The Lost Queen Vol 1 ch9: O for a muse of fire!

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The Lost Queen

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Elsbeth

Suddenly transported to another world what will Eleanor need to do to survive and hopefully get home.

Queen

Chapter 9: O for a muse of fire!

Myra reached into her quiver for one of the three remaining arrows with a heavy heart when suddenly one of the larger ratkins she had been planning to target collapsed.

“What’s happening?” she blurted as the creatures below who had been pressing forward started to look around in confusion.

“I don’t know.” Katilia lowered her crossbow then pointed, “Over there!”

Bright light from the other side of the cavern pushed away the overwhelming darkness revealing four figures. The closest an armored bowman drew an arrow and let loose with uncanny accuracy slaying a ratkin from clear across the chamber.

“Is that my sister?” gasped Myra when a robed figure’s incantation produced a handful of small balls of flame to burn the rats below.

When the familiar-looking mage cast the spell a second time, Katilia cheered, “Take that you sarding rats!”

Myra joined her jubilation when both the bowman and mage took care of one enormous beast who had been trying to stem the tide of the now panicking rats.

“Sweet merciful Dinya, “ Amice whispered, feeling hopeful for the first time since Denis’ terrible death.

However, it wasn’t the bowman whom she assumed was Mistress Karin nor the armored spearmen who had to be Master Leo that caught her attention. In the center of the group stood a warrior in shining silver armor, watching the turmoil below as if she could feel the flow of battle. When she raised her hand, the healer’s instincts screamed.

“Get down!” she shouted, covering her betrothed with her shield.

Katilia didn’t have to be told twice. Grabbing Myra by the scruff of her neck, the two hit the ground as a ball of flame sped past them into one of the nearby tunnels. The explosion took their breath away as the flames quickly spread out, annihilating everything in its path. As the heat of the conflagration washed over their position, they watched in wonder as the fire destroyed the ramp only to then turn back on itself.

“Her control is amazing,” Katilia, laughed as she watched the rats burn.

While no stranger to powerful magic, the three could not explain what happened next. As the roaring flames consumed the ratkins, it appeared to reach out and grab those who attempted to flee, pulling them back into its fiery embrace. It was as if the fire was a feral animal controlled by the silver knight. Any idea that the creatures below would be continuing their assault ended when the second ball of fire exploded in their midst.

“Myra!” A young girl screamed from the other side of the room.

Katilia, who was almost lying on top of her friend, giggled. “I do believe that is your sister.”

Blushing, the two disentangled themselves as they watched the young girl scamper across the small ledge towards their location. Behind her moving in a more sedated pace with his faceplate now raised was her Uncle Leo.

“He doesn’t look pleased,” Myra sighed, striking her suddenly how much trouble she must have caused her relatives.

Her adventuring band knew the decision to delve into the labyrinth without guild sanction, although not against the rules had been unwise. Only the arrival of Myra’s family had prevented the whole journey from turning into a tragedy.

Katilia almost didn’t move out of the way in time as Iona flew across the ledge to embrace her sister. While the two cried in each other's arms, she watched the silver armored warrior who, along with Myra’s aunt, drop off the ledge and float gently to the floor below.

When the warrior stabbed a wounded ratkin with her spear, she asked, “What are they doing?”

“Lady Eleanor is meting out Mania’s mercy,” Leo replied before embracing his long lost niece. Kissing her on the forehead, he turned towards the band’s healer. “How is Warin?”

“Dying Master Healer,” lamented Amice.

Nodding, he squeezed Myra’s hand gently before walking towards the young man who seemed more dead than alive. “Well, let us see if I can do something about that.”

“We found Argus,” Iona said sadly then asked, “Where’s Denis?”

“We entered a room near here and he…,” Myra faltered.

“He’s dead, Iona. Something grabbed him. We barely had time even to understand what happened when,” Katilia grimaced. “At least it was mercifully quick. Warin managed to fend it off enough to allow us to escape the room. We tried to make it back to the stairs, but Argus couldn’t remove the enchantment on the door.”

“Was he able to before,” Leo asked half-listening while he looked over Warin.

“Yes, Master Leo, we made sure of it before we searched this floor.”

“Then what happened?” Iona nervously asked.

Myra picked up the story. “Since we couldn’t go through the door, and we already found one secret exit, Argus thought that there might be another one magically hidden. What we didn’t expect to find was an empty room full of corpses.”

“The again-walkers, ” grumbled Iona.

“So determined of finding a way out, we just entered, foolish.” Myra shook her head. “When they started to move, Warin managed to strike first, killing one of them. Didn’t matter though. Argus was stuck on the other side of the room. Although Warin tried, he couldn’t reach him in time. We fled then remembered this chamber, not realizing how badly he was wounded until later.”

--0—

The overwhelming stench of burning rat had surprisingly started to vanish by the time I jumped off the ledge to deal with the wounded below. Although I didn’t feel particularly bad about dropping a couple of fireballs on the ratkins, which was worrisome to some degree, I couldn’t allow those wounded to perish in such agony. Thankfully, Karin volunteered to join me.

It wasn’t pleasant. Trying to ignore the terrible burns of the few remaining breathing ratkins, I finished off one before asking, “So tell me a little more about your nieces’ adventuring band.”

“Oh, I guess we haven’t really spoken much about them.” Karin looked surprised before plunging her husband's spear into the back of another moaning ratkin.

“Well, from her skill with a bow, Myra obviously takes after you.”

Karin sighed, “In more ways than one. In a way, I blame myself for her misadventure in this place. When she and Iona were little, I often told them stories of the great adventurers who dared the Olicana labyrinth. Instead, I should have told them of the horrors we faced in Ingsmouth and the friends we lost.”

Inspecting one of the ratkins, I flipped him over then grimaced before continuing. We did our work in silence until we reached one of the exits. Several corpses were blocking the passageway, but I pushed them away before warding the floor.

“Let's see, “ began Karin, “Amice I have known since she was a child. She, along with my daughter and Myra, grew up together. I can't say I am surprised at what happened. The three of them always managed to get themselves into trouble growing up.”

“Not Iona?” I inquired, remembering my friend's younger siblings, who always wanted to know what we were doing.

She smiled. “On occasion, but Iona’s more like my husband. She’s more than happy to sit and study her grimoire. Myra, on the other hand, could never sit still.”

