The Observers Group, Chapters 3, 4, 5

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I love this!

Now I am curious about Jade's backstory too!

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An Outsider

I wonder what it would be like to write a character that is a complete outsider and taught by a loner? Perhaps one that knew the inside of the LEO folk but also knew tunnel rat survival skills too?

I like the way you are building

the character development but I have not a clue where yjis story is going, so I'll just keep reading.