was happy!!

Thanks Dorothy, what a lovely Christmas present! :0
xx Ginger

thanks, Ginger

glad it reminded you of something happy.

huggles!

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Cute

Jamie Lee's picture

It took a minute, but the relays finally snapped into place and I realized what the machine is.

Others have feelings too.

You got me!

bryony marsh's picture

I love short stories, and here you manage to set a scene and deliver a twist, all in less than 150 words. Genius.

Sugar and Spiiice – TG Fiction by Bryony Marsh

Cute one,

great little story!

thanks, QModo

hugs!

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Is that you, Bru?

Daphne Xu's picture

I have to say, that was quite a twist. Good one!

-- Daphne Xu

Absolutely!

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;-) Hugs!

-- Daphne Xu

As I Read...

Daphne Xu's picture

I began by wondering what kind of machine that was. What kind of machine Mom would put on his son's head, that boys weren't supposed to use. Then hairdryer came to mind. Then I remembered the ending, and that it was supposed to be a twist. Now I'm wondering what was I supposed to be expecting? What was I thinking of when I commented? Perhaps a monstrous machine that a wicked mother would use on her sensitive son?

-- Daphne Xu