After warding another exit, we found ourselves standing over the remains of an enormous ratkin that we thought might have been the leader. While neither of us had any desire to search the charred corpse, I did cast detect magic a few times. Finding nothing, we continued.

“Warin her betrothed, as I mentioned before, was a town guard. He’s a little older and has been a good addition to their band. Amice was the one who invited him into the group after the two met at the Healer’s Hall.”

“Oh?”

She smiled. “Apparently, he needed healing after falling off a wall while attempting to catch a thief. Nothing serious, but I heard he managed to hurt himself a couple more times so she could heal him.”

That gave us a good chuckle as we crossed the chamber. Thankfully, the raging fire that had been happily burning what remained of the ramp was now just smoldering. Almost all of the ratkins in this area were dead.

“And Denis?” I asked as we walked around the pond, odd that we couldn’t find any bodies. Wondering if there was something that took them, or perhaps the corpses floated somewhere else, we decided to give it a wide berth for now.

“I can't say I knew much about him. He seemed to enjoy speaking to my husband, but from what Myra tells me, he was rather shy,” Karin smiled sadly. “The group asked him to join them after sharing a caravan assignment. Argus joined the band at the same time. He was recommended by Alidth, a friend of mine who teaches magic at the guild.”

As I warded another exit, Karin explained that she and her husband ended up what sounded like mentors for Myra’s adventuring band. She introduced them to influential people within the guild. The two even advised on what jobs they should look for to leverage their strength.

Going forward, she didn’t know what to do. Karin was disappointed with her niece. Well, all of them, but she was quick to admit her own terrible choices. She just wished they had not made similar ones. The question for Myra’s band was what to do next with half their members dead or wounded?

The sickly sweet smell of death still permeated the air as I entered the tunnel where I sent my first fireball. The reinforcements were almost burned to the point of cremation. That did seem a little odd, but then again, my experience of spell casting was in Magic-Life. There would be no survivors here.

I saved what should be an interesting story for last. “And Katilia?

Karin tried to hide her grimace. “I don't hate the girl. And there is also no denying her ability, but I just don't believe she is good for the band.”

“Can I ask why?”

“She hasn’t been entirely truthful, “ Karin shrugged. “I’m from a poor family in the empire. Many of my friends fell into a life of crime, and most of those are dead. My cousin, thankfully, had been able to get me a position in the provincial scouts. So I might not be as proficient as Katilia, but I am familiar with her skills. And trust me no matter what she claims, she did not learn her craft in some fictitious guild school in Aryn.”

Iona’s aunt turned away, appearing lost in thought. “Her martial skills are also way above those of a normal scout. One guildmaster told me there were rumors that Katilia once worked as a sellsword.”

The old definition of a sell-sword was a mercenary, but from what was implied, it was different in this world.

Looking back towards me, Karin added, “Oh, she’s a C-ranked adventure. Did I tell you that?”

As for being a C-ranked adventurer, “I see. You think that’s why Myra braved this labyrinth?”

“In part, yes. What I am most concerned about is Myra getting caught up in Katilia’s old line of work.”

I nodded in understanding.

Karin sighed. “The two of them are also rather close. I just can’t see it turning out well.”

Kicking the remains of the ramp with my foot, I walked away from the last exit after setting the last combination of alarm ward and fire rune. The reason? We still needed to escape from this place, and having a wounded party member was going to make it slow going. What I didn’t want was to be surprised by the ratkin’s reappearance, especially in force. The fire runes would turn those hallways into a death trap.

“Lady Eleanor, may I crave a boon?”

Since leaving the road, my three companions' speech had become more informal. I don’t think I could have gotten any of them to call me Eleanor but the ‘my lady’ this and ‘my lady’ that had decreased. Karin's sudden formality caught me off guard, especially when she knelt in a pseudo-Japanese style and then lowered her forehead slowly almost to the floor.

I felt myself slipping into a familiar role. My guild members often asked for a boon typically with a stupid grin on their face. Karin, however, was all business.

“If it is within my power. So Mistress Karin, how may I help you this day?” As I addressed her formally, I couldn’t help but notice the somewhat unique setting standing in the center of a score of burnt ratkin bodies.

Looking up and crossing both hands in front of her, she began, “First of all, I wish to thank you for saving our lives. Without you, I know we would not have made it this far.”

Remembering the encounter with the basilisk, I couldn’t deny it, so I simply replied with a ‘you are welcome.’

Nodding, she continued, “Second of all, thank you again for spending your valuable time training Iona in the ways of magic. However, I am concerned about her future.”

I could see where she was coming from. Karin could have lost both her nieces if Myra didn’t have the foresight to force her sister to stay at home. It wasn’t hard to imagine her envisioning Iona on the floor with an ax sticking out of her back if the circumstances were different.

“I see you are troubled that she will ask to take Argus’ place in her sister’s adventuring band. I can speak to her, but I gather you wish for something else?”

“It is our hope that you would officially make Iona your apprentice,” implored Karin.

I cannot say I didn’t see this coming. Admittedly, I had just as much fun teaching her as she did learning new magic, but that was not the problem.

“Mistress Karin, you are aware that my lands are far from here?” Or maybe in another universe or dimensional plane, whatever.

“Yes, my lady. The three of us have spoken about this, and although it might be presumptuous of me to ask, especially with how much you have done for my family already.”

Truthfully, I had no qualms about teaching Iona magic in the future. But from the little I knew how apprenticeship worked, she would more or less become my responsibility. And I still had no idea what brought me here or why. On the other hand, it wouldn’t be terrible to have someone to help me navigate this world either.

Looking around, I smiled. “Mistress Karin, let us speak of this again, perhaps in a more comfortable location. Then the three of us can sit down and go over my responsibilities and what I would expect from Iona if I do decide to take her on as an apprentice.”

--0—

Amice pensively sat as she watched Master Leo examine her betrothed. With her heart in her mouth, she explained, “I was able to treat his wounds, but for some reason, they kept returning. I thought it might have something to do with the again-walker curse since I couldn't remove it either.”

Leo nodded then cast another one of his detection spells, “Was he struck by the one with the battle-ax?”

“I believe so, yes,” worried Amice.

“I thought so. Unfortunately, he took a wound from a revenant.”

Leo ignored the cries around him as he continued to work on the young man. Casting several spells unsuccessfully, he frowned then tried one last time.

