Chapter 2 - Mirrors and Smoke

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Sometimes our lives feel as if we are simply adrift in an endless expanse with no sense of direction. Other times events may happen to lead us onto a certain clearer path. However somewhere in the middle we may find ourselves guided in such a way that we leave behind an impresssion that may influence others to follow as you take them through the fog....



Footprints In The Fog

by

Beverly Colleen

Below is a small sample of the next chapter, as since it has been closing onto a year since the first chapter was posted, I kinda wanted to stick my toes into the water and see if there was even any interest or even a touch of encouragement. As some may know me from my website, I appear to be more creative in that fashion as opposed to writing my own fiction, however I still have these confounded bits of muse rattling around in my head that decide to get more energetic from time to time and I would like to really develop the discipline and drive to put it all down in prose for others to see. So anywho, here is a snippet of the muse in my head and any feedback is appreciated. Thank you.

Chapter 2 - Mirrors and Smoke (Incomplete)

[Spellfire]: O.O How much gold?! I can't believe u did that!
[Elspeth]: What?! >.>
[Spellfire]: Come on! You can't tell me u just stood on top of the mailbox in town dancing with nothing on and they actually gave you gold for it!
[Elspeth]: What's ur deal?! Jealous? :D
[Spellfire]: NO!
[Elspeth]: idk y u don't try it. Pfft! Guys practically throw gold at ya if ya just show a little skin. Besides, it's just pixels.
[Spellfire]: I..I.. I'm not that kinda girl!
[Elspeth]: ROFLMAO!
[Spellfire]: Look, just becuz im playing a female toon doesn't mean I have to act like a pixel slut! Besides u know the only reason I chose a female healer is cuz if im gonna be looking at someone's butt for hours at a time, I don't wanna be looking at no guys hairy arse!
[Elspeth]: I was just teasing ya. No worries!
[Spellfire]: >.<

HURCOOLIES has just logged on

[Elspeth]: Awww! Don't get ur panties in a bunch.
[Hurcoolies]: What's up u 2?
[Elspeth]: Hi Hurc!
[Spellfire]: Hiyas Hurc.
[Hurcoolies]: Yo!
[Hurcoolies]: So? What's happened this time?
[Elspeth]: Oh, just Fire over here getting a little jealous cuz I shook my pixels and some guy gave me gold for it.
[Spellfire]: I AM NOT JEALOUS!
[Elspeth]: Oh plz! U could have fooled me!
[Hurcoolies]: heh!
[Spellfire]: Grrr! Just cuz I don't believe u should get free gold just for dancing on top of the mailbox, doesn't mean im jealous!
[Elspeth]: Me thinks he doth protest too much.
[Hurcoolies]: She has a point and u r playing a female toon, so who says you can't do the same, ya sexy little girl elf? ;D
[Spellfire]: Gah! I hate u all!
[Elspeth]: LMFAO!
[Hurcoolies]: {smacks} Spellfire on her behind.
[Spellfire]: HEY!
[Eslpeth]: zomg i have to pee! BRB!
[Spellfire]: {slaps} Hurcoolies across his face! Ouch!
[Hurcoolies]: mmm! love taps!
[Spellfire]: O.o
[Hurcoolies]: lol
[Elspeth]: back!
[Spellfire]: wb
[Hurcoolies]: So? Who wants to get a group going for a dungeon?
[Spellfire]: Hmmph! I don't know if I want to heal ur sorry butts or not.
[Elspeth]: {Hug} Spellfire.
[Elspeth]: Come on oh emo 1. ya know ya wanna.
[Spellfire]: Fine! Just remember who <3 u when u dont die.
[Hurcoolies]: I like ur sexy heals!
[Spellfire]: Gak! Doncha start!
[Elspeth]: ROFLMAO........

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Barely glancing at the LED of the clock' showing it was only a few short hours until I had to actually wake up for school, I stumble into bed not even bothering to take off my clothes.

*OMG! Who needs real life friends, when I have such wonderful online friends who love me?!*

I pass out a few minutes later with images of fighting ugly plague ravaged ogres who oddly seem to have the faces of my teachers......

To Be Continued...

~Footprints In The Fog~  © 2008 by Beverly Colleen (www.bevsbalcony.org)
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All Rights Reserved. These documents (including, without limitation, all articles, text, images, logos, compilation design) may printed for personal use only. No portion of these documents may be stored electronically, distributed electronically, or otherwise made available without express written consent of the copyright holder. This story is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are either products of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events or persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.

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haha nice chapter. That

haha nice chapter. That *does* remind me of a lot of my time on WoW. Guild chat could get pretty, erm, interesting at times... hehe.

Heyla, Beverly Glanced over

Heyla, Beverly

Glanced over the chapter and a half and I enjoy the start and premise you have made. I can understand the difficulty in getting thigns flowing, trust me, but I do hope to read more.

-r

-a

Sounds Cute and Interesting

terrynaut's picture

I'd read it. It also got me interested in reading the first chapter. I'll go back and read it later.

I'm withholding my vote but don't let that stop you from writing chapter 2. This is just a teaser so it doesn't count anyway.

- Terry

don't keep us waiting any more

NoraAdrienne's picture

Hi Colleen,
I've been wondering if you'd ever get back to this story... I'm glad you're finally getting back into the swing of it. I loved the first chapter when it first posted and still love it today. I hope you'll be able to get into a rhythm and be able to post on a regular basis.

Bright Blessings
Nora

Beverly, I Say

Continue this story. It is a very good start and a unique format for a story too.
May Your Light Forever Shine

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

It's Nice, ... No, it's wonderful to see another story from you

It's been a while, but glad to see you, too.

t’s not given to anyone to have no regrets; only to decide, through the choices we make, which regrets we’ll have,
David Weber – In Fury Born

Holly

It's nice to be important, but it's more important to be nice.

Holly

YES PLEASE

Oh Beverly, yes please I want some more too. Hugs.

Briar

Briar

Please [Beverly Colleen] could I have some more?

Hope Eternal Reigns's picture

I'm hooked, when might we see a little more? (Cheek pulled WAY out with a barbed device and feet flopping madly on the floor.)

with love,

Hope

with love,

Hope

Once in a while I bare my soul, more often my soles bear me.