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OMG!!!

Getting sooooo intense I cant wait *squeals*
But umm something I noticed:
“Wait! What if he’s working with Sarah and those other archons? What if they know we’re coming?” she continued. “Then… I don’t know. I really don’t ever want to see him again, and I don’t want you anywhere near him, Amber, but what if you’re right? Maybe it really is a trap.”
Who is Courtney talking to, isn't Courtney the one who noticed it's a trap?

“Oh, my goodness! It’s a trap!” Courtney said, suddenly.

Did you mean Courtney there or.. umm I'm confused.

I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D

Getting close!

I have a few surprises left, and a pretty crazy ending. ;)

Those lines you quoted were all Courtney thinking out loud to Amber's comment, "It just seems too much of a coincidence to find [Visnau] here as well." Courtney doesn't always think things through before reacting. :D