“Alright, I was able to halt the progression of the curse” Reaching over, he grabbed Amice's hand, who started to cry in relief. “However, we will still need to take him to Harmon for cleansing as I doubt we will find a potion in Wyndemere.”

Katilia started to say something, but it only came out as a croak.

“Master Leo, I will be forever grateful for not just rescuing us from our own folly but for healing my beloved as well.” Turning to her friends, the healer declared, “I will approach Countess Orebella personally for her supplication to the goddess.”

“I will see what I can do as well, Amice.”

“Thank you, Master Leo, your help is appreciated. Thankfully we set aside money for our wedding in addition to the funds held by the guild in case something like this occurred.”

“I don’t understand,” Iona said perplexed

“It’s very expensive,” her sister explained. “I will help too, plus we still have all of the heart cores we collected.”

Myra turned to Katilia, who laughed, “You have to ask? Of course, we will all help. But if we are going to pay almost twenty gold, wouldn't it be better if we purchased a Cleansing Potion from someone in the guild.”

“Perhaps although with Amice and my contacts in the Healer’s Hall, it might be cheaper to approach Countess Orebella,” speculated Leo surprised that the young scout knew the cost of the ritual.

Iona squeaked. “Is it really that expensive?”

“Katilia isn’t far off,” murmured Amice.

Myra pointed out. “And I doubt the stones we collected could be used in the potion. We would have to post a job for it.”

“Well, there is always the heart core from the basilisk,” Iona proposed.

Leo sighed, “It’s not ours to give niece.”

Myra’s party just sat there with their mouths open until she stammered, “You fought a basilisk?”

“Yes,” Iona grinned then frowned. “Well, not really, Lady Eleanor killed it.”

“We need to think about also paying Master Leo back for the cost of hiring an A-ranked adventurer as well,” marveled Amice.

“So, where did you find her?” Myra looked across the chamber, watching as her aunt, and the noblewomen walked around, stabbing things.

“There is nothing to pay Amice, and we met her while she was staying at the Wayfarer's Rest,” Leo explained.

“And she taught me so much and look at my outfit. She made it for me, “ effused Iona.

“It’s beautiful,” Katilia smiled, running her hand over the fabric.

Leo noticed the woman’s smile didn’t reach her eyes. He couldn’t fault her for the dark thoughts that might be running around in her head from what little he knew of the scout’s past.

“Are you her apprentice?” Myra asked, confused.

“Well, no, “ the young mage said sadly. “ But she taught me several spells.”

Katilia frowned.

“Captain Conrad approached Lady Eleanor to see if she could determine the reason for the increased monster activity on the Albanese Way,” Leo jumped in. “Iona was in the initial meeting as she was looking for other adventurers to help locate your band, Myra.”

“Good thing too, “ Karin commented, causing everyone on the ledge to jump. So intent on their conversation, they didn’t hear the two of us approach.

With our task completed, Karin was amused at how we were able to return to the path twenty feet above. Leap and Descent were a useful bit of magic, especially when you're wearing heavy armor. It also allowed for some exciting combat maneuvers on occasion.

Could I have just used magic to descend from the entrance of the dungeon to the floor? Absolutely, could I have leaped back up? Unfortunately, no, with it being over thirty feet in the air, I still needed a rope.

Karin turned to me and started the introductions as everyone came to their feet. “Lady Eleanor Reine of Avalon, may I introduce my niece Myra.”

Dressed in green leather scale armor, she looked like an older version of her sister. Even with her surprisingly short jet-black hair, I could see the family resemblance in Karin as well. Myra’s weapons looked well kept, which included a self-bow and a footman’s mace attached to her waist.

She gave me a friendly smile as her aunt continued. “To her left is Katilia of Ramsgate.”

The attractive petite woman wearing black leathers stood a little off to the side. I wouldn’t describe her as thin, but wiry came to mind. She, like the others, was well armed with at least two daggers visible and a longsword belted to her waist. When announced, she bobbed a curtsey, “My lady.”

“And finally, may I introduce Healer Amice of Harmon.”

“My lady.” She bowed formally.

In stark contrast to their scout, the stocky woman who looked more like a blacksmith than a healer, stood heads above the rest of the party. She had a falchion on her hip and wore healer’s white under a mixture of chain and cuir-bouilli leather armor. Her eyes were welcoming and full of warmth if a bit forced. Understandable with her intended on the floor beside her.

“How is Warin?”

“Amice did an excellent job keeping him alive,“ Leo nodded to her before walking over to the injured man.

Remembering where Warin’s wound probably came from, I used my healer’s Check Status skill, “But he’s still cursed.”

Leo looked started for a moment, then nodded. “Yes, my lady, I was able to halt its progression but not remove it.”

A Detect Curse spell revealed two hexes, a Life Drain and another, which I only knew too well. When I struck something living with my longsword Marwolaeth, it caused additional necrotic damage and on a critical strike, a large amount of burst damage. The ax’s curse caused continuous necrotic damage, and well, it just felt wrong.

The two curses also seemed to merge in a rather strange way, which I imagine was why Leo could only see one. However, whatever counter-curse spell he used would soon need to be reapplied as it wasn't high enough level to remove the second curse.

“Healer Amice did your betrothed’s wound keep reappearing?”

“Yes, my lady, do you know why?” She looked at her fiancé, concerned.

“It’s a combination of two curses, Leo, a life drain, and a necrotic curse.”

“So the need for healing,” he nodded in understanding, “It’s from the ax.”

“I believe so.”

It wasn’t difficult to see that in Warin’s current condition, that moving him would be dangerous, but we had no choice. So, I now had a difficult decision to make.

Magic-Life had several builds for each class that allowed you to buy skills from other classes. If you wanted to play a Delver healer, you could. It wouldn’t be cheap, but the game did give you that flexibility.

Sometimes it was required to be able to use a specific secondary skill. If a Paladin wanted to brew arcane potions, they had to have eldritch lore. I needed healer’s lore to brew cure potions.

One of the benefits of having a magical fire affinity was that healing wasn’t as expensive as learning, for example, Delving skills. So I ended up buying a few healing spells. Amazingly useful at lower levels and when I went adventuring by myself. Cure Wounds was the most common healer's ability. The next was removing harmful status effects.

