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Proliferation
For anybody who was concerned, I was just away for work this last week.
But I was a little worried that all my stories might be too much. On Fictionmania one person wrote that I was writing too much!
Please keep your comments coming.
This story is a little departure from my usual avoidance of physical violence, but I hope that you like it.
Maryanne
Very Authentic
I was not actually Trans either. (This is the Truth) The Psychological Community had me so heavily drugged that I was convinced I was. Later, I tried to press charges against them, but the statute of limitations had run out. I'd had the surgery and gotten off the drugs too late. I went to Thailand for the SRS, and what you describe sounds very authentic.
Unfortunately, after I'd been to the expensive Piyavate hospital for the surgery, I was told that the Doctor could have done it all at his office for much less money. Having 'some' Medical background, I know that SRS is actually a fairly simple operation, though I think that doing it solo is risky.
This could actually be a true story. It feels authentic.
Gwen
A different take on transitioning, to say the least
Nicely done, I couldn't help but think of JD Robb, who can write about the nastiest people and still keep you reading.
Mix It
Generally I write about odd situations giving rise to happy post transition outcomes, because we all should be happy - right?
But sometimes in situations like "Paralyzed", "Dissociative Identity Disorder" and this one, there is a villain/madman involved.
I try to mix it up and keep it different. I hope I am succeeding.
Maryanne
Succeeding?
Let's check with the judges. Competetive elements: two double toe-loop plot twists, prolonged spin of emotions with no falls; degree of difficulty, 8.8. Style elements: sweet, with notes of bitterness balanced out in the end, and skated gracefully through the writing danger zones with grace and seeming ease (though those of us who know surmise that it's NOT easy to do).
Score: 156 out of potential 160 points. This athlete threatens to surpass the rarified levels that only few (Stacyinlove, Czolgolz) have ever reached. Succeeding? Absolutely!
Hugz! - **Sigh**
Sighs are the natural language of the heart.
-Thomas Shadwell
This was not at all how I
This was not at all how I expected this story to go but definitely enjoyed it. It was very well written and had me hooked from beginning to end. Thank you for writing!