Of Earth and Anmar

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I am continually surprised by the number of readers who seem to thirst for the next chapter of Somewhere Else Entirely. That being the case, I thought I'd jot down a few notes about the story - without giving anything away, I hope - so that readers know what to expect.

Firstly, this will be a complete story. Although by no means all of it has been written, it has a definite beginning, middle and end. I guess we're somewhere about halfway now (ch 35) in terms of telling the story, although there do seem to be far too many chapters written so far!

I do know exactly how it will end, and the last chapter is already written. I have a reasonable grasp of how I'm going to get from here to there, but as always in these things the characters may have other ideas...

One thing I seriously underestimated, as I may have mentioned before, is the effect a person from a modern era might have on a society as little as three centuries younger. This means I have had to try and educate the locals in as much 'modern' technology as they could manage, bearing in mind (i) these things take time to develop, even if you have someone standing there instructing you and (ii) our teacher is a 17-year old.

So, not only do I have to try and get them going but I also have to guess what an 'average' teenage boy might know. I've deliberately given him a literary background, but I didn't want to assume that he knew everything: rats might be smelt. Truth is, he wouldn't know everything, but then Palarandi society is going to develop in it's own way, not follow the path of early Earth industrial societies. They'll use what they are given and then make their own choices.

Of course, it can be surprising just what 17-year-olds do know - at that age I was building my own TVs and reading texts on subatomic particles, so you never can tell. On the other hand, no-one in their right minds would ever have called me normal, for a number of reasons, one of which is demonstrated by the fact that I am here on BCTS.

The next problem I faced is that all this disposition on the Industrial Revolution kind of gets in the way of the main story, which is of course a boy's mind (at first) in a girl's body, and no-one is quite sure just where she is if anywhere at all. [This last aspect is explored some more at a later date.] Naturally there's a love story there. We might be able to see it, but none of the protagonists can, yet.

To accomplish all this I have had to build an entire planet out of scratch, and for some bizarre reason, I seem to be able to do that quite easily. It can be difficult getting the details straight, though. I've already made a couple of blunders, neither of which are important. The cast of characters has exploded in size, such that I'm having difficulty thinking up names - and remembering them!

Beyond the story of Garia and what happens to her on Anmar is another shadowy tale: that of the 'vast, multi-dimensional beings'. There's another story there, but apart from facilitating Gary/Garia's transfer it isn't really anything to do with what happens on Anmar. The beings will make other appearances, but only at the very end will their part be explained, if then. Properly, I need to write a different story that revolves around the beings and [redacted], but it wouldn't be TG so can't feature on BCTS.

Please, no! I have some other ideas festering in my fevered brain that need writing down. I have always been wary of writing two or more stories at once, for fear I could get them mixed together or make one or more look disjointed. When I'm on a roll, I'm on a roll and like to keep it that way. Occasionally it works, but at the cost of slowing down the posting of both stories.

For now, enjoy the ride. There will be a good few more chapters to come, and plenty of thrills, spills and shocks along the way. I'm pleased that you all like what I've done so far. I'll try to keep up the standard.

Penny

PS I have another planet, if you're interested: the locals have either one gender or thirty-six, depending on how you define gender... strangely, that tale wouldn't be TG either.

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If it's related.

Why couldn't it be posted here? It's not like you'd be making your entire library suddenly become non-TG.


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

There is the option to post

There is the option to post a non TG story by Tg authors...

I mean if it is a story about a TG universe, that has no tg content, I don't see the problem with posting it here, but I guess you'd need to ask Erin.

I hope you'll post the next chapter soon,
thank you for writing,

Beyogi

Thanks for the background

Penny

Thanks so much for this bit of background and context to your very excellent series.

Like many others I look forward to each chapter with much anticipation. I love the way you interweave the various elements.

I'm extremely happy at the prospect of many more reads before you conclude.

Please post the next one soon :-)

Hugs

Alys

The spin-offs

Firstly, I'm sure Erin wouldn't mind the occasional non-TG story by an author, as long as it was occasional and didn't become a habit :)

Besides which, in both spin-off ideas, there's the potential for musing on the concepts of gender / gender roles, which makes them tangentially related, even if the concepts of gender identity aren't covered.

However, if you think the stories would be too long for here, perhaps post them on Fictioneer - Erin's general fiction sister site (which happens to have a few familiar names on the author list...). Actually, judging by the "Recent comments" list, the site could probably do with a boost in traffic :D

 

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There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...

As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!

Why Three Centuries (less advanced than present)?

Dear Penny,

I've been avidly following your story; it's very interesting and involving.

One thing I always wonder about is the "3 centuries". I've been sticking it into my "suspension of disbelief". I haven't researched this, but (not exactly remembering every description in the story) the only thing more advanced than a pre-Roman Empire (Western/Mideastern) civilization is the invention of the telescope.

In 1710, Europeans had already circumnavigated the globe and gone to all continents except Antarctica. The general workings of the solar system were known; Kepler's law of planetary motion, Newton's calculus, law of gravity and laws of motion. Astronomical telescopes were greatly advanced from those pre-Galileo. I think chemists were isolating gases. Guns, warfare and a modern design of forts (differing from castles) had evolved. England had parliament to counter the power of the King and the beginnings of modern political theory were being written. The printing press had been around for centuries, as had paper making. The Romans had invented concrete, but I don't know when or where it was used in post-renaissance Europe.

What else in Parland or Anmar is more advanced than the Greek culture in Alexandria? Greek architecture geometry, literature, plays and philosophy; Egyptian paper, surveying, construction methods, beer, etc.

Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee

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Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee

Roman's invented concrete

Interestingly, you can find evidence of concrete in ancient ruins in the America's which far predates the Roman invention.

But, for modern civilization, it was the Romans who counted, since whoever had invented it in the America's were long gone by the time Europeans landed there.

Abigail Drew.

Very Entertaining Series So Far

In my mind, you've done a great job so far. I think, given the number of "how it's made" and "how technology has advanced" shows on cable TV, a slightly bookish technically minded teen could know a lot today.

Please Post Soon!

Please post soon! You're one of the reasons I set up a profile here and I seem to gobble up these posts faster than they come out!


Hugs from British Columbia! :D


Hugs from British Columbia! :D