Minor Characters

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Have you ever wondered how to make your good story even better? Have you considered the part that minor characters play in the overall reading enjoyment of your story?

I was watching a little bit of Mr. Holland's Opus (an awesome movie that I highly recommend people watching) and though the story revolves around one central character, the minor characters are what really drive the story. If you didn't care about the minor character's you wouldn't care about Mr. Holland's interaction with them and the movie would fall flat on its face.

A lot of time we get into writing and we get wrapped up in the world of the main characters and everyone outside of them become second class citizens. But when we do that, it makes our writing two dimensional and flat. Writing cardboard cutout bit players turns our amazing stories into "blah, whatever" kind of stories.

Sometimes we try to overcompensate for cardboard cutout characters by giving them extreme looks (punk rock hairdos and piercings) but we still leave them two dimensional and their impact has no affect on the reader. I'm not saying you need to flesh out every single character in the story (like if your person hands change to a cashier you can probably fore go the back story), but each character should have their own personality. If a minor character interacts with a main character you should at least understand their motivation in doing so. If your character gives a dollar to a homeless woman, you could add a little bit about how she became that way. I'm not saying write another book, but a sentence or two can make your story powerful.

The key is to give some kind of glimpse into a life without devoting a lot of space to someone not completely important to the story. Take the song Piano Man by Billy Joel. It is a song about minor characters being held together by a central figure.

Bartender - John, friend of Billy, gives him drinks for free, aspiring actor.

The entire story told in eight lines of lyrics.

And, you never know how a character comes into play.

In Katie Leone's God Bless the Child we are introduced to a small pudgy boy who is kind of a brat. Very little was given to him in way of interaction, but later that "throw away" character would be pivotal to the series, culminating in a staring role of his own in the fourth book of the series Phenom. So take care of your supporting cast, because they can really add value to what you're writing.

I hope I've given you something to think about.

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Minors

I try very hard not to have cardboard cut-outs, and my favoured tactic/plot device in many of my books is to let a 'minor' character act as the core of everything. The 'Ride' books are about two brutalised children, 'Cold Feet' is about an aging transwoman who had given up hope. My usual first-person narrative and PoV allow me to be 'surprised' by these people.

The 'extreme looks' bit is something I try to avoid. In 'Sweat and Tears', I DO have two gay men who speak palare and act camp, but they do so as a product of their age and environment, and one thing they are not is minor in their role. I work at giving someone a voice as a character, rather than a tic.

Cole Can't Hear His Opus

I cried uncontrollably at the end of that movie. The scene where his son is using a screwdriver to feel the car's vibrations to tune it was especially gripping.

You couldn't have picked a better example.

Jill

Angela Rasch (Jill M I)

We are all bit players in others lives.

I could not agree more with your point.

Even if a character is a bit player in the protagonist's narrative, they are the star of their own story - even if they are the sole audience.

While some characters may be incidental, a 'deep bench' of players with their own voices, personalities and perspectives can only make a story more textured and ideally help to create a more engaging world in which the prime narrative can take place.

I love encountering a character who appears briefly, only to leave me wondering 'what ever happened to them, how did their life unfold after the brief bit we witnessed in the story?'.

The authors who introduce many characters who are interesting enough to possibly spawn their own spin-offs are the ones I return to again and again.

Oh, what brave new world that has such people in it!

;-)

K@

That is fanfiction.

Have you ever wondered how to make your good story even better? Have you considered the part that minor characters play in the overall reading enjoyment of your story?

Fanfiction is build around a combination of three concepts. A continuation or prequel. A what if/alternate universe. And exploration and character development of minor characters.

I have read some really good fanfiction stories that used minor characters, that the original author did not put much mind into, but the fanfiction writer was about to flesh out those minor characters, and plots around them, into great stories.

Don't forget...

erica jane's picture

Locations in many ways, are characters as well. A well described location that your characters frequently visit can be a great bonus to your reader's immersion in your story.

~And so it goes...

From a readers PoV

As a reader I cannot but agree to the importance of catching some of the suroundings where the persons walks or stays. I have had the fortune to visit many places that are described in stories here on BCTS. Sometimes I read about departure halls at airports like " ... and you know how that is..." it would be easy for most writers to tell about some of the things that are so common eg how the speakers are difficult to hear, or the heat if the air-conditions do not work or other glimpses that make the waiting to such a boring waste of time. Of all the places that I have visited and has appeared in the stories the details has been correct described. Not that the colours of all the houses are named, but some small details here and there. These details that might stand out very exact to the persons in the story also let us readers to take an extra breath to let the events that is happening in the main story.
Ginnie

GinnieG

Indeed

I always try and instil a sense of 'place'. I usually pick spots that I know well, and that obviously helps.