Mr. Goldberg's New Secretary Mini Comic & Drawings

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Here's just a mini comic of a scene from the story I'm writing at the moment. Hope you enjoy them. I wouldn't mind hearing your feedback! :)

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Nicely done

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The artwork tells the story and that is an accomplishment. It makes me think of John Stanley, one of the great storytellers of comics. Especially the grin on the background woman on the cover. :) She could be a grown-up Little Lulu hatching a plot. Here's a link to an article about Stanley: https://www.lambiek.net/artists/s/stanley.htm You are drawing in a style with a history. :)

Hugs,
Erin

= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.

Thanks for the compliments!

Thanks for the compliments! Woah she does look like a grown up Lulu! For many years I drew with the bulgy Simpsons-style eyes but I feel I can communicate just as much (if not more) emotion with the Herge/Stanley dots. It's so much simpler and matches the realistically shaped bodies much better. I know my drawings aren't exactly top notch, but as you said, as long as the story can be understood then I suppose that's an achievement. Thanks for commenting.

Lily Florette

Well done. The whole story

Well done. The whole story is conveyed very well through those few drawings. Thanks for doing them. I enjoyed reading it.

Hugs,
Erin of Wis <3