It Wasn't A Mistake - 01

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I've been working on this for a while...

TiffQ's picture

Hello everyone! I've been fiddling with this story for several years now. I'm not completely happy with it. It is currently about ten chapters, but that may change as I will take into account reader comments in any future edits. So... please tell me what you think of the story.

Hugs to all!

Tiff Q

Interesting beginning

An interesting beginning and well set up to drop the protagonist into... what, exactly?

There are a significant number of unanswered questions and that is just how it should be at this stage of the proceedings.

Penny

Well, this is certainly one

Well, this is certainly one way to meet GOD and find out where you are headed. Still leaves lots of questions tho.

Very Intriguing

Interesting, and well set up. Can't wait to see where you are going to take us.
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Francesca

- Formerly Turnabout Girl

Like it diffrent

Like it diffrent

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Well, nice start then.

Almost sounds like it could be the BC coast, not that it actually matters. I hope that the bloke was actually an Angel and he's got things sorted better than they seem at present.

Nice start.

Gwen

Real good beginning

Jamie Lee's picture

This chapter is a good beginning to what looks to be a good story.

But what caused him to paddle off looking for answers? What could be so bad he'd welcome death when it came?

What work does the Lord have for him? Does it include being hit by the tour boat? Or start with the collision of the tour boat?

Others have feelings too.