Those spells were essential in completing my quest to rescue Gwefrydd. With a castle filled with wights, barrow-wights, wraiths, and at the end a Shadowknight, it seemed I ended up being hexed after almost every encounter.

So removing the two curses wasn’t an issue even if compared to the healers in-game, my ability was subpar. But, did I want to reveal that ability here? My simple adventurer story already lay in tatters. So, not really, I had no desire to add more fuel to the fire if I could help it.

Still, Warin needed to be healed. Luckily, I still had other options. “If I could remove the necrotic curse Leo, could you remove the life drain?”

“We call it the Wasting Curse, but yes.” He and Amice started to smile.

At least I didn’t need to use a Greater Purify potion, which I only had a few left. Lesser Purify might do the job, but I haven't carried those in over six months, so a Purify Potion would have to do.

Reaching into my inventory, I passed the potion to Leo. As he gave it to Warin and then cast his own remove curse, Amice fiancé’s color immediately returned. Unfortunately, unlike Magic-Life, he didn’t just stand up and continue as if nothing happened. The two hexes had wracked his body and spirit. It was going to take time to recover, but at least he was alive.

After hearing about Denis’ fate, there seemed to be no real reason to remain. “Karin?”

Looking at me she smiled, Warin’s recovery had lifted everyone’s spirits. “Yes, my lady.”

“Let’s go home.”

--0--
Author’s Note: So here we are at the end of Volume 1 of The Lost Queen. Luckily, you don’t have to wait months for the new one to show up in your local bookstore.
Volume 2 – We will see more of the kingdom as Eleanor journeys onward. Will she continue to be blissfully unaware of the casual havoc her presence is causing?

What do you think?

I run these chapters through Grammarly ad nauseam, so of course, it still misses things. Therefore, a special thanks to Michelle SidheElf Amaianna and others who have found them then prodded me to fix my errors.

Thanks again for reading. You’re all wonderful.

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MMORPG or RPG Terms
Aggro - As a verb, it refers to a hostile mob that has noticed a player and is actively trying to attack that player. As a noun, it refers to the amount of "hostility" the player has generated on the mob.

Alt - or alternate character is a character in addition to one's "primary" or "Main" player character. In addition, one frequent use is to play characters of opposite gender or to see what new features have been added since they last were on a low-level character.

Buff - refers to preparatory actions taken before combat, usually involving the casting of spells adding additional bonuses to characters.

Burst damage- is a term used to describe dealing high amounts of damage in a brief period of time. Spells that qualify for burst damage are often mana inefficient.

Escort Missions – a job where you have to safeguard an NPC without getting them killed. Now, this wouldn't be so bad except that the NPCs are universally stupid, running ahead and getting killed in the process. Many players despise these types of jobs.

Death Penalty – In real life, death is well permanent. In MMORPG, not so much. Yet death in 99% of MMOs is a mere inconvenience and speed bump — you don’t lose experience, and you don’t lose much of your time.

Guilds - Semi-permanent player groups. In typical games, players must use a substantial amount of capital to start the guild.

Minimap - A mini-map or minimap is a miniature map that is often placed at a screen corner in video games to aid players in orienting themselves within the game world. They are usually only a small portion of the screen and thus must be selective in what details they display.

MMORPG - Massively-Multiplayer Online Role-Playing Game

Mob - An AI-controlled monster.

Noob- Newbie newb noob or n00b is a slang term for a novice or newcomer or somebody inexperienced in a profession or activity. Variant forms of the noun include Newby and newbee, while the related term noob (often stylized as "n00b") is commonly used in online gaming.

Root - Can refer to a class of abilities as well as its effect. A root spell immobilizes a target. The target is then said to be rooted. Early versions of these abilities involved references to plants hence "root."

Spawning - In video games, spawning is the live creation of a character item or NPC. Respawning is the recreation of an entity after its death or destruction, perhaps after losing one of its lives. Despawning is the deletion of a body from the game world.

Tank - A tank or also known as a meat shield, redirect enemy attacks or attention toward themselves to protect others. Typically, the fighter tries to take as much aggro as possible away from weaker players such as healers and mages. Since they can often take a lot of damage, they are usually heavily armored and have lots of health.

Total party kill (TPK) “rocks fall everyone dies” or wipes - a situation in which every player character in a party dies. Factors include player inexperience, insufficient player characters, or encounters too difficult for the party's capabilities.

Weapons & Armor

Chain (mail) - maille is a type of armor consisting of small metal rings linked together in a pattern to form a mesh. It was generally in common military use between the 3rd century BC and the 14th century AD. A coat of this armor is often referred to as a hauberk and sometimes a byrnie.

Cuir bouilli - leather that has been treated so that it became tough and rigid as well as able to hold molded decoration. Cuir bouilli was used for cheap and light armor; although it was much less effective than plate armor, it could be reinforced against slashing blows by the addition of metal bands or strips, especially in helmets.

Falchion - A one-handed single-edged sword of European origin whose design is reminiscent of the Chinese dadao and the modern machete.

Longsword - a type of European sword characterized as having a cruciform hilt with a grip for two-handed use a straight double-edged blade of around 85 to 110 cm and weighing approximately 1 to 1.5 kg.

Scale Armor- (or scale mail) is an early form of armor consisting of many individual small armor scales (plates) of various shapes attached to each other and backing of cloth or leather in overlapping rows. The material used to make the scales varies and included bronze iron steel rawhide leather cuir-bouilli seeds horn or pangolin scales.

Middle Ages Terms:

Bells: Most large communities have some way to keep time useful for travelers and tradesmen heading off to work. Usually, either the Town’s Hall or Healer’s Hall will ring a large bell. It's Midsummer, so the times below will change depending on the time of year and location-

First 2:30 a.m.
Second 3:40 a.m.
Third 7:00 a.m.
Forth 12:20 p.m.
Fifth 3:00 p.m.
Sixth 7:00 p.m.
Seventh 8:20 p.m.
Eighth 9:30 p.m.

The Destrier - was the most expensive horse and were typically owned only by nobles and knights. Destriers were tall horses and were typically only used in battle. Trained to not only bite and kick on command but also to trample fallen enemies. Destriers were not common and, as a result, were highly sought after by knights.

The Palfrey - was used for riding traveling and hunting as well as for ceremonies. Riding a palfrey was much more comfortable and was the favorite riding animal of noblewomen.

