Crystal friend, help


I'm on my way to the second chapter of Crystal Friend, and I could use some help. In this second chapter, there are major revelations (or so I think) and I'd like to get it right. So if anyone was willing to do some proofreading work, I'll be glad to send them an early version. So they can help me get it right.

Also, if anyone knows how to link story pages to a title page, I'd like to know how. Or if anyone knows how to remove the “1. Chapter 1” from the title page (see link above). I think it is enough to have only one list of chapters, no need to have it duplicated.


And now, I'll have to start thinking about chat will happen in the third chapter :)


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