The Center Chapter 8 Progress

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Hey Girls and guys.

For those of you that have been keeping track in comments and on Twitter. I was well ahead of the game when I first started the story. So's why the updates were fast and furious.

I was about 8000 words into Chapter 8 tonight, and in a couple of words 'It Sucked'. So, I'm pulling back and starting over from about 3000 words. What a incredible waste of time and effort, but that's how it is sometimes. It's all plotted out and it looks cool on outline but in execution it's choppy, annoying, and even well beyond the realm of realism.

Since there are only a few chapters left of this particular portion of the story I didn't want to mess it all up now. Bringing together all of those clues, subplots, and odd little quirks is a little daunting. So, I haven't forgotten about you, and your wonderful insights via comments, emails, and PM's. Hopefully I can have something out late tomorrow or early Friday.

Now I just have to finish the scene where Miss Bonsai usurps the Colonel's power at the Center, and makes sure her pet (Kristyn) is well taken care of, and it should all run smoother. D8

Catnip for everyone!

Deleted scene from Chapter 5 (You might remember it as the scene from the Colonel and Kristyn's first meeting.)

(Original storyline: Miss Bonsai's voice from under the desk) Like a powerful, dark storm, I will make my presence known to the world. Like a seeping mist, I will creep into the humans' center of power, and make them quake in fear at the very mention of my name!

(Final Edit:)The Colonel jerked and I blinked. Then a frown came over his face. Scooting his chair back he leaned down, and returned with a hand full of Miss Bonsai. "Appropriate name for your cat."

"Sorry," I tried not to giggle, but it came out anyway. "Bonsai, don't bother the nice Colonel."

(Original storyline: Miss Bonsai's perspective)Oh, be nice? What an interesting philosophy. At what point did you forget WE'RE TRYING TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD?! With the Colonel out of the way, cats will overthrow the humans and you will receive your just reward my fateful pet. Wipe my nose dammit!

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Author's note: Miss Bonsai's lines were stolen from "Cat's and Dogs.

Comments

Awwww

Thnaks for the update, now I can stop checking every 15 minutes for the next chapter :)

Sorry to hear it's not going as smoothly as you hoped, but I have no doubt the wait will be well worth it!

Pilgrim's Progress

Best not "spoil the ship for a ha'p'orth of tar"
I think you've done a splendid job so far and I'm fast becoming your devoted fan.
The other stories you have written that I haven't yet partaken of will suffice for now.
I'm willing to wait for the redoubled effort you are obviously in the throes of.

Carry on ma'am, make it so ( as officers say to turn your request into an order)

Jenny R

The Plan

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Ok i admit it. I am a fan of the newer Battlestar Galactica. With this in mind and Lilith's posting of the crucial missing scene in part 5, I envision a seperately released parallel story from the view point of Miss Bonsai and "The Plan" to eliminate and/or dominate the humans.

For some reason the instrumental from the Bear Mccreary cover of "All Along the Watchtower" is running through my head as I envision the story of Miss Bonsai and her takeover of the world....

Beverly Colleen

Beverly's Balcony

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I am a leaf on the wind, but someone turned the fan off.

Thanks for the update!

I can stop checking so frequently. Hopefully I can stop re-reading chapters 1-7 too :-O


-Christelle

"Fun-loving geek-chick looking for someone who doesn't give a damn about her past"


-Christelle

"Fun-loving geek-chick who's addicted to sunlight!"

Wait, no moar?

Awww, but I want to have my sweetness and read it too!!

7000 and moving along nicely.

I'm back up to 7000 words, so probably tomorrow at the regular time noon'ish CST. I'm on a roll tonight, so maybe earlier, but I don't want to curse myself.

But yep, I'm all caught up so once every two or three days until I'm finished. But we're nearing the end so no worries about me losing cohesion on this one.

~Lili

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~Lili

Write the story that you most desperately want to read.

Wooot!

Good news!

...but I don't wanna think about nearing the end... :(