The Courser – were fast horses and had good endurance. They were often used by messengers as well as by people who needed to move quickly. Many knights who did not have access to a destrier preferred to ride a courser into battle because it was fast strong and agile.

The Rouncey – often used as a pack animal or even on the farm. It could be trained for war or used as a riding horse and was commonly used by knights who could not afford any of the other horses. A knight would also provide rounceys to his squires and other men at arms.

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Yay

Another wonderful chapter.
I wonder if the dungeon will let them leave so easily? Does Lady Eleanor have enough leftover powerful magical junk to upgrade the protection of the rest of the group to improve their chances of survival. I wonder how that obscene the total value all of that stuff she considers junk is? What about the monster in the lake will they have to deal with it too.
Is split up now hopefully we get discussion.

hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Katalia is trouble

She seems to have her own agenda with Myra and she clearly cannot be trusted, it sounds like she would steal Iona’s outfit given a chance. It is fortunate Eleanor’s inventory is inaccessible.

Warin is hanging by a thread but no miracle cure here.

So Eleanor can provide low level healing, mostly.

Agenda

I think her agenda is they are lesbian lovers because of the blushing.

hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Well we knew that

The other issues with her wanting Myra to become a thief is what is worrying her.

Iona will be a point of sensibility that may get in her way. Look at her frown when Iona showed off her new duds. She should be happy for her but she isn’t.

She is very calculating in her goals and I seriously doubt, as an example, want to help pay for Warin’s treatment.

She is Trouble.

ehh might wanna re-read that

Sadarsa's picture

Myra didn't frown when she was shown her sisters clothes... she tried to smile. The smile just didn't reach her eyes, after-all her fiance was laying there dying on the ground. Not exactly a good time to be talking about your new outfit.

~Your only Limitation is your Imagination~

Nope

I got confused a bit but while Kahlia’s smile did not reach her eyes it was not over her fiancé lying on the ground as it is Amice’s fiancé on the ground. Kahlia frowned when Iona mentioned Eleanor teaching her spells. Now why would Iona getting more competent make her frown?

Motive

Nyssa's picture

I think she's wondering why this powerful noblewoman has taken such an interest in Iona. I think she is worried it is for nefarious or perhaps some other exploitative reason that Iona is too naive to realize. Few people do something for nothing. But few are nearly as awesome as Eleanor...

It’s possible

For her type the idea of doing something for nothing is a foreign concept to her. Just wait until it really sinks into her that she now owes this suspicious noblewoman a life debt for her rescue. I seriously doubt Myra/her could’ve made it out alive if they had to make a break for it.

Sunday

I won't say how many times I looked for this story today. I do, however, want to believe that it was fewer than Willow. 🙂

OK, so Denis is believed dead (although they Never Found the Body), so they have the sensible plan of just leaving the dungeon. We'll see if the dungeon agrees.

Checking for the story.

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I have probably checked about 20 times. I gave up about 20 minutes before the story was posted and then checked one last time before I went to bed. It's worth staying up for.

As for "a sensible plan", yup, just walking easy-peasie out of the dungeon is a possibility. But Eleanor hasn't found out yet what is causing the increase in monsters so from a plot point of view I can see more happening here before they get to walk home.

Monsters

It could also be the labyrinth that is responsible for the increase. I think I checked more than both of you unfortunately.

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Checked more than both of us

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I can believe that. You seem to know this story better than (almost?) anyone else. And you are certainly among the top commenters. One of the things I've noticed about this story is that there are a number of us that are very passionate about this story. It's not just getting a large number of views or comments.

Axe

Knew that axe was trouble, kinda cute that Eleanor is trying to hide her abilities still thou; everyone knows she's is more than meets the eye! Loved Myra's group reaction to the rescue party, already read it twice..
think I'll read it again real soon :)

Loved the ending of this, can't wait for the second part. ETA on when we might see that?

Thank you for a wonderful story :).

Bree

Hiding her abilities

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Actually, I think Eleanor is doing an excellent job at hiding her abilities. Her friends, who have worked with her closely, probably think she is a rather powerful A rank adventurer. Personally, I suspect she is probably more along the line of a shaker of kingdoms and savior of worlds.

And when Amice said “I will approach Countess Orebella personally for her supplication to the goddess.” I couldn't help wondering if Eleanor is going to wind up on a first name basis with this Goddess and if said goddess engineered Eleanor's arrival in this world.

Goddess

I didn’t think of that nice thought,

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Girl has to eat

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Thanks, Bree, Well since this girl still has to eat (and pay bills) will most likely be Sunday again (seems to work for me) What's good though is I am not going out of town again till next year, Thanks for reading!

PS You might see a Glossary early which will be a post of all the terms so i dont have to put them down here over and over again, just the new ones.

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Sundays

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Sundays have become such a good day of the week to look forward to lately.

Havoc

On my first read (yes, I've read it twice) I missed your question at the end, "Will she continue to be blissfully unaware of the casual havoc her presence is causing?"

If you asked Lady Eleanor that question, her response would be a blank :"Havoc? What havoc?", and I see no reason to think that will change, until the moment she takes over some large piece of land, and maybe not even then.

I am amused by her attempts to remain inconspicuous. "I don't want to reveal that I can do heal spells as well. I've got it! I'll just give away a potion instead," either ignorant of or blithely ignoring the fact that a remove curse potion costs 20 gold pieces. And that might be the cost of the Lessor Purify potion, not the Purify potion she used.

I also liked the way Iona asked her in an earlier chapter if the dungeon was like other castles, and Eleanor just gave an answer, thereby confirming that yes, Eleanor knows what castles are like.

Cry Havoc

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I believe the term is blissfully unaware. :)

I'm glad that someone caught the castle discussion :)

Thanks for reading!

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

LOL

She has no chance of not being recognized for what she is capable of anymore than people realizing that the sky is blue. I assume it is blue, right? I know some fantasy worlds say otherwise.

Also, it will be interesting to see what happens when she inevitably meets other nobles and the subject of titles pops up, be it her parents or what not. She better have a story ready ^_^

A good story.

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She has already repeatedly said that that she comes from somewhere that is so far away that no one recognizes the places shes described and that she does not recognize the names and descriptions of the local countries. And she has repeated said that she is just an adventurer, has never claimed to be a noble. In fact, I believe she has denied being a noble now and then.

