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i remember this

Sadarsa's picture

I remember this from somewhere... probably FM. A pretty messed up story really, but well written.

~Your only Limitation is your Imagination~

True

Yep, this was on FM a while back, but I'm expanding over here, too. And my mind can definitely be a messed up place, but thanks for the compliments. I'll be posting a sequel shortly, that is just as kinky, but also has more heartfelt parts as well.

A familiar face!

Welcome ^_^

I figured I might as well comment on this since I have been following along. While humiliation is Not My Kink (TM), good writing is, and your stories are most definitely well-written. You have a snappy descriptive style that flows well, easily pulling the reader along. Kudos from me!

Hey, Kisa!

Wow, it's always good to hear compliments about my writing from someone I consider to be a great writer. Thanks!

If you are also following along with my Amber story, I do indeed have some big plot events coming up. Which will appear here, soon! ;)

This is a waste of your talents

You have a decent command of the English language. There is no need for explicit stories like this.

Gwen

Always evolving.

First, thanks for the compliments to my writing. I realize this type of story is not for everyone, but others have enjoyed it. This was meant to be a short little story for those that are into that.

But, you are probably right. I am moving away from this kind of work. My current story (Amber) still does have some explicit humiliation scenes, especially in the earlier chapters, but I am also focusing on more character development, fantasy content, and romance there. I expect the second half of that story and future works to be more grounded. Some graphic, more consensual sex may still appear, though.

Thanks for the comment. Hope my future works will interest you.

- Ken