Anam Chara made me aware of a few boo-boos I made out of my naivete on all things musical vocabulary. While I can certainly hang 'ballet speak' with the best of them, when it comes to orchestra positions and such, I am more than a novice.
I have made some edits, thanks to Anam, and hope I have it right now.
Forgive me for my ignorance and I hope you continue to enjoy the story anyway! :)