Unless she finds herself in a situation where she is required to tell the truth under oath, then I think there will be no problem. Why should she be required to prove that she is or is not a noble or that the country she comes from exists?

Nobility

In another book I've read, the King had recently elevated one of the characters. The new minted Lady was talking with a Lady from an old family, who said to her "Nobility isn't granted, it is recognized."

Perhaps it's a bit idealistic, but everyone she meets recognizes Eleanor is a noble, only her rank is in question.

Regular potion of healing

Based on 5e is 50 gold pieces. A remove curse potion might even be higher.

A greater healing potion is in the hundreds.

Whether that is what was the cost to Eleanor is not clear as according to Elsbeth, some of the potions in her inventory was made by her and some were bought. Her potion skill is not her strongest suit so I suspect the regular Purify potion might’ve been made by her and any greater purifies were purchased.

There are two higher levels of healing potions beyond’ ‘greater’ but they come with eye wateringly high prices aside from being extremely rare to begin with.

Inventory

Until now, I had not realized just how valuable Eleanor's inventory is. We knew that she had a lot of stuff, but not the monetary value of it. The Purify potion makes it clear. She has a lot of Purify potions. They are worth at least 20 gold pieces each; if it is the Lessor Purify that is worth 20 gold pieces, who knows how much a Purify potion goes for, to say nothing of the few Greater Purifies she has. And purify is only one sort of potion she has; she certainly has healing and mana potions, and very likely buffing potions as well. So her potions alone are worth tens of thousands of gold pieces, if not more. Then there is all her other stuff. I would be very surprised if the value of her inventory is less than a million gold pieces, and would not be shocked if it is more than ten million. These figures do not count the value of a certain sword and crown, because those two items would never go up for sale.

Of course, one of the reasons I had not realized the value of Eleanor's inventory was that she has not realized how valuable it is.

I think she has some idea

Remember, she mentioned she had no need for money in Chapter 8.

Aside from that, her inventory contains her share of the elder dragon’s hoard.

I would say 100 million is conservative.

Wealth

End game mmo characters tend to accumulate wealth to great degrees. Millions to tens or hundreds of millions in coinage that just accumulates since, once geared, they don't have to spend as much.
Plus all the "junk" loot from the end game raid, killing an Elder Dragon, creatures famous for hoards.
They were in the beta, but I suspect Eleanor still has an economy-wreckingly large amount of wealth.

That is what I suspected

I still remember the old DnD cartoon series. Divvied up 40 ways would still be a huge amount as the lair holds 100s and 100s of cubic meters of the stuff. Yep, she is like a multi-billionaire in our terms walking around. If her guild members were yanked over too, they would be an economic force to be reckoned with.

But then, she is a queen, though, even that hoard is not enough to support a country without some kind of taxation.

End game Characters

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So true, I have several high-level PC in a popular MMORPG and the amount of junk I have in my inventory is absurd. Between the inventory, bags and gods guild banks and we never throw away stuff. (Eleanor is the same way) And who has the time to go through it all.

We tend to be pack rats too. Every play Skyrim or Fallout and have the pressing need to pick up everything even if you know you will never use it :)

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Inventory

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I've been playing Elder Scrolls Online since it's beta days a good 5 years ago. Last year I bought a second account so I could store more stuff. My main account only has room for 480 items in the bank, 200 items on each character (I have 8 characters but could create 10 more) and 360 items in house storage chests. I "needed" more space. And that's after I got rid of the junk.

As for wealth, in the early months I struggled and frequently failed to come up with 250 gold for a daily riding lesson. These days I casually spend 200,000 gold to stock up on stuff. My big ticket items cost a lot more.

I have recently started exploring end game (i.e. difficult) fighting. I am busy collecting stronger equipment so I can enter the more dangerous areas and get even stronger equipment. They don't let other players sell the really good stuff to you, you have to go fight for it yourself.

What killed Denis?

So from what I can tell, it was not a wight that killed Denis then what was it?

Also, what created that heavy duty magical seal on that door beyond Argus’s spell level to Unlock?

Seal

I think the dungeon (labyrinth) itself created the seal.

Maybe

There was no indication of the strength of the lock when Eleanor removed it though subsequent conversation seems to indicate the one she removed was doable by a low level mage.

I am guessing once they killed the wights that the labyrinth realized even the heavy seal wouldn’t be sufficient to contain them a left it as a casual seal?

Actually, the story made it clear that the lock was weak.

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From chapter 8:

“The magical lock shouldn’t have been that difficult to disenchant. “

With a little practice, Iona could have dispelled that magical lock. Why was Argus, who was of a higher rank, not been able to? Did he not have Dispel Magic?

The lock

They said in this chapter that the only reason they explored further was that Argus could dispel the lock so the dungeon clearly made the lock harder to trap them.

We tried to make it back to the stairs, but Argus couldn’t remove the enchantment on the door.”

“Was he able to before,” Leo asked half-listening while he looked over Warin.

“Yes, Master Leo, we made sure of it before we searched this floor.”

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Oops. Sorry.

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You're right. It's obvious that the lock got a lot stronger once the first group was trapped on the other side. I forgot to mention that in my comment.

And I think it's quite likely that something in the labyrinth deliberately did this to trap them.

I also think it is likely that, now that a landslide has opened an entrance to the labyrinth this same entity, possible a living labrynth, is sending it's minions out to explore the surface world.

love this story,

love this story,
I wonder what happened in Katilia's past, hopefully we'll find out in the second book

Katilia

I suspect that Katilia is, like Eleanor, from "another plane".

Perhaps she is another of the original game testers? After all, no-one looks like their Earth equivalents.

Or, she could be from somewhere else, drawn in the same way that Eleanor was.

Penny

Game testers

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Eleanor looks like her avatar and has the same name. Her avatar was famous in the game. So she should be instantly recognizable to any beta tester. But I do agree that, like Eleanor, Katilia has too many skills and is way too good for them for her apparent background.

Eagle Empire

I wonder if Katilia is also from the Eagle Empire maybe an assassin for the crown.

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

its a good read so far

but...end of book one? I saw that and immediately thought say what?

no offense but its a little short for a book. Just saying....

End of book one. Start of book two.

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Elsbeth mentioned in an earlier comment that she is hoping to publish the first chapter of book 2 on Sunday. A mere 5 days of torturous waiting left to go. Plus however much longer it actually takes because real life has a habit of getting in the way.

