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Pace pickin' up!

I can't the deny that I've found this story a tad slow - up until now. I do understand that the key to a good (long) story is a rather involved and detailed development, but why do I get the feeling of running on a treadmill - I don't get anywhere?:( I must be an overly bored person:/

Ever since I laid my eyes upon Danna's name in the prologe, I've been forever curious of how you are going to solve the encounter of Amber's meeting with her lost daughter. Looks like we're soon there!;)

You've been one of my personal favourite authors ever since I read the Amber saga here on BC, and I found myself longing for a continuation of the epic tale and I'm forever grateful that you did just that, continued^^

Keep up the great work Ryker! I'm eager to see more of your work!!:)

Going Strong

Yeah, it always seems to ramp up a bit at the end of a story. This story will end soon, but it won't be the end for the saga. I hope you like how it goes!

This one actually ran a bit longer than I intended, and I had planned another part, too! :D I will trim it down in editing a bit more. If there were any particular parts you found boring, let me know, and I'll see how I can cut them down.

Thanks so much for the kind words for my writing, and don't worry, I won't stop. ;) Actually I already have the prologue for the sequel written, and I'll post it soon after Whispers ends. Then I plan to finish my CyberRealm story before moving back to the Archon Saga. If you like fighting scenes in literature, CryberRealm won't be slow at all. It's packed with action and it moves fast.

-Ken