Japanese novella

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Hi

I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for length, I agree (although this length would fit into a novella). Since I mentioned I started writing this because of watching (reading) several Isakai anime, I decided to do it as an homage to Japanese Light Novels (wasei-eigo (literally translated “Japanese-made English”) which are about this length. They tend to break their stories up into story arcs although there are exceptions.

Thanks for reading!

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Healing potion

Just to be sure of my understanding, is Eleanor’s supply of healing potions purchased or created by her?

There was mention of needing healer’s lore vs eldritch lore but that does not tell me whether she had the former.

If all her potions are purchased then that means mana cores will need to be purchased or gathered and her basilisk core may still be needed by her against future needs.

Just to be sure of my

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Just to be sure of my understanding, is Eleanor’s supply of healing potions purchased or created by her?

Yes, purchased in-game, yes made by her, none bought in the village

There was mention of needing healer’s lore vs eldritch lore but that does not tell me whether she had the former.

She's a mage, eldritch lore she got for free. Healer's lore she bought.

If all her potions are purchased then that means mana cores will need to be purchased or gathered and her basilisk core may still be needed by her against future needs.

good question :) ; she didnt need them for scroll making though

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Lack of need for mana stones

This could be an issue though if people discover that as that means she has the ability to tap into an alternative fuel source or can power abilities possibly through her own mana pool, maybe? If that is the case she may be constantly sought after for this and that knowing she in a sense has the motherlode of mana that I assume regenerates.

Anyway, so how is mana stored in the user in this reality then? In-game it is a magical resource stored, drawn, regenerated, energy-like from some external source or possibly from metabolic means. Is that mana pool expandable by a novice user for example.

So, do all magic users here have a mana stone in them too or will Eleanor be unique in not needing one? We know she does not need to incant to spellcast so is that unique? Iona is the only basis for comparison we have at the moment.

Interesting.

iona

Could be also the way she was taught :).

Yay 2

Also Lady Eleanor is kidding herself thinking they don’t realize how amazing she is. I don’t think her having a potion is much of a surprise but she already showed she is better at detecting curses than Leo is. Eleanor just pulled a potion that’s ridiculously expensive and saved Warin. She has done everything so far for free without asking for a single thing,

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Nobles

Makes you wonder what the reports to the Duchess is going to look like ... lol.... She did it for free... just because... she just happened to have a very expensive potion on hand... and just offered it... oh yeah... that's going to be fun reading there... OH and she kills monsters for a hobby... hehehe

Giggling now.

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You describe things so well.

Yay 3

I wonder if she can levitate Warin out of the dungeon like on Amice’s shield like a stretcher? When they get back to town tales of how amazing she is are going to spread like wildfire. What about the mission from the captain to find the cause of the monster surge? Also couldn’t Eleanor recover what’s left of Denis’ body and get justice for him?

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Eleanor may dislike bragging,

Eleanor may dislike bragging, but it isn't bragging if you're talking about someone else. Like say talking about how your companion easily overwhelmed a basilisk, casually killed 3 or 4 again walkers, killed ratkin by the score with magic, then gave away a pricey potion without asking for payment at all. May the gods bless such a generous soul. :-D

Though Karin and Leo will no doubt also be debriefed by the Captain, and everything they noticed sent on to the Baroness. Did the captain ever hear about the spirit horse? I think they were still camped together at that point.

The captain

The captain went out to the fields with the workers, but Marcus was there for that conversation.

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Complications

I would assume being A rank adventurer, for that is what people think of her, will make her a minor celebrity but not make people swarm over her. Oh, btw you forgot about her taking out 3 forest skitters in one go, killed a 1000 pound charging wild boar (and wild boars can run REALLY fast btw) with one precision sword strike, casually wiped out two vargr at once, some biographer you are! ^_~

Seriously though, she really needs a personal guard to keep a perimeter around her lest she be overwhelmed by attention.

Her generosity is the greater problem imho as rumors of her wealth will spread rapidly and she will get more requests for boons than ever before.

That will make her life a misery and maybe impel her to hit the road to avoid it that much sooner.

I wonder if she has a spell to disguise herself as her appearance alone will single her out, her being blonde and all.

Disguise

Well, to a degree, she wants to be recognized. In the event any of her guildmates came over as well.

But, yes, such casualness with wealth will attract less savory types who will try to take advantage. Though I don't think she'd have much to worry about common muggers.

Unsavory types

I am pretty sure the unsavory types would find her too hard of a target to go after at least not in force.

No, I am just thinking the common beggars and desperate people alone. Picture going through poorer or even not so poor areas in India, even common tourists get swarmed. Wherever she stays there will be people asking for money.

An escort is what is needed to keep such riffraff away.

Look, like it or not there will always people who will always have there hands out trying to take advantage of people. To be blunt, even Iona and her family have their hands out, looking for some advantage be it a very valuable apprenticeship for Iona, or people doing stupid things expecting or begging other people to bail them out. She does not owe everyone who approaches her, her help.

Ironically it is a pain in the butt being rich.

Beggars and desperate people

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Eleanor was the one that decided to start teaching Iona so it is quite reasonable for her sister to explore the idea of a more formal arrangement. That is definitely not begging. The captain asked Eleanor to keep an eye out for useful information but did not ask her to go out of her way to collect it. Again, I would not consider this begging but a very reasonable request of an official. Iona asking for help might be considered as begging but all Iona did was explain her problem and ask for any help or advise that Eleanor was willing to give. I think Iona got a whopping lot more than she expected.

But, yes, as word gets around there will be umpteen beggars, desperate people and scam artists that will target her. Fortunately this world has the populations and communications typical of the middle ages. Barring the nobles and the locals, how many people will even hear of and believe in her exploits to make the effort to travel to her town, in a world where most people have never traveled further than the neighboring village, barring soldiers conscripted for war. Now if she moves to a big city and answers her doorbell personally and eats regularly at her favorite restaurant, then, yes, problems will occur.

I think Eleanor is going to wind up getting asked for favours and help many times a month but she is not likely to be swarmed with crowds on a regular basis.

Yay 4

I’m pretty sure Myra and Katilia are lovers and I really doubt Myra would tolerate stealing from her sister. I wonder if Lady Eleanor will want the heart cores or not everyone else could end up pretty rich. I’m also curious how many thousands of mithril coins she has probably enough to buy a kingdom.

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Yay 5

I bet the Baroness is going to rush back when she hears what amazing guest she has in her lands, I wonder who will join her. Hopefully one of her guild members ended up there, hopefully her cousin Eleanor could use the support. I had a thought and I’m really curious what other hidden talents that Lady Eleanor has that could really impress everyone

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I'm of two minds about others

I'm of two minds about others showing up. I would like to see her cousin show up, and maybe a few of her most loyal knights, perhaps that first group that swore fealty to her straight out of the gate.

Someone has to drop the Princess bomb. Just after Iona is taken on as her apprentice, to fully enjoy that "oh no, what have we done" feeling. ;-)

Her loyal knights

A vote for having them transfer is they will provide the personal guard she really needs, not for protection but as I mentioned in another comment above, to keep excessive attention on her.

Kathy or Contessa

I think she could use her cousin’s company more than anything especially when that time comes. I wonder if a suitable husband would be among those that come. So Eleanor and her cousin could be each other’s maids of honor.

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Husband

It has been hinted at by the fact she has no need for birth control herbs that she has no interest in a husband.

Yup.

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I would love her cousin to turn up in the story at some point, or possible the entire guild party that was porting. It would make a fun read. But we are already having an enormously fun read. We don't need the cousin or the guild members to keep the story fun and interesting.

So yup, I am also of too minds. I want to read what happens if they show up and I want to read what happens if they don't show up. But I don't want them to show up too soon. I'd like to see her meet the Baroness, get established with the guild, and possibly meet the nobles and the royal court, before the guild shows up to help her with a some really big problem that hasn't been hinted at yet. You know, some problem big enough that a Goddess would summon a heroine into the world to save the day.

Yay 6

I’m also really curious if they are just going to break the rules here and make her a ranked A adventurer straight off after hearing the stories. Additionally I wonder if Lady Eleanor even needs the heart cores to make potions her rune skill still works. I am also curious if her magic skill has gone up since she arrived in this world those fireballs were impressive. Anyone have any thoughts on these questions?

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Magic skill

Well, if she tinkers with a spell to use less mana to power it, does that change the level of the spell?

So is the level of a spell strictly mana based or if the type of spell is the main determinant of it’s level?

Probably

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It would make more sense to rank spells based on how experienced and powerful the sorceress has to be in order to cast it, not on how useful or powerful it's effects are. If Eleanor can create a spell that will instantly wipe out all of the undead in an area of a football field that Iona can learn in several days and can cast with little effort then it's an apprentice level spell. An extremely useful apprentice level spell that most magic users would want in to learn.

Guild ranking rules

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Would it break the guild rules on the determination of adventurer ranking? I got the impression that basically a senior guild member would assign a rank based apparent skills and exploits. There has been no mention of having to complete a specific number of quests or killing of a certain number of monsters of a certain difficulty.

If I remember correctly, single handedly killing of the three scorpions thingies placed her as a rank B adventurer at a minimum in the eyes of a number of people who ought to know. Killing the basilisk in a quick and essentially single handed fight is probably beyond the abilities of most rank A adventurers. Once her exploits are described and verified I suspect the guild officials will promptly declare her a rank A adventurer, but only because there is no rank higher than A to place her at.

Guild rank

This is from chapter 3
He must have seen the confusion in my face. “The Adventurers Guild in the southern kingdoms ranks their members using a letter system. A new adventurer normally starts with a rank of F while our Kingdom’s elite adventurers are ranked A. I have heard that other countries further north use colors or metals.”

“So, how do adventures progress in rank?” Not that anyone would be getting experience points. It’s only something you get in a game.

The merchant nodding in understanding and explained, “By the number of jobs they fulfill. Although for each rank, the number needed to progress increases.”

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Guild rank exceptions

A key word in that quote is "normally." That implies that there are exceptions. I am sure that Eleanor would qualify for at least one of them.

Ranking sounds confusing

On the one hand you can fulfill hundreds of missions against threats no worse than say a single forest skiiter, does that mean that you qualify to be A ranked or if you only did 20 missions and killed basilisks, barrow wights and maybe a dragon, for fun?

I think there has to be more flexible rules especially if you are deemed a foreigner and now has to Qualify?

Finally, a traditional fight to submission with an acknowledged A rank of the same type as she is should be a reasonable proxy for lack of mission track history.

Rankings

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I will just note, the explanation given to her was from a merchant not someone from the adventurers guild. ie someone who isn't an adventurer

Hope that helps :)

Thanks for reading.

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Rankings

Does that mean there could be rankings higher than A class or that A class is divided into tiers?

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

Probably not

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There are probably not enough adventurers that are significantly better than the typical rank A adventurer to require a formal ranking. When you need someone better than a typical rank A adventurer you probably just say something like "This is a job for... Super-Eleanor!!!" In other words you are thinking of individuals at this point in creating your plans, not thinking "insert generic rank A mage here".

P.S. I don't know if anybody's noticed but it's Friday and we are now only two days away from when the next chapter might come out. YAY!

On track

Elsbeth says she is on track for a Sunday release.

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

A rank

It has been hinted that A Ranks are kinda hard to find to begin with so I would guess extra tiers are unnecessary, of course if you do something truly incredible they might append a title of note, say Lady Eleanor, The Dragon Slayer.

Dragon Slayer

It needs to be Elder Dragon Slayer.

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Michelle SidheElf Amaianna

I have just finished rereading this entire story - again.

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And Sunday is a mere 31 minutes away in my part of the world.

So I am primed and ready to get up tomorrow and start refreshing the BCTS home page a ridiculous number of times. Yay!

It's you!

You're the one who's been bringing the site down today, then?

Had several dump-outs from Cloudflare during a number of visit attempts.

Giggles

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I don't think I clicked quite that often.

Dunno how I missed this one!

I kept waiting for the next chapter to come out, but for some reason it slipped right on by me. lol. Luckily I've finally been able to read it. Thanks Elsbeth! As an author you truly have a professional pedigree. ^,~

Thanks

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Thank you, I'm happy your enjoying the story.

-Elsbeth

Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.

Broken Irish is better than clever English.

Merry Christmas every one.

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I hope you all had a warm and toasty (but not overly toasty) Christmas.

Meme_fireball.jpg

Oh, dear.

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And I posted this right before the year 2020 started.